bedroom update lang po

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hi cgpips,
latest work, give an advice, thanks and regards, c&c (forget about the drapery) ehehehe



Update lang po

Is it just me or madaming bulag o higop dito? (oh i was just kidding!!!)

CG is like a girlfriend or a boyfriend, once you fell in love, you'll unconsciously turn a blind eye to his nasal hairs, body odor, or gigantic tunga in between his or her teeth.

While Love for your own work can bring you to greater heights. Real love can bring you change. So let's try to find out what the original poster might have had missed seeing.

Now, for some quick comments from a serious observer.

That curtain looks like a dripping wet semi-transparent plastic sheet. Fix the materials by lowering your refraction (adding a bit of glossies) and widening your gloss reflections. If you are using specularity - then thats the culprit.

Your bg outside the window is totally out of resolution and does not match the ambient color of the room.

Remember that if its sunny outside - the same illumination gives your interior the same hues.

The floor might be pumping out colors more than it should. That explains the orangey or firey feel. Lower its global illumination contribution.

Composition and drama. DO NOT put every evermotion model you have on the library to populate your scene. Everything must there for a reason. So if you want shoes bedside, that could mean a lady has just slept on it minutes ago or some lazy girl decided to leave her shoes in there instead of putting it back to a rack. Help your viewers realize that by putting clues to your scene. Not by making the viewers piece it together otherwise, they will simply turn the page and look elsewhere.

Justify the stuff you put in the scene. Thats the magic word for the day.

In addition and this is just a fatherly advice,

The more you say your "Lufffets!" " Hanep! " when its actually not - the more you make the subject go down the barrel. He won't learn, his standards dropping like wet pants - yours included.

I am not saying that to praise isn't divine. It is of course - only when you really meant it. And say it loud!

hello po sir! comments has been said.. try to use doublesided mtrl for ur curtain po.. keep posting

this is nice sir. comments po nasabi na ng mga masters. keep it up po

niwde wrote:bro wowowow!!!!!comment had been said!!!happy bday bro nyaman!plupit ng palupit ah! nice render bro en keep posting!

thanks sir edwin!

v_wrangler wrote:Is it just me or madaming bulag o higop dito? (oh i was just kidding!!!)

CG is like a girlfriend or a boyfriend, once you fell in love, you'll unconsciously turn a blind eye to his nasal hairs, body odor, or gigantic tunga in between his or her teeth.

While Love for your own work can bring you to greater heights. Real love can bring you change. So let's try to find out what the original poster might have had missed seeing.

Now, for some quick comments from a serious observer.

That curtain looks like a dripping wet semi-transparent plastic sheet. Fix the materials by lowering your refraction (adding a bit of glossies) and widening your gloss reflections. If you are using specularity - then thats the culprit.

Your bg outside the window is totally out of resolution and does not match the ambient color of the room.

Remember that if its sunny outside - the same illumination gives your interior the same hues.

The floor might be pumping out colors more than it should. That explains the orangey or firey feel. Lower its global illumination contribution.

Composition and drama. DO NOT put every evermotion model you have on the library to populate your scene. Everything must there for a reason. So if you want shoes bedside, that could mean a lady has just slept on it minutes ago or some lazy girl decided to leave her shoes in there instead of putting it back to a rack. Help your viewers realize that by putting clues to your scene. Not by making the viewers piece it together otherwise, they will simply turn the page and look elsewhere.

Justify the stuff you put in the scene. Thats the magic word for the day.

thank you sir for the lesson's and tips, idea's.

abl_langs wrote:hello po sir! comments has been said.. try to use doublesided mtrl for ur curtain po.. keep posting

salamat po.

christine wrote:this is nice sir. comments po nasabi na ng mga masters. keep it up po

thanks

thank you sir for the lesson's and tips, idea's.

You are welcome. Don't take my advice in a bad light. If I do not care about your render - I would not have spent ten minutes writing that piece

v_wrangler wrote:

thank you sir for the lesson's and tips, idea's.

You are welcome. Don't take my advice in a bad light. If I do not care about your render - I would not have spent ten minutes writing that piece

Its ok.

great render bro...ito pl yung tntago mo h..gling nito bro

Butz_Arki wrote:great render bro...ito pl yung tntago mo h..gling nito bro

salamat bro. post kana, mas malufit ka sa amin

salamat sa cgpips sa help nyo. konti practice pa po.

ang linis ng pgkbanat mo dito bro..wala nko masbi...gling ng pare ko

Butz_Arki wrote:ang linis ng pgkbanat mo dito bro..wala nko masbi...gling ng pare ko

thanks pare butz! mas malufet ka kung isasama moko sa dubai! ehehhee

bsta merom pre..ikaw p iwanan ko..magkabigan tyo pre...hehhhe...mrmi p tyo pgssmahan,...

madsnyop wrote:

Butz_Arki wrote:ang linis ng pgkbanat mo dito bro..wala nko masbi...gling ng pare ko

thanks pare butz! mas malufet ka kung isasama moko sa dubai! ehehhee

Butz_Arki wrote:bsta merom pre..ikaw p iwanan ko..magkabigan tyo pre...hehhhe...mrmi p tyo pgssmahan,...

madsnyop wrote:

Butz_Arki wrote:ang linis ng pgkbanat mo dito bro..wala nko masbi...gling ng pare ko

thanks pare butz! mas malufet ka kung isasama moko sa dubai! ehehhee

salamat pre. kaw naman basta pag andon kana. hanap moko. thanks men. isa kna c sa halimaw! ehehhe joke