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Beach House
by AUSTRIA Sat Jun 20, 2009 3:34 am
Hi...CGP pa post ulit kapatid to ng Garden House gusto ng owner kamukha halos nung Garden House my last works ko. Pero may kunting pagkakaiba naman lalo na sa material malapit to sa Beach na nabili niya na lot sa lebanon...
Pa C&C na lang ulit...thanks in advance
Pa C&C na lang ulit...thanks in advance
Last edited by AUSTRIA on Sat Jun 20, 2009 7:04 am; edited 3 times in total
AUSTRIA- CGP Le Corbusier
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Re: Beach House
by jenaro Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:12 am
good composition! 
imho ung entrance eh napasok din yata ng grass...
imho ung entrance eh napasok din yata ng grass...
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Re: Beach House
by CNgarcia Sat Jun 20, 2009 5:09 am
wow ganda nmn ng model sir... as well as the composition
as well as the composition
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Re: Beach House
by 3DZONE Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:12 am
Bong, ok ah ganda...hmmm...since na Beach House to sana may dagat na rin....but everything are OK with me.... 
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Re: Beach House
by AUSTRIA Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:44 am
jenaro wrote:good composition!
Bakanteng lote kasi yan sir kaya di ko alam kung lagyan ko ba ng pathway....thanks Peter pran...(ot:dapat kulit na lang hehe)
thanks sirCNgarcia wrote:wow ganda nmn ng model sir...
3DZONE wrote:Bong, ok ah ganda...hmmm...since na Beach House to sana may dagat na rin....but everything are OK with me....
actually meron yan eh sa likod inalis ko na lang ang Frame para makita thanks sa Suggestion hah...pareng aries
AUSTRIA- CGP Le Corbusier
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Re: Beach House
by zildian_nico Sat Jun 20, 2009 7:19 am
sir,ganda n2....nice post poh....imho lng poh sir prang pumasok ung kalahati ng trees sa wall ng fence nyo.....ganda poh n2......
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Re: Beach House
by ortzak Sat Jun 20, 2009 7:37 am
Ayus ang design bro ah!! yung dagat parang weird lang hehe..or wala sa horizon
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Re: Beach House
by Noel_Diaz Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:00 am
excellent work sir,,, design is really great, keep it up sir!!!
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Re: Beach House
by cgil Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:27 am
nice rendering.. IMHO lang bawas lang kaunti intensity ng sun.. then kaunting adjust s floor panalo na ito!!!
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Re: Beach House
by jarul Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:35 pm
- chek ur horizon line (ung dgat sa likod mataas)
- bluish na masyado tingnan ung bldg....nasobrahan yata...
- improve glass.
- medyo halata ung segments ng curves..
- ung ground din na nakaslope,pki chek kc natabunan na ung stairs..
- cant determine kung saan ang orientation ng sun..some areas overburn.
- noisy
- tumagos ung trees sa wall.
- kulang ng entourage..
update nyo po eto
posmore
- bluish na masyado tingnan ung bldg....nasobrahan yata...
- improve glass.
- medyo halata ung segments ng curves..
- ung ground din na nakaslope,pki chek kc natabunan na ung stairs..
- cant determine kung saan ang orientation ng sun..some areas overburn.
- noisy
- tumagos ung trees sa wall.
- kulang ng entourage..
update nyo po eto
posmore
Last edited by jarul on Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:47 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Beach House
by cloud20 Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:36 pm
Master Austria...
Where's the brownish version?...
The structure has this weird bluish tinge on it, which, strangely enough, doesnt affect the grass...
Some white fringes on your BG trees show, one tree has a "through the wall" capabilities...
The left part of the house looks like a stone wall with the doors & windows as punched holes with nothing to see inside...
Right now the area seems to have an "abandoned" feeling to it...
I would have to disagree with the others, they're just obviously sucking up to the mod getting their noses all browned up; there is no composition here, just a building slapped on the grass with some token trees on one side & a misaligned ocean background on the other side...
Just being honest lang po... Lest i step on gangrened toes...
I know you can do better master Austria...
Where's the brownish version?...
The structure has this weird bluish tinge on it, which, strangely enough, doesnt affect the grass...
Some white fringes on your BG trees show, one tree has a "through the wall" capabilities...
The left part of the house looks like a stone wall with the doors & windows as punched holes with nothing to see inside...
Right now the area seems to have an "abandoned" feeling to it...
I would have to disagree with the others, they're just obviously sucking up to the mod getting their noses all browned up; there is no composition here, just a building slapped on the grass with some token trees on one side & a misaligned ocean background on the other side...
Just being honest lang po... Lest i step on gangrened toes...
I know you can do better master Austria...
