HRDi-lit "Somewhere in Japan" updated

Hey mga masters this is just a remake of a photo I've google. Just practicin'.
Paki comment nalang mga boss para mag-improve pa ako, please share your knowledge masters.

Workflow:
3Ds Max 2011 64bit + a lil' Photoshop touch up, no Autocad this time.
Render time: 47mins
System: i3 + 2GB ram (I know I should be using 4GB+ ram but hey. )
Vray 1.5 SP5 / Render with HDRi.

Paki maximum nalang po ang settings ng monitor dusk scene po kasi hehe.
salamat po!

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2nd Image


update: Dec 22, 2011
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Wow, ang galing nito sir.. superb work....tfs...

cool!.......niceeee

idol ko din ang bldg na to, nice render.

very nice rendition

nice sir! meron lang ako mga nitpicks like some of the entourage appear floating (no shadows), ung glass material medyo mataas ata ang IOR, and 47 minutes rendertime is evident sa image - mejo low quality yata ang AA? otherwise, HDRI lighting is good. try to work on the interior lighting as well.

nice work, ganda..

Design is great, a pure minimalist... very nice render bro. Thanks.

nice practice given it was a dusk scene but i still find it too dark... allow me to adjust it a bit...
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> missing headlights sa mga sasakyan...
> where those dry leaves came from?
> missing lights for the billboard...
> very low settings... sayang... sobrang ganda sana...
> not sure about the diameter scale of those electrical cables...

juv21 wrote:Wow, ang galing nito sir.. superb work....tfs...

thank you po sir juv21 I'm glad you like it.

aesonck wrote:cool!.......niceeee

thank you po sir aesonck.

jarul wrote:idol ko din ang bldg na to, nice render.

thank you po sir jarul, kung idol nyo un building, ikaw naman ang idol ko sir.

vernonmaxel wrote:very nice rendition

thank you po sir vernonmaxel your comment is much appreciated.

celes wrote:nice sir! meron lang ako mga nitpicks like some of the entourage appear floating (no shadows), ung glass material medyo mataas ata ang IOR, and 47 minutes rendertime is evident sa image - mejo low quality yata ang AA? otherwise, HDRI lighting is good. try to work on the interior lighting as well.

thank you po sir celes I'll try to work on those nitpicks, low quality nga lang po ang pagkaka-render bagal kasi ng system ko sir and I never like waiting po kasi hehe.

Jaywar wrote:nice work, ganda..

thank you po sir Jaywar, ginaganahan po ako sa mga comments nyo hehe.

torring wrote:Design is great, a pure minimalist... very nice render bro. Thanks.

thank you po sir torring, I agree the design is great but unfortunately its not my design hehe.

Valiant wrote:nice practice given it was a dusk scene but i still find it too dark... allow me to adjust it a bit...

> missing headlights sa mga sasakyan...
> where those dry leaves came from?
> missing lights for the billboard...
> very low settings... sayang... sobrang ganda sana...
> not sure about the diameter scale of those electrical cables...

thank you po sir Valiant, mejo dark nga po hehe. I'll try to work with your suggestions, very much appreciated po talaga mga masters.

Kawai na homani! ,may vintage car pa mahilig talaga silang gumamit niyan..omedato Hotarubi ku! and second image galing ng arrive

suabe..tama lang timpla

Alapaap wrote:Kawai na homani! ,may vintage car pa mahilig talaga silang gumamit niyan..omedato Hotarubi ku! and second image galing ng arrive

arigatou gozaimasu master Alapaap. Idol ko po un mga render nyo lakas maka-inspire.

ortzak wrote:suabe..tama lang timpla

salamat po sir ortzak.

JDM yo!!! hehe...

very nice... like it ...

kaLbo wrote:JDM yo!!! hehe...

Sorry po sir for my ignorance pero ano po yun JDM? Salamat po sa pagdaan.

vilpang wrote:very nice... like it ...

Thank you po sir vilpang, I've seen your work rin po sir astig.

Uy nasa CGPEA na pala ngayon ko lang nakita hehe. Thank you MODs.

ang tiyaga nito ...its so difficult to do this...the work is great ! Design is TOP . i like it . Just a little more tweak on the settings. people will not think its a computer render image.

MY first impresion on this its amazing!!! 99% nato 1 % lang kulang dito

2nd image is a nice dramatic angle shot . its a low key composition .it should be dark at the background so for me its okey .just a little more hatak sa focal point to give more impression of dramatic light to the building facade

arch_mirasol wrote:ang tiyaga nito ...its so difficult to do this...the work is great ! Design is TOP . i like it . Just a little more tweak on the settings. people will not think its a computer render image.

MY first impresion on this its amazing!!! 99% nato 1 % lang kulang dito

2nd image is a nice dramatic angle shot . its a low key composition .it should be dark at the background so for me its okey .just a little more hatak sa focal point to give more impression of dramatic light to the building facade

Thank you for the awesome compliment mam myra. I think 1 month (in relax mode hehe) rin inabot bago ko natapos ito, mejo malaking scene po kasi hehe at sankaterbang tests renders sa iba't ibang HDRi hanggang sa ma-satisfy ako hehe.
Noted po yung mga suggestions. Low settings lang kasi render, tinamad ako mag hintay hehe.
Thanks po ulet sa pag daan at pag comment.