Comments for Improvement

comments po para maimprove ko pa mga sir.

aesonck wrote:comments po para maimprove ko pa mga sir.

-Change title for improvement.
thanks

Natawa naman ako dito. That's correct, at least from the title itself it should be properly written.

Comments:

1. Show the full house in camera, make it in eye level. Try to shift the camera on the left, looking on the left side of the house.
2. Color hues of vegetation and composition.
3. Avoid repetitive mapping: sidewalk, etc.

That's it for now.

kurdaps! wrote:

aesonck wrote:comments po para maimprove ko pa mga sir.

-Change title for improvement.
thanks

Natawa naman ako dito. That's correct, at least from the title itself it should be properly written.

Comments:

1. Show the full house in camera, make it in eye level. Try to shift the camera on the left, looking on the left side of the house.
2. Color hues of vegetation and composition.
3. Avoid repetitive mapping: sidewalk, etc.

That's it for now.

-yup master daps..., baka madagdagan ni master cloud ang thread.ahe..

sorry mga sir

salamat.
meron pa pala.

AlanJamesAmador wrote:sorry mga sir

salamat.
meron pa pala.

imho.. mas ok tong angle na to kaysa sa nauna

- add light fixtures

- replace texture of road

ito optional lang.. adjust the sun angle a little bit para makita yung shadows ng trellis

camera ibaba nten sir, 8ft tall ata na mans eye view ito hehe, and clouds medyo kulang yung brightness, the rest approve sir

may binago ako mga sir.
di ko na po nalagyan ng light fixtures.sorry.

sir add ko lang po sa comment yung sky and main light na ginamit ay hindi magkamatch. try using dome vraylight with hdri. thanks for posting.

mammoo_03 wrote:sir add ko lang po sa comment yung sky and main light na ginamit ay hindi magkamatch. try using dome vraylight with hdri. thanks for posting.

pano po yan??

AlanJamesAmador wrote:

mammoo_03 wrote:sir add ko lang po sa comment yung sky and main light na ginamit ay hindi magkamatch. try using dome vraylight with hdri. thanks for posting.

pano po yan??

next time padi, include your workflow like: su-vray-PS or su-3dsmax-vray or cad-3dsmax-vray,,etc.
master mamoo thought you did this inside 3ds max because his suggestion is only applicable inside 3ds max. vray dome light is
used in 3dsmax -vray.
anyway, nice render!tibay na talaga. yung latest update too much post processing hehe. anyway keep posting!

sir try to work your cam angle sir ,,, tfs