Simple Two-Storey Commercial and Residential, All., Cag. (Update)

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Construction Update

sir una na ako. very nice design. watch your roll ups

The design is a smorgasbord of different elements, of different genre... nawawala yung character and identity ng structure...
confusing sya...

the stone material doesn't really work, bitin sya naka-angat kase sa floor line, trying adding a base to it and since yung trims mo are colored white, make the base white too...
yung moulding sa column doesn't work too, take note may up/down column lights ka on top of this, matatabunan nya ang ilaw... tanggalin nlng cguro.
build-up the column dun sa canopy, payat sya tingnan make it the same size as the main columns...
im not sure with the window design, yung railing, at yung trellis... parang pinilit lang syang i-fit sa structure...

eragasco wrote:sir una na ako. very nice design. watch your roll ups

tnx bro. noted yan.

silvercrown wrote:The design is a smorgasbord of different elements, of different genre... nawawala yung character and identity ng structure...
confusing sya...

the stone material doesn't really work, bitin sya naka-angat kase sa floor line, trying adding a base to it and since yung trims mo are colored white, make the base white too...
yung moulding sa column doesn't work too, take note may up/down column lights ka on top of this, matatabunan nya ang ilaw... tanggalin nlng cguro.
build-up the column dun sa canopy, payat sya tingnan make it the same size as the main columns...
im not sure with the window design, yung railing, at yung trellis... parang pinilit lang syang i-fit sa structure...

Nice comment s sir, i like it. I'll take note only for the helpful one. I'll defend my design and answer you one by one.
First about the design ,aprubado na po ng owner to sir with full satisfaction, tapos na ngang tumayo yung structural nito, this is not a mixture of different elements, kung mapapansin nyo, building sides are only more on verticals and horizontals. I can't understand you kung anong character at identity ang gusto nyo, hinpdi po ba mukhang commercial and residential to? Sa inyo po ano?
Second yung stone finish. Sadya po talaga yan sir, thats owner's suggestion, at may point din naman. Nakaangat para daw hindi dumihin yung baba ng stone tuwing uulan,kaya may base, at hindi rin color white yung base kc nga dumihin ang color white sa base, according to them.
Third yung ilaw, agree po ako sa inyo sir. Palitan ko na lang siguro ng ibang wall lamp na naka angat or pwede rin tanggalin yung moulding, i'll think for that sir. Sasabihin ko rin sa kanila. Tnx.
Fourth yung column, if you are aware about engineering economy sir, thats my point. D na po kailangang mag aksaya ng cemento at bakal kung napakagaan naman ng binunuhat. I don't think makakaapekto ng malaki sa design. Sir, would you mind if i will ask your profession?Tnx.
And lastly, yung window, railings, at trellis na parang pinilit i fit. Isang simpleng kasagutan lang sa akin sir, paki imagine na lang yung structure pag tanggalin natin yung window, railings, at trellis.
Thank you very much sir silvercrown for your comments. Nakatulong din yung iba. Thanks for dropping by..

Nice render sir.

defense.. cool..okay naman yung design as long as approve ng client at satisfied sila at satisfied and designer at walang nilabag na batas!! why not!
wala namang maling design eh.. heheh

effreymm wrote:Nice render sir.

tnx for dropping by sir.

misharki wrote:defense.. cool..okay naman yung design as long as approve ng client at satisfied sila at satisfied and designer at walang nilabag na batas!! why not!
wala namang maling design eh.. heheh

you're right madam, thanks.

hehehe dame proj. bossing!sharp lang masyado sakin sir, tapos may mga noise pa jobi ka naman hehehe

glass reflection lang for me ..

suggest lang po ako...wala nga pong maling design pero diba kaya po tayo nasa profession natin as arki para itama yung gusto ng client natin. pero kung alam nman natin na di na ok sa design yung gusto ng client dba pwede nman nating idepend sa client yung side natin or magsuggest tayo ng another idea natin para lang magawa natin yung gusto nila..

were paid sa design natin. pero kung agree lang tayo ng agree sa client para san pa yung profession natin.... yun lang po sakin

ang galing pre, send ka na ng setting mo sa email ko, pati mga maps na maganda.

nice. i like the car shader.

imho lang sir Arist..yung balcony mo alanganin yata pagkaputol..okay lang naman siguro na itaas na lang corner window niyo po. at yung sa commercial area mas maganda siguro iniba niyo design sa columns..yung medyo plain...sa railings and trellis add more design..so far approve na nga,hehe...keep posting Sir Arist!

