My PROPOSAL

how can I improve this? help mga master

-is it a lobby? a seating area? paki-define lang ng room sir.

its a living room master

rangalua wrote:its a living room master

1. try to add some accessories to like a couch, an armchair, a bar stool maybe doon sa may bar area. it will also brings your render image to life...
2. adjust some of your materials specially the ceiling, medyo kita iyong reflected surface nya, lessen mo lang ang glossiness ng material sa ceiling
3. re-align mo ng konti ang mapping ng wooden false beam along its horizontal direction.
4. konting tweak on the contrast
5. lessen ng konti ang intensity ng cove lighting

Tweak your mapping and try to improve camera view (mas maganda kung kita mga sofa or armchair, etc). Lighting is fine except for the cove lighting.

almost there sir.,., nasabi na nila halos pde ikkoment.,. sa render ok na, sgro sir magfocus knalang sa pagtimpla ng mga materials mo bump, glosi,reflect,highlights & ajaz karin sa mga subd.nila para pinong tingnan.,.en lightings too.,.stay kalang lagi dto sir.,. im sure magiging master ka someday.,.,.

i guess you have tendency to use different materials and different colors. try to control this. tendency kasi kapag ganun. lahat gustong magpapansin.
so try to achieve unity in your color pallette...

Agree with sir nomer

pwede p nga ito i-improve sir...just consider things in real life, know every object's behavior in a given space...
malapit na to sir...tambay lng dito...

Sir adjust mo yung cam doon sa first image tapos bawasan ng reflection ang mat. masyado kasing glossy. Wait nalang po ako sa final output nito. Post more sir & have a nice day.

keep going bro, you're in the right track...just finish your work and post it here again...nice work

Thanks Po mga master, I will improve it, PANALO ang CGP, WAGI ang PINOY

cam correction bro.. noise also.. tweak it bro.. pos mor..

Thanks Master