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room for improvement!
pagbati sa inyo mga cgpips!muna saken...pano ko ba intriduce ung gawa ko na walang masusuway na rules...gawa ito sa SU+Vray...c&c is most welcome...ano pa ba?hmmmmmm....hope maimprove ko pa mga gawa ko in the near future!salamat sa cgpinoy!
Last edited by bokkins on Mon Feb 09, 2009 10:48 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : wala yatang picture....)
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
wlng image sir!!! oh pc ko lng problma
reggie0711- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1680
Age : 42
Location : palaboy laboy sa singapore
Registration date : 31/10/2008
Re: room for improvement!
un nga sir...sensya...away pa yata...hehehhee...di pa daw pede...pano ba sir?sinunod ko naman instruction baka may namiss ako...
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
sir di nyo pc prob!ako may prob....nyahahahhha...try ko ulit mga sir!
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
good morning sir, first sir edit mo post and lagay mo yung image sa starter page mo.. this will help you sell your thread more to your visitors
here's my cc..
- ies? to strong, and may illumination pero it seems walang source (vraylightmaterials can help you here)
- materials need extra attention..(reflection, diffuse details for books, carpet needs a little bump or vraydisplacement can fit here perfectly)
- medyo bitin yung illumination to match your mood (pin lights, LCD)
- camera angle (i recommend set mo sa average eye level ~ 1550-1650mm)
practice makes perfect
here's my cc..
- ies? to strong, and may illumination pero it seems walang source (vraylightmaterials can help you here)
- materials need extra attention..(reflection, diffuse details for books, carpet needs a little bump or vraydisplacement can fit here perfectly)
- medyo bitin yung illumination to match your mood (pin lights, LCD)
- camera angle (i recommend set mo sa average eye level ~ 1550-1650mm)
practice makes perfect
dpyxl- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 577
Age : 43
Location : Bahrain
Registration date : 16/10/2008
Re: room for improvement!
i'm not a SK user pero suggest ko lang is give more illumination sa scene mo.. some camera correction issue ALSO improve the BG as well..Sa ngayun ok lang ito, bsta keep practicing.. wag ka magaapura na maging magaling..Take your time, makukuha mo din yan..Lhat naman tayo dumaan sa ganito..This not bad for 1st post bro..Keep practicing nlang and goodluck!!
Re: room for improvement!
ayun nkta na... hmm.. ok nmn scene na toh... madilim nga lng tulad ng sbi nla sir... ska sir low res lng b toh.. kita kse ung pixel eh.... and ung bg di malinaw... prng painting...
reggie0711- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1680
Age : 42
Location : palaboy laboy sa singapore
Registration date : 31/10/2008
Re: room for improvement!
good morning sir, first sir edit mo post and lagay mo yung image sa starter page mo.. this will help you sell your thread more to your visitors
here's my cc..
- ies? to strong, and may illumination pero it seems walang source (vraylightmaterials can help you here)
- materials need extra attention..(reflection, diffuse details for books, carpet needs a little bump or vraydisplacement can fit here perfectly)
- medyo bitin yung illumination to match your mood (pin lights, LCD)
- camera angle (i recommend set mo sa average eye level ~ 1550-1650mm)
practice makes perfect
thnx sir!ies...hehehhehehehe,ano poh un?
i'm not a SK user pero suggest ko lang is give more illumination sa scene mo.. some camera correction issue ALSO improve the BG as well..Sa ngayun ok lang ito, bsta keep practicing.. wag ka magaapura na maging magaling..Take your time, makukuha mo din yan..Lhat naman tayo dumaan sa ganito..This not bad for 1st post bro..Keep practicing nlang and goodluck!!
thnx sir!BG?hehehehehe...ano un?
ayun nkta na... hmm.. ok nmn scene na toh... madilim nga lng tulad ng sbi nla sir... ska sir low res lng b toh.. kita kse ung pixel eh.... and ung bg di malinaw... prng painting...
thnx sir!low res lang sya kasi medyo mahina pc ko...hehehhehe,sinadya ko na madilim kasi medyo kinakapa ko pa at takot pa ako sa maliwanag na area...
here's my cc..