akoy wrote:hehehe dame proj. bossing!sharp lang masyado sakin sir, tapos may mga noise pa jobi ka naman hehehe

he he tnx lakay noted. wala nga masyado..

bartsimpson wrote:glass reflection lang for me ..

tnx sir..

jhero wrote:suggest lang po ako...wala nga pong maling design pero diba kaya po tayo nasa profession natin as arki para itama yung gusto ng client natin. pero kung alam nman natin na di na ok sa design yung gusto ng client dba pwede nman nating idepend sa client yung side natin or magsuggest tayo ng another idea natin para lang magawa natin yung gusto nila..

were paid sa design natin. pero kung agree lang tayo ng agree sa client para san pa yung profession natin.... yun lang po sakin

tnx bro, pero parang kulang yung suggestion mo a, parang wala ka ngang suggestion, insight lang. itama yung gusto ng client natin? baka itama yung maling gusto nila? kung yung kagustuhan nila ay magkakaroon ng di magandang output sa design, yun ang iimprove natin. d na kailangang itama yung gusto nila kung ok naman.
sa business,"clients are always perfect" yan ang tatandaan mo. dapat mag agree ka lang at the same time mag suggest ng mas maganda kung alam mong hindi maganda yung kalalabasan sa over all design. wag mo silang kokontrahin, aatrasan ka nyan. walang magpapagawa sayo nyan. para saan din yung profession natin kung wala kang kliyente? tnx bro.

roycristobal wrote:ang galing pre, send ka na ng setting mo sa email ko, pati mga maps na maganda.

he he, nakakatuwa avatar mo pre. cge pre. tnx .mga maps marami sa freebies.

Galaites07 wrote:nice. i like the car shader.

salamat sir..

brodger wrote:imho lang sir Arist..yung balcony mo alanganin yata pagkaputol..okay lang naman siguro na itaas na lang corner window niyo po. at yung sa commercial area mas maganda siguro iniba niyo design sa columns..yung medyo plain...sa railings and trellis add more design..so far approve na nga,hehe...keep posting Sir Arist!

tnx sir, noted lahat yan.

tnx bro, pero parang kulang yung suggestion mo a, parang wala ka ngang suggestion, insight lang. itama yung gusto ng client natin? baka itama yung maling gusto nila? kung yung kagustuhan nila ay magkakaroon ng di magandang output sa design, yun ang iimprove natin. d na kailangang itama yung gusto nila kung ok naman.
sa business,"clients are always perfect" yan ang tatandaan mo. dapat mag agree ka lang at the same time mag suggest ng mas maganda kung alam mong hindi maganda yung kalalabasan sa over all design. wag mo silang kokontrahin, aatrasan ka nyan. walang magpapagawa sayo nyan. para saan din yung profession natin kung wala kang kliyente? tnx bro.

wala ba sir pasyensya na kung wala sa tingin mo hehehehe hindi ko nman ibig sabihin kontrahin po yung client. at wala po bang papagawa gusto nyo po tulungan nyo ko... high rise kasi eh! medyo hirap heheheh peace bro

superb!!!

jhero wrote:

tnx bro, pero parang kulang yung suggestion mo a, parang wala ka ngang suggestion, insight lang. itama yung gusto ng client natin? baka itama yung maling gusto nila? kung yung kagustuhan nila ay magkakaroon ng di magandang output sa design, yun ang iimprove natin. d na kailangang itama yung gusto nila kung ok naman.
sa business,"clients are always perfect" yan ang tatandaan mo. dapat mag agree ka lang at the same time mag suggest ng mas maganda kung alam mong hindi maganda yung kalalabasan sa over all design. wag mo silang kokontrahin, aatrasan ka nyan. walang magpapagawa sayo nyan. para saan din yung profession natin kung wala kang kliyente? tnx bro.

wala ba sir pasyensya na kung wala sa tingin mo hehehehe hindi ko nman ibig sabihin kontrahin po yung client. at wala po bang papagawa gusto nyo po tulungan nyo ko... high rise kasi eh! medyo hirap heheheh peace bro

he he tnx. sa akin lang yun bro, kanya kanyang diskarte naman yan. big time a, ikaw ba principal architect ng high rise na sinasabi mo? kung may maitutulong ba ako, he he.

allnem wrote: superb!!!

tnx sir.