a bedroom

by rangalua Mon Sep 07, 2009 4:20 pm

c&c please THANKS

by rangalua Mon Sep 07, 2009 4:53 pm

by rangalua Mon Sep 07, 2009 5:03 pm

by render master Mon Sep 07, 2009 5:33 pm

-iyong naka hang na lights sir di bagay sa room - pang focus light iyan sir ( imho)

- medyo saturated sir ang color ( or baka sa monitor ko lang)

-bawas konti ng intensity sa spot light at 3rd image.

Good luck

by rangalua Mon Sep 07, 2009 5:38 pm

render master wrote:-iyong naka hang na lights sir di bagay sa room - pang focus light iyan sir ( imho)

- medyo saturated sir ang color ( or baka sa monitor ko lang)

-bawas konti ng intensity sa spot light at 3rd image.

Good luck

Thanks Master...I will revise it

by yaug_03 Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:22 pm

-adjust background on the third image.
-improve composition,I can't get your design approach.
-a little tweak on your lighting, maybe adjust the intensity of of your lights, don't make it too uniform.
I'll wait for your revisions, I've seen your posts before, maganda naman sila thumbsup

by bokkins Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:37 pm

lagyan mo ng rectangular vray lights dun sa cove mo sa first image para magwash-out talaga ang effect ng indirect light. kung pwede, itago mo pa ang light material mo para hindi maging jagged ang edges.

also, lakihan mo ang painting sa headboard para mas lulutang sya sa design. saka bawasan mo ang pinlights. pwede mo na din tanggaling ang mga droplights. goodluck.

by jarul Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:52 pm

yun oh..sinabi na lahat mga bosing,,update nyo po eto base sa mga cc nila...
thumbsup

by nomeradona Mon Sep 07, 2009 9:11 pm

a bit burned yung floor. try to lower the multiplier. or compensate with color mapping. use exponential perhaps. maganda naman ang design. just avoid obvious repetition of elements like the vase. siguro ikot mo ng kaunti at rescale yung twigs para hindi clone tingnan.