USTYJ inspired bedroom
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USTYJ inspired bedroom
1st post ko dito sa cgp.....sana magustuhan niyo....praktis lang po.....
kainitan kasi ng UAAP season ngayon.....kaya ganyana ang kinalabasan ng design.....
comments and suggestions po are welcome.....salamat mga sir and ma'am
(salamat nga pla sa mga tuts. at tips mo master TIN V.)
kainitan kasi ng UAAP season ngayon.....kaya ganyana ang kinalabasan ng design.....
comments and suggestions po are welcome.....salamat mga sir and ma'am
(salamat nga pla sa mga tuts. at tips mo master TIN V.)
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
nice rendering sir, i mam pala...very sexy!!!
Last edited by bongskeigle on Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:38 am; edited 1 time in total
bongskeigle- CGP Guru
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
Since you are also an atelier. Allow me the privilege of giving you the second commentary:
1. There are staging issues of extreme importance that you must remember when setting up a scene. Does my elements (objects, abubots, characters, etc) tell a convincing story whether real or fantasy?
If the answer is no, it will prevent the audiences' brain from believing the make-believe. It doesn't matter if you have created a near-perfect lighting or realistic rendering when all the elements does not work along with each other. Don't play smorgasboard on your elements otherwise it will go against you as an artist. Like what they probably taught you at the univeristy - Everything has got to be there for a reason. Form follows function and vice versa.
What I see now is a almost half-naked blond who probably likes to play parade drums who also dabbles in photograpy and a fruit basket inside her room.
As an arkivizulaiser - the job is to show the space as habitable and to reflect the character of the person(s) who will be interacting in the space.
I rest my case.
2. Technically, as for lighting and all that - I couldn't see any distinguishable difference between the day and night scene. During the night - make sure that more of the artificial lighting from the ceilings, lamps etc come to play. For day time and a shot infront of a wide window opening - I'd expect the lights from the environment and the sun to show it's effect.
3. I would like to comment more on the other areas like samplings, materials or noise but I'd do so once the more important aspects that I have suggested in no. 1 gets its proper attention.
Welcome to cgp.
1. There are staging issues of extreme importance that you must remember when setting up a scene. Does my elements (objects, abubots, characters, etc) tell a convincing story whether real or fantasy?
If the answer is no, it will prevent the audiences' brain from believing the make-believe. It doesn't matter if you have created a near-perfect lighting or realistic rendering when all the elements does not work along with each other. Don't play smorgasboard on your elements otherwise it will go against you as an artist. Like what they probably taught you at the univeristy - Everything has got to be there for a reason. Form follows function and vice versa.
What I see now is a almost half-naked blond who probably likes to play parade drums who also dabbles in photograpy and a fruit basket inside her room.
As an arkivizulaiser - the job is to show the space as habitable and to reflect the character of the person(s) who will be interacting in the space.
I rest my case.
2. Technically, as for lighting and all that - I couldn't see any distinguishable difference between the day and night scene. During the night - make sure that more of the artificial lighting from the ceilings, lamps etc come to play. For day time and a shot infront of a wide window opening - I'd expect the lights from the environment and the sun to show it's effect.
3. I would like to comment more on the other areas like samplings, materials or noise but I'd do so once the more important aspects that I have suggested in no. 1 gets its proper attention.
Welcome to cgp.
Last edited by v_wrangler on Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:00 pm; edited 2 times in total
Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
wow! Go USTe! Go USTe! Go USte! Go! Go! Go!
nice render my fellow Thomasian
comment lang po sa mapping ng wood at carpet (adjust mo na lang po sa UVWmap)
pero ganda ha YJ na YJ ang Dating!
Post more!
Tin V.? Tin Valiente? ID ka din ba Sis?
nice render my fellow Thomasian
comment lang po sa mapping ng wood at carpet (adjust mo na lang po sa UVWmap)
pero ganda ha YJ na YJ ang Dating!
Post more!
kittYJ wrote: (salamat nga pla sa mga tuts. at tips mo master TIN V.)
Tin V.? Tin Valiente? ID ka din ba Sis?
kyofuu- CGP Apprentice
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
Agree with sir v_wrangler.....nice sets of images though....welcome to cgp!!
archi_ram- CGP Guru
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
uy tol laki ng improvments mo, tambay ka lang dito ang listen to the masters!!! keep posting!
Bosepvance- CGP Apprentice
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
bongskeigle wrote:nice rendering sir...very sexy!!!
salamat din sir.....kailangan pang mag improve....salamat
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Age : 39
Location : University of Santo Tomas
Registration date : 19/08/2009
Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
v_wrangler wrote:Since you are also an atelier. Allow me the privilege of giving you the second commentary:
1. There are staging issues of extreme importance that you must remember when setting up a scene. Does my elements (objects, abubots, characters, etc) tell a convincing story whether real or fantasy?
If the answer is no, it will prevent the audiences' brain from believing the make-believe. It doesn't matter if you have created a near-perfect lighting or realistic rendering when all the elements does not work along with each other. Don't play smorgasboard on your elements otherwise it will go against you as an artist. Like what they probably taught you at the univeristy - Everything has got to be there for a reason. Form follows function and vice versa.
What I see now is a almost half-naked blond who probably likes to play parade drums who also dabbles in photograpy and a fruit basket inside her room.
As an arkivizulaiser - the job is to show the space as habitable and to reflect the character of the person(s) who will be interacting in the space.
I rest my case.
2. Technically, as for lighting and all that - I couldn't see any distinguishable difference between the day and night scene. During the night - make sure that more of the artificial lighting from the ceilings, lamps etc come to play. For day time and a shot infront of a wide window opening - I'd expect the lights from the environment and the sun to show it's effect.