- ies? to strong, and may illumination pero it seems walang source (vraylightmaterials can help you here)
- materials need extra attention..(reflection, diffuse details for books, carpet needs a little bump or vraydisplacement can fit here perfectly)
- medyo bitin yung illumination to match your mood (pin lights, LCD)
- camera angle (i recommend set mo sa average eye level ~ 1550-1650mm)
practice makes perfect
thnx sir!ies...hehehhehehehe,ano poh un?
i'm not a SK user pero suggest ko lang is give more illumination sa scene mo.. some camera correction issue ALSO improve the BG as well..Sa ngayun ok lang ito, bsta keep practicing.. wag ka magaapura na maging magaling..Take your time, makukuha mo din yan..Lhat naman tayo dumaan sa ganito..This not bad for 1st post bro..Keep practicing nlang and goodluck!!
thnx sir!BG?hehehehehe...ano un?
ayun nkta na... hmm.. ok nmn scene na toh... madilim nga lng tulad ng sbi nla sir... ska sir low res lng b toh.. kita kse ung pixel eh.... and ung bg di malinaw... prng painting...
thnx sir!low res lang sya kasi medyo mahina pc ko...hehehhehe,sinadya ko na madilim kasi medyo kinakapa ko pa at takot pa ako sa maliwanag na area...
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
hi ser jenaro.. if you're aiming for night scene... you can light up your ceiling lamp hanging there... those two wall lamps cannot compensate your overall lighting to your scene even though you strengthen up those IES... other comments been said sir... not BAD for a first post... right practice at the right time sir.. makukuha mo din yan... goodluck po
Re: room for improvement!
thnx!un lang pala ung BG...hehehhehehheh...ok sir thnx!sabi nga ng kasama ko kulang pa daw sa landi...may maiimprove pa daw...
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
hi ser jenaro.. if you're aiming for night scene... you can light up your ceiling lamp hanging there... those two wall lamps cannot compensate your overall lighting to your scene even though you strengthen up those IES... other comments been said sir... not BAD for a first post... right practice at the right time sir.. makukuha mo din yan... goodluck po
Thnx sir!yes i get it...ung dalawang pin light ko eh di sapat un para magmukhang may ilaw ang room...un ba un sir?IES....ano poh un sir...
Thnx sir!yes i get it...ung dalawang pin light ko eh di sapat un para magmukhang may ilaw ang room...un ba un sir?IES....ano poh un sir...
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
jenaro wrote:pagbati sa inyo mga cgpips!muna saken...pano ko ba intriduce ung gawa ko na walang masusuway na rules...gawa ito sa SU+Vray...c&c is most welcome...ano pa ba?hmmmmmm....hope maimprove ko pa mga gawa ko in the near future!salamat sa cgpinoy!
Bro musta? Ummm mukha nmn gusto tlga mtuto s Rendering eh.
Dami dto mgaling dont worry sir...Simple tips lng sir na tips dn to dati s akin ng mga master dto s cgp..Bago k ka mag start
sir I render m muna ang scene n wlang material hanggat maari puro diffault white mate muna. Pra ma tantsa m ang lighting m s loob bago m sya lagyan ng material. Make simple scene muna until ma perfect m n. Pangalawa try to use Vray light plane Khit saan angle kung saan k convinient to enlighten ur scene but be sure n invisible lng sya hah medyo mdilim kc sya eh.Mukhang model m lhat to ah wla k b archimodels? Aniwe nice attitude kc dto s cgp halos lhat pare parehas ang model kc iisa lng pinagkukunan archimodels hehehe...
Sna makatulong sir...
AUSTRIA- CGP Le Corbusier
- Number of posts : 2422
Age : 45
Location : Abu Dhabi UAE
Registration date : 19/09/2008
Re: room for improvement!
jenaro wrote:hi ser jenaro.. if you're aiming for night scene... you can light up your ceiling lamp hanging there... those two wall lamps cannot compensate your overall lighting to your scene even though you strengthen up those IES... other comments been said sir... not BAD for a first post... right practice at the right time sir.. makukuha mo din yan... goodluck po
Thnx sir!yes i get it...ung dalawang pin light ko eh di sapat un para magmukhang may ilaw ang room...un ba un sir?IES....ano poh un sir...
yeah sir thats right ung ies (Illuminating Engineering Society) = The IES data format is an internationally accepted data format used for describing the light distribution of luminaires. It can be used in numerous lighting design, calculation and simulation programs. The data is provided as a complete archive; however, a specific selection according to the technical environment and individual product range is also possible. As per ERCO describes
Re: room for improvement!
