exterior practice update
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darwinzzkie
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exterior practice update
mga master, update ko lng ung 2nd post ko, sinubukan ko po iapply ung mga advice nyo sana magustuhan nyo at paki cc narin po ulit para ma improve ko pa po lalo... thank you po mga masters!!!
Last edited by callow_arki28 on Sun Mar 08, 2009 1:06 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : update)
callow_arki28- CGP Apprentice
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Re: exterior practice update
ayun bumanat na nman.
matulog kana baka ma Francis M. tau ahaha
ok ung sky yun nga lang yung sasakyan mo masyado lumutang ung red na van center of attraction.
try to add some landscape pla kung kakayanin. yung tao nag noise.
matulog kana baka ma Francis M. tau ahaha
ok ung sky yun nga lang yung sasakyan mo masyado lumutang ung red na van center of attraction.
try to add some landscape pla kung kakayanin. yung tao nag noise.
Last edited by darwinzzkie on Fri Mar 06, 2009 11:14 am; edited 2 times in total
darwinzzkie- Guwapingz
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Re: exterior practice update
darwinzzkie wrote:ayun bumanat na nman.
matulog kana baka ma Francis M. tau ahaha
ok ung sky yun nga lang yung sasakyan mo masyado lumutang ung red na van center of attraction.
hayaan mo master sa third post update ko ulit saka papa carnap ko na yang van hehehe! thank you po sir darwin!
callow_arki28- CGP Apprentice
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Re: exterior practice update
try to change the composition sir...the red van is very eye catching, agaw eksena kung baga and don't put it on center para mas mabigayang attention ang subject mo.Second, yung image na nilagay mo sa loob is distorted sir, lagyan mo nalang siguro ng reflection ang window glass mo para may mas buhay. yun lamang po muna at bahala na ang ibang mga masters natin dyan. keep it up bro!
Re: exterior practice update
well nasbi na po pero ganyan tlga minsan may magandang gawa at minsan di gano mgandang ang gawa ntin kya praktis lang ser katulad ko lagi praktis para gumanda ang trabaho nice one bro GODBLESS
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Re: exterior practice update
uwak wrote:try to change the composition sir...the red van is very eye catching, agaw eksena kung baga and don't put it on center para mas mabigayang attention ang subject mo.Second, yung image na nilagay mo sa loob is distorted sir, lagyan mo nalang siguro ng reflection ang window glass mo para may mas buhay. yun lamang po muna at bahala na ang ibang mga masters natin dyan. keep it up bro!
sir, salamat po sa mga cc nyo, i'll try to consider it next update ko po, post ko po ulit. thank you po ulit sir!
callow_arki28- CGP Apprentice
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Re: exterior practice update
Mas ok ito kesa nauna,ganito rin ako nung nagumpisa, i prefer yung orange van naka parallel parking sa daan para di matabunan yung bldg entrance.
yung interior ok na, medyo di lang tumama yung vanishing point .
yung window glass ok na kc transparent sya, konting reflection lang sir para buhay.
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yung interior ok na, medyo di lang tumama yung vanishing point .
yung window glass ok na kc transparent sya, konting reflection lang sir para buhay.
post more
Re: exterior practice update
sir... definitely add green sa render mo... trees are very important.. ito ung nagpapabuhay ng eksena din eh. as of now.. this one looks very bare. and the interior's u want to expose... di sya ng match sa horizon nga. better take it away... try mo nlng ipa reflect ung glass mo. para di maxado halata ung loob.. and just maybe add blinds if it works... and i cant see kung ano ung gusto mo na ipakita sa render... maybe try to get a subject para mas maliwanag kung ano ung gusto mo iparating. i.e.. the entrance of your building. sana makatulong...
vamp_lestat- CGP Guru
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Re: exterior practice update
vamp_lestat wrote:sir... definitely add green sa render mo... trees are very important.. ito ung nagpapabuhay ng eksena din eh. as of now.. this one looks very bare. and the interior's u want to expose... di sya ng match sa horizon nga. better take it away... try mo nlng ipa reflect ung glass mo. para di maxado halata ung loob.. and just maybe add blinds if it works... and i cant see kung ano ung gusto mo na ipakita sa render... maybe try to get a subject para mas maliwanag kung ano ung gusto mo iparating. i.e.. the entrance of your building. sana makatulong...
sir thank you po sa suggestions!
callow_arki28- CGP Apprentice
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Re: exterior practice update
i3dness wrote:Mas ok ito kesa nauna,ganito rin ako nung nagumpisa, i prefer yung orange van naka parallel parking sa daan para di matabunan yung bldg entrance.
yung interior ok na, medyo di lang tumama yung vanishing point .
yung window glass ok na kc transparent sya, konting reflection lang sir para buhay.
post more
thank you po sir!
callow_arki28- CGP Apprentice
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