Sunset
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Jeff MD
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Sunset
di pa to tapos dadagdagan ko pa ng ulap at detalye yung tubig at tamang shadows at laro ng lighting,lalagyan ko sana ng mga lumulutang na debris pero mukhang mali yun kasi nagtingin akong mga plane crash sa net wala namang mga lumulutang, siguro depende na din sa damage ng nagcrash,tsaka di namn yun permanenteng lulutang sa scene, hahaha masyado kong pinoproblema.saka nalang pag sinipag
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Re: Sunset
I like it bro! Wag mu nang dagdagan yung clouds... mas maganda ata pag ganito. Less is more
thumbs up!
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Re: Sunset
Something you might want to consider if you decide to do a remake:
By looking at the low position of the sun, I'd expect something like back lighting where anything parallel to the camera will be under a shade and the silhouttes of the rocks will be more prominent from the lighting.
If you bring the light source a bit to the right, then you've got a good light and shadow match on the rocks in the left.
The water doesn't look like water (they look like smoke or dry ice) perhaps because of the lack of rflections and highlights. Right now they look like murky water surface and waves photographed under long exposure.
I'd love to see this with a distorted lens...
By looking at the low position of the sun, I'd expect something like back lighting where anything parallel to the camera will be under a shade and the silhouttes of the rocks will be more prominent from the lighting.
If you bring the light source a bit to the right, then you've got a good light and shadow match on the rocks in the left.
The water doesn't look like water (they look like smoke or dry ice) perhaps because of the lack of rflections and highlights. Right now they look like murky water surface and waves photographed under long exposure.
I'd love to see this with a distorted lens...
Re: Sunset
rangalua - salamat po sir ,sobrang di pa ko masaya dito.
eyecon01 - master icon thank you po sa tip. "less is more"
v_wrangler - salamat po sir, ngayon ko lang napansin yung karamihan sa mga nasabi mo, thank you.
eyecon01 - master icon thank you po sa tip. "less is more"
v_wrangler - salamat po sir, ngayon ko lang napansin yung karamihan sa mga nasabi mo, thank you.
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Re: Sunset
astig ito bro!
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Re: Sunset
grabeh ang galing...
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Re: Sunset
@corpsegrinder -salamat sir,
@dreffyves3d -thank you boss
@LadiesMan217- maraming salamat, nitry ko lagyan ng ulap, pero tama si sir eyecon01 mas ok na simple ang langit .
naeexcite na kong ayusin to, para makagawa ng bago.
@dreffyves3d -thank you boss
@LadiesMan217- maraming salamat, nitry ko lagyan ng ulap, pero tama si sir eyecon01 mas ok na simple ang langit .
naeexcite na kong ayusin to, para makagawa ng bago.
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Re: Sunset
ang galing mo pre... very promising mga works mo... pro level!
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Re: Sunset
galing ng scene...
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Re: Sunset
this is nice
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Re: Sunset
v_wrangler wrote:Right now they look like murky water surface and waves photographed under long exposure.
indeed, and it's not a bad effect. great scene you got here pressure
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Re: Sunset
marcelinoiii - salamat uli sir,
Allan Amor - tnx boss.
ymhon - salamat pre, nagmamatte painting ka na din ha, asteg.
fpj999 - mix po ng 3d, digi paint, at photo manips, karamihan ng andiyan pics.
mushroom- salamat boss ganun talaga yung tubig.
Allan Amor - tnx boss.
ymhon - salamat pre, nagmamatte painting ka na din ha, asteg.
fpj999 - mix po ng 3d, digi paint, at photo manips, karamihan ng andiyan pics.
mushroom- salamat boss ganun talaga yung tubig.
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Re: Sunset
at first look without reading your descripton akala ko they on top of the mountains.
this has potential, you need to push this more. This could pass for a concept art, but not for a mattepainting.
A good tip is to use this and start over from this idea fresh from scratch. make it more photo real and and avoid using so much obvious brush strokes. I see alot of cloning with your rocks there, avoid that too. lastly check your black levels, nawawala ang sense of depth if di mo nasunod ito. check your photoshop black to white swatches, thats the best guide to using black for the nearest one to almost 10-20% grey sa pinakamalayo.
keep painting bro.
this has potential, you need to push this more. This could pass for a concept art, but not for a mattepainting.
A good tip is to use this and start over from this idea fresh from scratch. make it more photo real and and avoid using so much obvious brush strokes. I see alot of cloning with your rocks there, avoid that too. lastly check your black levels, nawawala ang sense of depth if di mo nasunod ito. check your photoshop black to white swatches, thats the best guide to using black for the nearest one to almost 10-20% grey sa pinakamalayo.
keep painting bro.
Re: Sunset
Jeff MD wrote:at first look without reading your descripton akala ko they on top of the mountains.
this has potential, you need to push this more. This could pass for a concept art, but not for a mattepainting.
A good tip is to use this and start over from this idea fresh from scratch. make it more photo real and and avoid using so much obvious brush strokes. I see alot of cloning with your rocks there, avoid that too. lastly check your black levels, nawawala ang sense of depth if di mo nasunod ito. check your photoshop black to white swatches, thats the best guide to using black for the nearest one to almost 10-20% grey sa pinakamalayo.
keep painting bro.
salamat po Sir Jeff mas kailangan ng members ng forum na to yung mga pagpuna ng gaya ng binibigay mo. tatandaan ko yang mga sinabi mo,karamihan kasi dito ngayon nahihiya magsabi ng nakikita nilang kulang sa work ng kasama nila,
salamat sir,
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Re: Sunset
Sir anu pong software yan?
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