hi sir jenaro..not bad for the 1st time post..
yup..sundin mo lng mga comments nila at try mo
rin mag browse2x s net regarding sa rendering.
lots of tutorials on the net too.
practice lng ng practice sir. makukuha rin natin yan.
post pa more sir!!!
yup..sundin mo lng mga comments nila at try mo
rin mag browse2x s net regarding sa rendering.
lots of tutorials on the net too.
practice lng ng practice sir. makukuha rin natin yan.
post pa more sir!!!
cubi_o:- The Hobbyist
- Number of posts : 1210
Registration date : 21/09/2008
Re: room for improvement!
Bro musta? Ummm mukha nmn gusto tlga mtuto s Rendering eh.
Dami dto mgaling dont worry sir...Simple tips lng sir na tips dn to dati s akin ng mga master dto s cgp..Bago k ka mag start
sir I render m muna ang scene n wlang material hanggat maari puro diffault white mate muna. Pra ma tantsa m ang lighting m s loob bago m sya lagyan ng material. Make simple scene muna until ma perfect m n. Pangalawa try to use Vray light plane Khit saan angle kung saan k convinient to enlighten ur scene but be sure n invisible lng sya hah medyo mdilim kc sya eh.Mukhang model m lhat to ah wla k b archimodels? Aniwe nice attitude kc dto s cgp halos lhat pare parehas ang model kc iisa lng pinagkukunan archimodels hehehe...
Sna makatulong sir...
thnx sir sa tips!un din sabi saken ng iba...archimodels?wala yata ako nun....modeller kasi ako,now lang ako shift sa rendering...I can do all things through Christ which strengtheneth meSFC ba kayo sir?
Dami dto mgaling dont worry sir...Simple tips lng sir na tips dn to dati s akin ng mga master dto s cgp..Bago k ka mag start
sir I render m muna ang scene n wlang material hanggat maari puro diffault white mate muna. Pra ma tantsa m ang lighting m s loob bago m sya lagyan ng material. Make simple scene muna until ma perfect m n. Pangalawa try to use Vray light plane Khit saan angle kung saan k convinient to enlighten ur scene but be sure n invisible lng sya hah medyo mdilim kc sya eh.Mukhang model m lhat to ah wla k b archimodels? Aniwe nice attitude kc dto s cgp halos lhat pare parehas ang model kc iisa lng pinagkukunan archimodels hehehe...
Sna makatulong sir...
thnx sir sa tips!un din sabi saken ng iba...archimodels?wala yata ako nun....modeller kasi ako,now lang ako shift sa rendering...I can do all things through Christ which strengtheneth meSFC ba kayo sir?
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
jenaro wrote:
hi ser jenaro.. if you're aiming for night scene... you can light up your ceiling lamp hanging there... those two wall lamps cannot compensate your overall lighting to your scene even though you strengthen up those IES... other comments been said sir... not BAD for a first post... right practice at the right time sir.. makukuha mo din yan... goodluck po
Thnx sir!yes i get it...ung dalawang pin light ko eh di sapat un para magmukhang may ilaw ang room...un ba un sir?IES....ano poh un sir...
yeah sir thats right ung ies (Illuminating Engineering Society) = The IES data format is an internationally accepted data format used for describing the light distribution of luminaires. It can be used in numerous lighting design, calculation and simulation programs. The data is provided as a complete archive; however, a specific selection according to the technical environment and individual product range is also possible. As per ERCO describes
thnx sir sa explaination...hehehhehehe,dumugo ilong ko sa mga terms...hehehheehe aralin ko un sir....thnx again!
hi ser jenaro.. if you're aiming for night scene... you can light up your ceiling lamp hanging there... those two wall lamps cannot compensate your overall lighting to your scene even though you strengthen up those IES... other comments been said sir... not BAD for a first post... right practice at the right time sir.. makukuha mo din yan... goodluck po
Thnx sir!yes i get it...ung dalawang pin light ko eh di sapat un para magmukhang may ilaw ang room...un ba un sir?IES....ano poh un sir...
yeah sir thats right ung ies (Illuminating Engineering Society) = The IES data format is an internationally accepted data format used for describing the light distribution of luminaires. It can be used in numerous lighting design, calculation and simulation programs. The data is provided as a complete archive; however, a specific selection according to the technical environment and individual product range is also possible. As per ERCO describes
thnx sir sa explaination...hehehhehehe,dumugo ilong ko sa mga terms...hehehheehe aralin ko un sir....thnx again!