3. I would like to comment more on the other areas like samplings, materials or noise but I'd do so once the more important aspects that I have suggested in no. 1 gets its proper attention.
Welcome to cgp.
salamat sa comment sir.....take note ko lahat yan.....kailangan pa talaga mag praktis......at madami pang matutunan.....baguhan lang talaga ko sa max at vray......sa artificial lighting kasi.....di na kaya irender ng pc ko....kaya di ko na malagyan ng ies.......kaya simple nlng muna ginawa kong lighting effect sa nyt scene.....at sa drums naman...parang di kumpleto ang pagiging isang YJ kung walang bass at snare kaya pinilit ko talagang ilagay sa scene yan sir.....salamat sa malaman na comments
Last edited by kittYJ on Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:19 am; edited 2 times in total
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Location : University of Santo Tomas
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
kyofuu wrote:wow! Go USTe! Go USTe! Go USte! Go! Go! Go!
nice render my fellow Thomasian
comment lang po sa mapping ng wood at carpet (adjust mo na lang po sa UVWmap)
pero ganda ha YJ na YJ ang Dating!
Post more!kittYJ wrote: (salamat nga pla sa mga tuts. at tips mo master TIN V.)
Tin V.? Tin Valiente? ID ka din ba Sis?
hehe GO USTE! salamat ma'am.......adik sa YJ eh...haha...
oo si tin valiente nga......siya kasi ng bibigay ng mga tips sakin.....ID rin ako.....kbtach ko siya.......
tska di po ako "sis" hehe
salamats ulet
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
nice one comments have been said.... welcome to cgp, enjoy
snow_blind- CGP Apprentice
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
ay sorry hahaha, kabatch ko din kaya si tinie
kyofuu- CGP Apprentice
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
Bosepvance wrote:uy tol laki ng improvments mo, tambay ka lang dito ang listen to the masters!!! keep posting!
kuya bosep! haha salamat sa pag daan...praktis praktis lang pag walang magawa sa bahay..haha! salamat sa pag daan
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
anung kuya? iasang buwan lang pagitan naten a! hehehehe ur welcome bro, ask ka lang sa mga masters dito mababait naman sila e... gud luck!
Bosepvance- CGP Apprentice
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
kyofuu wrote:ay sorry hahaha, kabatch ko din kaya si tinie
naku...oks lang yun haha ...mag kbtach din pala tayo ma'am....ID4-1 ako
hehe....salamat ulet ma'am
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
4-3 ako sabay kami ni Drew nag grad.. ui! ganda ng render mo para sa baguhan ok yan practice lng
kyofuu- CGP Apprentice
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
i agree what the wrangler said,,,and i see you have great potential to be a master,,,kip on posting
Muggz- CGP Guru
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
welcome brow! nice sets of render...ung siko ng babae syang di na sana natamaan ng cam ndi kc smooth..romantic sets! ust din ako kabatch ko c jose r.hehe jok lng po..post more!
Last edited by remlex on Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:48 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
kyofuu wrote:4-3 ako sabay kami ni Drew nag grad.. ui! ganda ng render mo para sa baguhan ok yan practice lng
ahhh...oks...si drew! haha! rasta yun eh! haha!
idol ko yun si drew...
lahat ng natutunan ko sa scene na yan galing lahat ke tin v.
salamats ulet ma'am
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
go lng ng go sis!!!tambay ka lang dito...marami kang makukuhang aral!!!
yu rak!!!!
yu rak!!!!
gamer_11- CGP Apprentice
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
Nice output sa Rendering pero agree ako kay Sir V you sould set first your theme! Tyaka may mapping issue! konting adjust lang sa UV map. Iniwasan morin sana ang paglagay ng books na repeated na iisa lang ang maps! At sa Wall na may Back lighted USt Logo! Reception table nalang ang kulang..... Joke!!! Peace Post more pa uli!
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
Muggz wrote:i agree what the wrangler said,,,and i see you have great potential to be a master,,,kip on posting
salamats sir.........salamat sa pagdaan at sa time niyo.......
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Age : 39
Location : University of Santo Tomas
Registration date : 19/08/2009
Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
remlex wrote:welcome brow! nice sets of render...ung siko ng babae syang di na sana natamaan ng cam ndi kc smooth..romantic sets! ust din ako kabatch ko c jose r.hehe jok lng po..post more!
salamats sir........talagang kailangan pa mag praktis...newbie pa lang talaga sa max at vray.......salamat ulet
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
gamer_11 wrote:go lng ng go sis!!!tambay ka lang dito...marami kang makukuhang aral!!!
yu rak!!!!
salamat sir......praktis nga lang ng praktis! tska di po ako "sis" sir...hahaha
salamat ulet
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
wow... nakakagulat ka naman kit. nagpost ka na pala... kaw talaga.. ano ba naituro ko dito.. hehe.. determined ka kasi kaya ka nakagawa ng masterpiece hehe.. nice work.. ilang months ka palang tapos ganito na kaganda. tambay ka lang dito and keep posting so we can learn more & improve. keep it up kit.. Go Uste!
Re: USTYJ inspired bedroom
jg1124 wrote:Nice output sa Rendering pero agree ako kay Sir V you sould set first your theme! Tyaka may mapping issue! konting adjust lang sa UV map. Iniwasan morin sana ang paglagay ng books na repeated na iisa lang ang maps! At sa Wall na may Back lighted USt Logo! Reception table nalang ang kulang..... Joke!!! Peace Post more pa uli!
salamat master! nextym ayusin ko na lahat......
kittYJ- CGP Newbie
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