G+2+Roofdeck

hello Po mga cgpians i just wanna share this new project in of mine,first project for 2010 where going international now, from Carlton Sudan the design is not mine lighting,textures,camera nd abubots is from yours truly, please don't hesitate to drop down your comments and suggestions to improve my works, again thanks to this forum rely big help to those who just self studying in 3D visualization industry...TIA

medyo madilim lang bro... saka yong sky medyo saturated din... sa glass tweak mo pa...para din nakalutang yong bldg. try to add some trees... keep it up..

nice one sir, para sa akin, comments ko ay yung camera correction, you can do this by ticking guess vert'l shift, scale ng tao lalo na sa may red car, add more entourage/bg trees. uma agaw ng attention yung red car, ito po ay para sa akin paningin lang. pero maganda parin

@arkitrix

sir salamat sa pag daan nd sa comments noted lahat sir...


@bizkong

sir standard cam lng gamit ko d2 nd standard light also, sa mga abubots sir noted lahat sir salamat po sa pagdaan mabuhay mga taga leysam EB na...

cam correction bro, try mo din sun sa right side para maganda ang shadow...rest is ok medyo right-heavy lang ang view.

rest is oks na...

comments had been said bro..

yong dark brown color.. di kaya masyadong dark?... (just try to consider)

my opinion or suggeston:
nice sir! baka gusto mong mag camera correction
para formal tingnan sa client!
add some trees on bg and bldg beside
overall sir nice, post more!

nice concept..

cam correction po sir..imho lang po..nice work.

cam corraction..add lng po ng background kundi tabihan nyo ng isang building..nice sir...

Nice design & render Sir