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Re: Beach House
by AUSTRIA Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:36 pm
zildian_nico wrote:sir,ganda n2....nice post poh....imho lng poh sir prang pumasok ung kalahati ng trees sa wall ng fence nyo.....ganda poh n2......
Thanks sa pagdaan..yup tama ka nakalimutan ko edit sa Pshop buti na lang napuna mo....
ortzak wrote:Ayus ang design bro ah!! yung dagat parang weird lang hehe..or wala sa horizon
Thanks bro...uu nga noh
sige update ko pa to...Noel_Diaz wrote:excellent work sir,,, design is really great, keep it up sir!!!
thnks bro...
cgil wrote:nice rendering.. IMHO lang bawas lang kaunti intensity ng sun.. then kaunting adjust s floor panalo na ito!!!
Yup tama ka medyo malakas nga...experiment ko pa to....Thanks po
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Re: Beach House
by AUSTRIA Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:43 pm
jarul wrote:- chek ur horizon line (ung dgat sa likod mataas)
- bluish na masyado tingnan ung bldg....nasobrahan yata...
I try to reflect the BG kc hinahabol ko ang mood...well gawa po ako ng ibang version
- improve glass.
Yup tama ka medyo sablay nga yan
- medyo halata ung segments ng curves..
saan po sa grass? may contour kasi.
- ung ground din na nakaslope,pki chek kc natabunan na ung stairs..
Hehehe tama ka...medyo diyan ako nahirapan eh kaya tsamba lang ako diyan...nakita mo pa rin hehehe...
- cant determine kung saan ang orientation ng sun..some areas overburn.
Sa likod kasi white kasi ang material nahihirapan ako mag adjust ng vray sun setting
- noisy
- tumagos ung trees sa wall.
uu nga eh plan ko tlga yan edit pshop nakalimutan po sori.
- kulang ng entourage..
di ko na kasi magalaw ang lot na yan sa likod kaya di ko rin malagyan ng entourage...
Sir Jarul salamat sa mga comments mo para ma improve pa gawa ko......God bless
update nyo po eto
posmore
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Re: Beach House
by AUSTRIA Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:59 pm
[quote="cloud20"]Master Austria...
Where's the brownish version?...
wala naman nag comment dun kaya inalis ko na lang pangit kasi....heheheh
The structure has this weird bluish tinge on it, which, strangely enough, doesnt affect the grass...
Siguro po dahil sa white ang bldg color kaya di ma absorb ng grass ang bluish effect...
Some white fringes on your BG trees show, one tree has a "through the wall" capabilities...
hehehe tama...ka po pasensya na nakalimutan edit sa pshop
The left part of the house looks like a stone wall with the doors & windows as punched holes with nothing to see inside...
actually glass yan eh wala kasi BG sa harapan kaya wala reflection...corny na pag nilagyan ko pa sa pshop.. pero tama ka sir cloud parang hole nga..
Right now the area seems to have an "abandoned" feeling to it...
well mukha siyang malungkot kasi di ko naman magalaw yung area na grass kasi may ibang owner yan sabi kasi ng owner .
basta grass lang...sinunod ko na lang para walang revision..
I would have to disagree with the others, they're just obviously sucking up to the mod getting their noses all browned up; there is no composition here, just a building slapped on the grass with some token trees on one side & a misaligned ocean background on the other side...
Sir cloud okey lang sarap po ng feeling pag kagaya niyo na magaling nag comments...sa uulitin po na pag post ko
God bless po.........
Where's the brownish version?...
wala naman nag comment dun kaya inalis ko na lang pangit kasi....heheheh
The structure has this weird bluish tinge on it, which, strangely enough, doesnt affect the grass...
Siguro po dahil sa white ang bldg color kaya di ma absorb ng grass ang bluish effect...
Some white fringes on your BG trees show, one tree has a "through the wall" capabilities...
hehehe tama...ka po pasensya na nakalimutan edit sa pshop
The left part of the house looks like a stone wall with the doors & windows as punched holes with nothing to see inside...
actually glass yan eh wala kasi BG sa harapan kaya wala reflection...corny na pag nilagyan ko pa sa pshop.. pero tama ka sir cloud parang hole nga..
Right now the area seems to have an "abandoned" feeling to it...
well mukha siyang malungkot kasi di ko naman magalaw yung area na grass kasi may ibang owner yan sabi kasi ng owner .
basta grass lang...sinunod ko na lang para walang revision..
I would have to disagree with the others, they're just obviously sucking up to the mod getting their noses all browned up; there is no composition here, just a building slapped on the grass with some token trees on one side & a misaligned ocean background on the other side...
Sir cloud okey lang sarap po ng feeling pag kagaya niyo na magaling nag comments...sa uulitin po na pag post ko
God bless po.........
Last edited by AUSTRIA on Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:02 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Beach House
by uwak Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:00 pm
comments has been said na po....post mre sir austria!...
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