Exterior Practice (Update)

Good day CGP first try sa exterior rendering naman, need your C&C's mga masters for improvement. This was modeled in Autocad '09, rendered in max '09 & vray sympre + PS, banatan nyo na mga mam & sir thanks!...........

Hi po mga mam & sir, here's my update based on your comments, thank you din sa ating ever trusted tutorials section c&c's po ulit mga mam & sir, thanks CGP

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update

ayus sir ang lighting, the modelling is good.... texturing is nice also... except sir sa car, medyo off kc ung pagkakalagay ng car,,, pero all in all, aproved.... galing,,, keep it up!!!!

welcome sa first post mo ng exterior.. lighting is ok.. a little green na will do.. keep it up.

practice lang ng practice bro makukuha din ang kilit ng exterior for now e congratulate na lang kita sa good lighting mo. comments would be on your camera view, car shader (opaqued), glass/window shader (tinted masyado), brick inlay (looks stretched), roadmap, brick pavement scaling, curbs. i hope makatulong bro

- glass materials for me sir. put something inside ( curtains, blinds and some lights, gaganda ang glass mo nyan).

good luck sa susunod na render

nice work sir ...! sakin ung texture ng stones s fnce saka sa house na din... parang stretch....! or ganun talga un sir...! biloin mo ng onti ung mga sharp edges sir... e.g. sidewalk...and siguro if your presenting a realistic scene dapat siguro ung katabing building e... my textures na din.... imho lang naman...! overall galeng sir... lalo n lighting...! post more

ok to bro. yung mga mapping mo lang bro take note. add mo lang ng uvw map modifier para maadjust mo. and ok din kung eye level ang camera tapos naka camera correction. good luck dito!

-ok na praktis sir... yung car lang, medyo off tlaga.

hmm malinis sir.. try to lower the camera and cgro wag ng rpc car.. hehe.. ganun pa man ayus na sir

pixelburn wrote:ayus sir ang lighting, the modelling is good.... texturing is nice also... except sir sa car, medyo off kc ung pagkakalagay ng car,,, pero all in all, aproved.... galing,,, keep it up!!!!

Thanks sa comments sir pixelburn, yup, palitan ko po un car.

aldrinv2 wrote:welcome sa first post mo ng exterior.. lighting is ok.. a little green na will do.. keep it up.

noted po sir aldrinv2, salamat po

kietsmark wrote:practice lang ng practice bro makukuha din ang kilit ng exterior for now e congratulate na lang kita sa good lighting mo. comments would be on your camera view, car shader (opaqued), glass/window shader (tinted masyado), brick inlay (looks stretched), roadmap, brick pavement scaling, curbs. i hope makatulong bro

yes sir, practice lang ng practice & laking tulong din nun mga tutorials dito sa cgp thank you sir kietsmark, noted po lahat ng comments nyo sir, tnx!

render master wrote:- glass materials for me sir. put something inside ( curtains, blinds and some lights, gaganda ang glass mo nyan).

good luck sa susunod na render

thank you po render master

Stryker wrote:nice work sir ...! sakin ung texture ng stones s fnce saka sa house na din... parang stretch....! or ganun talga un sir...! biloin mo ng onti ung mga sharp edges sir... e.g. sidewalk...and siguro if your presenting a realistic scene dapat siguro ung katabing building e... my textures na din.... imho lang naman...! overall galeng sir... lalo n lighting...! post more

Thank you sir stryker stretched out nga un bricks nya, update ko na lng to sir, noted po lahat ng comments

bokkins wrote:ok to bro. yung mga mapping mo lang bro take note. add mo lang ng uvw map modifier para maadjust mo. and ok din kung eye level ang camera tapos naka camera correction. good luck dito!

Thank you sir bokkins, update ko to sir, thanks sa mga comments

deosrock wrote:-ok na praktis sir... yung car lang, medyo off tlaga.

salamat sir, palitan ko na lng un car

ishae_clanx wrote:

jhames joe albert infante wrote:hmm malinis sir.. try to lower the camera and cgro wag ng rpc car.. hehe.. ganun pa man ayus na sir

salamat sir Jhames noted po lahat sir

good job bro,specially sa modelling,rendering imho kunting adjust pa.cam correction lang din,man's eye view much better.keep it up bro! thanks for sharing...

jenaro wrote:good job bro,specially sa modelling,rendering imho kunting adjust pa.cam correction lang din,man's eye view much better.keep it up bro! thanks for sharing...

noted po, thank you sir jenaro

NIce lighting sir! keep on posting

callow_arki28 wrote:NIce lighting sir! keep on posting

salamat po sir

bro..congrats sa 1st post mo.. ..may mga suhuestyon lng ako..

-1st yung car bro..sana wag na rpc..off kasi bro...
-some mapping issues bro..yung ibang mats nastretch...and flat tignan..adjust mo pa bro..
-yung windows bro..lagyan mo sa loob ng curtains or rollers..para mas maganda tignan...
-yung katabing strcuture nya..lagyan mo rin bro ng specific na color like wyt..para mas buhay...

sana makatulong...enewei..nice lighting...

thanks sir gamer_11 naninibago pa sa exterior update ko to sir, thanks sa mga suggestions, noted lahat yan sir

not bad for the first timer sir! yung gutter medyo sharp edges but the
rest is ok!

nice try for your first ext sir,, bit noisy lng po cguro,,ok po un lighting,,texturing and mapping lng po cguro kulang practice pa po..keep it up

Good job sir!! nice lighting!

sir ok ung lighting... medyo maalikabok lng po ung auto... all in all ok n sya kng yan lang talga ang budget ng client

good lighting bro.. almost there... work on your textures... mejo stretched ung iba...keep it up!

alwin wrote:not bad for the first timer sir! yung gutter medyo sharp edges but the
rest is ok!

salamat po sir alwin

ME_nesperos_27 wrote:nice try for your first ext sir,, bit noisy lng po cguro,,ok po un lighting,,texturing and mapping lng po cguro kulang practice pa po..keep it up

noted po, i'll update this one sir, thank you sir

ortzak wrote:Good job sir!! nice lighting!

salamat sir ortzak

B_L_O_Q wrote:sir ok ung lighting... medyo maalikabok lng po ung auto... all in all ok n sya kng yan lang talga ang budget ng client

thank you sir, papalitan ko na un auto i-post ko po ulit un updated nito

SunDance wrote:good lighting bro.. almost there... work on your textures... mejo stretched ung iba...keep it up!

salamat sir SunDance, noted po sir i'll soon post the update.

nice try! same comments bro..

nasabi na lahat ung coment.just practice.and explore brow.makukuha mo rin nyan.keep it up.