beach house -- UPDATED

again, hindi sa 'kin yung design.. in-edit ko lang then render.. comments and suggestions ulet..
thank you sa nagturo dati..



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mam mauna na ako... maganda na improvement... hanap ka na lang ng iba pa background... masyado blurry... parang humiwalay na sa scene.. malapit mo na makuha... ipaubaya ko na iba comment sa mga masters...

good start sis....yung BG na mountains lang blur, tambay lang dito marami sila magagaling dito....

wow ok na ngayon, may BG na....keep it up!

sinadya ko talaga gawing blurry.. hindi ba nag match? hehe.. post ko na lang din yung malinaw na version.. thank you!

Nice design and concept...heto po suggestions ko:
-change mo yung bg mo yung hindi blurred
-palitan mo rin yung wood texture, yung bang medyo luma at may lumot
-change mo rin yung palm trees mo, yung realistic
-reduce mo rin yung saturation nya

kaunting retouch pa mam...makukuha mo na yan...keep it up

ganda nang design sir, just follow sir aries notes and add ko narin na mas maganda kung yung height nang camera ay ayon sa line of sight.

sa akin ok to, parang Pixar ang may gawa

OKIDOKI.. update ko na lang ulet pag nagawa ko na.. thanks for all the comment.. i'll take note of them..

--sabi nga ng boss ko, mukha daw banana tree yung supposedly palm tree.. haha!
--influenced nga siguro aku ng pixar, fan ako nun eh..

i'll work this out and make it better..

thank you ulet everyone! i appreciate it.. xoxo

naku naman... walang makita...

sketchup to diba ma'm? ayos! nice lighting.. imho po sa bg kahit wag mo na iblurr, pero ok lang siya ma'm. at sa trees naman, yung sa tutorials section natin, yung clipmapping. mgandang trees for sketchup. try it ma'm. goodluck and keep it up.hehe

A.K.A. wrote:naku naman... walang makita...

panong walang makita

mEejan wrote:sketchup to diba ma'm? ayos! nice lighting.. imho po sa bg kahit wag mo na iblurr, pero ok lang siya ma'm. at sa trees naman, yung sa tutorials section natin, yung clipmapping. mgandang trees for sketchup. try it ma'm. goodluck and keep it up.hehe

CLIPMAPPING! kailangan ko matutunan yan.. thanks!

good daylight scene evita and aduna,you can use reference images next time to make your scene more realistic and dramatic

Nico.Patdu wrote:good daylight scene evita and aduna,you can use reference images next time to make your scene more realistic and dramatic

THANK YOU! by the way, its evita ana adona..

Laki ng improvement ah. welcome to cgp pala. keep it up! ang good luck sa pag33d.

wow sarap yatang maligo dito. Nice design maam. post more.