SUNSET

msat po mga master..post lng po,,palipas oras ko po ngaun,,la kac magawa eh,,,the gazebo model ay napulot ko lng po sa net
at sinalpak ko lng sa scene,,,paki cc po masters,,TIA

Sir Jarul...hirap talagang magpalipas ng oars ha...gumaganda ang mga gawa siguro sir a bit BUMP lang sa mga materials mo, the rest are really awesome, very romantic....nice job bro

3DZONE wrote:Sir Jarul...hirap talagang magpalipas ng oars ha...gumaganda ang mga gawa siguro sir a bit BUMP lang sa mga materials mo, the rest are really awesome, very romantic....nice job bro

tnx po ser,,,oo nga,,bored masyado dito.,,

correct me if i'm wrong ha, I think the foreground models render should be a bit darker kasi against the light sya. Not unless your looking for an HDR effect na render then ok to, but otherwise masyadong maliwanag sa akin. cheers

eyecon01 wrote:correct me if i'm wrong ha, I think the foreground models render should be a bit darker kasi against the light sya. Not unless your looking for an HDR effect na render then ok to, but otherwise masyadong maliwanag sa akin. cheers

ok po ser...noted po,,tnx..

nice practice bro.. ok yan..tulou tuloy mo lang..

Butz_Arki wrote:nice practice bro.. ok yan..tulou tuloy mo lang..

tnx po ,,

nice

dickie_ilagan wrote:nice

tnx bossing..

jarul,

i dont have an issue with rendering, i just want to critique the composition. You might want to apply one of the old trick in composition. avoiding putting line in the middle. (simple lang kasi lines always divide the composition into two halves. kung baga parang dito ako duon ka, and automatically they create division...

I am attaching here a cropped version to show my point. (i have cropped the right side of the structure parang you give sense of continuity to the mind of the viewer. ang nangyari kasi tapos na yung edge at mukhang bitin. by cropping it, naggshift yung line more to the right na.. so hindi na sya one half one half ngayon.

i also darken some areas using ps to have more contrast to the sunset and the structure...

i hope you dont mind kung pinotoshop ko to

tnx po master noms sa crits ang sugestion. ..noted po lahat,,,,

nomeradona wrote:jarul,

i dont have an issue with rendering, i just want to critique the composition. You might want to apply one of the old trick in composition. avoiding putting line in the middle. (simple lang kasi lines always divide the composition into two halves. kung baga parang dito ako duon ka, and automatically they create division...

I am attaching here a cropped version to show my point. (i have cropped the right side of the structure parang you give sense of continuity to the mind of the viewer. ang nangyari kasi tapos na yung edge at mukhang bitin. by cropping it, naggshift yung line more to the right na.. so hindi na sya one half one half ngayon.

i also darken some areas using ps to have more contrast to the sunset and the structure...

i hope you dont mind kung pinotoshop ko to

very nice sir nomer..very nice...

nice work sir

galing nito bro.. bumabanat ka ahhh kahit walang project.. hehehe...