A Two Storey Residence (Added View)

A.K.A. wrote:maganda ang first image

chobs wrote:

v_wrangler wrote:nice one stryker, specially the first image.

My comments.

The gaps between the dark and the lights are so stiff. You need to preserve the illumination even in the dark areas. Remember that there isn't a black shadow in reality unless you are in total darkness. One thing I could suggest is to consider LWF in your next renders. But hey, its like opening up a new can of worms.

Simply put, the contrast is too high for the first image, try to eliminate the blacks in the shade by either using LWF or lowering the density of the shadow or adding more negative light to suck the darkness out.

As for the second image, it's unfortunately unnatural. Its like there's a big fire happening in front of the area. If you want a late afternoon look, it might help to use a blue ambience (environment) and a yellowish or orangish direct light.

Nice to see your work again.

What's the LWF?

I think you can easily adjust the dynamic range in PS especially if you are using Vrimg since it is in a higher bit of image.

In contrary to what Wrangler said about the stiffness of the B&W I think it is just a matter of preference. And also in photography, some of the areas will have to be compromised because you can't save all the details unless you use HDR or Photo blending which will result to again an unnatural look.

Ok now about the work. Rendering is great and the composition is conservative. You can improve the bump of your tile and the material in your road. The black car is.. yes, out of scale. Is your entry porch a bit narrow or it's just the angle of the view. Overall good job.

Cheers!

logikpixel wrote:All comments have been made. The first image is nice. I couldn't say the same for the second.
Thanks for sharing.

Noel_Diaz wrote:very good render sir,,, maganda din ang design,,, tweak na lng sa level or brightness n contrast sa ps,,, but overall ok n ok sir!!! keep posting~!!!

Yhna wrote:Ganda ng renders mo sir.. Yun nga lang yung pangalawang image... feeling ko naglalaro ako ng Resident Evil... Nakakatakot yung BG.. But anyway... Astig to... galing

lei23 wrote:maganda po xa sir..ung 2nd image lng po ang medyo di ko nagustuhan..pero maganda pa rin po!

uwak wrote:i like the first image.....

bizkong wrote:maganda yung 1st image sir, parang malaki yung car sa right side, imho..kaunting adjustment lang din ng contrast ,i like your updated image

alwin wrote:1st image is really nice the scond one needs some tweakings,
either in max itself or in post process at your convenient software!

taga_probins wrote:sir! ok ung ps edit mo..kung gusto mo mas flexible ung pgedit mo, i suggest multi-pass composition. prang i-sort off mo lhat ng render elements ng final rendered image..either ps or fusion ung comp na gagamitin mo, depende sa nkasanayan mo..based on my experience, mas madali ito..once nkuha mo ang process, mkagawa ka ng sari-saring exposure, daytime or nightime or sunset view kahit nkaupo ung boss mo sa tabi mo, hehehe...keep it up bro!

add po pla, follow mo ung advice ni sir alwin..

cgil wrote:you rock bro...

rangalua wrote:Very nice design & visualization Sir, looks real, first image superb

lemeuix wrote:Aprub 'to! Galing!