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
hi sir jenaro..not bad for the 1st time post..
yup..sundin mo lng mga comments nila at try mo
rin mag browse2x s net regarding sa rendering.
lots of tutorials on the net too.
practice lng ng practice sir. makukuha rin natin yan.
post pa more sir!!!
Tnx sir!may manual na din ako ng SU+VRAY kaso lng di ako familiar sa mga terms and procedures...maraming maraming salamat sir!
yup..sundin mo lng mga comments nila at try mo
rin mag browse2x s net regarding sa rendering.
lots of tutorials on the net too.
practice lng ng practice sir. makukuha rin natin yan.
post pa more sir!!!
Tnx sir!may manual na din ako ng SU+VRAY kaso lng di ako familiar sa mga terms and procedures...maraming maraming salamat sir!
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
jenaro wrote:Bro musta? Ummm mukha nmn gusto tlga mtuto s Rendering eh.
Dami dto mgaling dont worry sir...Simple tips lng sir na tips dn to dati s akin ng mga master dto s cgp..Bago k ka mag start
sir I render m muna ang scene n wlang material hanggat maari puro diffault white mate muna. Pra ma tantsa m ang lighting m s loob bago m sya lagyan ng material. Make simple scene muna until ma perfect m n. Pangalawa try to use Vray light plane Khit saan angle kung saan k convinient to enlighten ur scene but be sure n invisible lng sya hah medyo mdilim kc sya eh.Mukhang model m lhat to ah wla k b archimodels? Aniwe nice attitude kc dto s cgp halos lhat pare parehas ang model kc iisa lng pinagkukunan archimodels hehehe...
Sna makatulong sir...
thnx sir sa tips!un din sabi saken ng iba...archimodels?wala yata ako nun....modeller kasi ako,now lang ako shift sa rendering...I can do all things through Christ which strengtheneth meSFC ba kayo sir?
FCC FILIPINO CHRISTIAN CHURCH po!!! bkit ikaw din b? s abudhabi po ako...
AUSTRIA- CGP Le Corbusier
- Number of posts : 2422
Age : 45
Location : Abu Dhabi UAE
Registration date : 19/09/2008
Re: room for improvement!
Not bad for the first try, Comments has been said, apply mo nlng at update to, render mo at higher resolution...
matanong lang, how long ba rendering time neto bro?
matanong lang, how long ba rendering time neto bro?
silvercrown- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 981
Age : 49
Location : Toronto, Mandaue, Polomolok
Registration date : 05/11/2008
Re: room for improvement!
Not bad for the first try, Comments has been said, apply mo nlng at update to, render mo at higher resolution...
matanong lang, how long ba rendering time neto bro?
1hr...mabagal kasi pc ko sir...hehehehhe
matanong lang, how long ba rendering time neto bro?
1hr...mabagal kasi pc ko sir...hehehehhe
jenaro- Peter Pran
- Number of posts : 3132
Age : 43
Location : sharjah
Registration date : 22/01/2009
Re: room for improvement!
sir... comments have been said regarding ur background - aka BG. hehe... for me po sir. parang naging framed picture po kasi xa. nwei... practice2x lang po tau dito sir. we can all get it right. as for the saying. practice makes it..... kayo na po dumugtong. i know lam u na un. nice first posting po. welcome here.
vamp_lestat- CGP Guru
- Number of posts : 1930
Age : 41
Location : Davao City, Philippines
Registration date : 27/11/2008
Re: room for improvement!
para sa akin not really bad for a first post, i must say congratulation kaagad. kasi alam ko nung nauna ako sa su at render sa vray, nungkang ganyan ang quality ng render kuna. i tuloy tuloy mo lang yung magandang start bro.. tutal nasabi na ng mga naunang magcomment. yun nayun. i especially agree on austrias point of rendering "overidde muy man yung texture, once satisfied kanba pweede mo nang umpisahn yung mga texture. at oonga pala pwede mong isave yung mga clacualtions mo kapag ginamit mo ay LC, IR or photn mapping. so kapg nagrender ka na gamit yung mga saved calculations mo mabilis na non....
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