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Post by kittYJ Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:41 pm

1st post ko dito sa cgp.....sana magustuhan niyo....praktis lang po.....
kainitan kasi ng UAAP season ngayon.....kaya ganyana ang kinalabasan ng design.....
comments and suggestions po are welcome.....salamat mga sir and ma'am

(salamat nga pla sa mga tuts. at tips mo master TIN V.) thumbsup

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Post by bongskeigle Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:51 pm

nice rendering sir, i mam pala...very sexy!!! 2thumbsup


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Post by v_wrangler Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:58 pm

Since you are also an atelier. Allow me the privilege of giving you the second commentary:

1. There are staging issues of extreme importance that you must remember when setting up a scene. Does my elements (objects, abubots, characters, etc) tell a convincing story whether real or fantasy?

If the answer is no, it will prevent the audiences' brain from believing the make-believe. It doesn't matter if you have created a near-perfect lighting or realistic rendering when all the elements does not work along with each other. Don't play smorgasboard on your elements otherwise it will go against you as an artist. Like what they probably taught you at the univeristy - Everything has got to be there for a reason. Form follows function and vice versa.

What I see now is a almost half-naked blond who probably likes to play parade drums who also dabbles in photograpy and a fruit basket inside her room.

As an arkivizulaiser - the job is to show the space as habitable and to reflect the character of the person(s) who will be interacting in the space.

I rest my case.

2. Technically, as for lighting and all that - I couldn't see any distinguishable difference between the day and night scene. During the night - make sure that more of the artificial lighting from the ceilings, lamps etc come to play. For day time and a shot infront of a wide window opening - I'd expect the lights from the environment and the sun to show it's effect.

3. I would like to comment more on the other areas like samplings, materials or noise but I'd do so once the more important aspects that I have suggested in no. 1 gets its proper attention.

Welcome to cgp.


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Post by kyofuu Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:58 pm

wow! Go USTe! Go USTe! Go USte! Go! Go! Go!
nice render my fellow Thomasian

comment lang po sa mapping ng wood at carpet (adjust mo na lang po sa UVWmap)

pero ganda ha YJ na YJ ang Dating!
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kittYJ wrote: (salamat nga pla sa mga tuts. at tips mo master TIN V.) thumbsup

Tin V.? Tin Valiente? ID ka din ba Sis?
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Post by archi_ram Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:39 pm

Agree with sir v_wrangler.....nice sets of images though....welcome to cgp!!
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Post by Bosepvance Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:54 pm

uy tol laki ng improvments mo, tambay ka lang dito ang listen to the masters!!! keep posting!
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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:00 am

bongskeigle wrote:nice rendering sir...very sexy!!! 2thumbsup

salamat din sir.....kailangan pang mag improve....salamat
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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:04 am

v_wrangler wrote:Since you are also an atelier. Allow me the privilege of giving you the second commentary:

1. There are staging issues of extreme importance that you must remember when setting up a scene. Does my elements (objects, abubots, characters, etc) tell a convincing story whether real or fantasy?

If the answer is no, it will prevent the audiences' brain from believing the make-believe. It doesn't matter if you have created a near-perfect lighting or realistic rendering when all the elements does not work along with each other. Don't play smorgasboard on your elements otherwise it will go against you as an artist. Like what they probably taught you at the univeristy - Everything has got to be there for a reason. Form follows function and vice versa.

What I see now is a almost half-naked blond who probably likes to play parade drums who also dabbles in photograpy and a fruit basket inside her room.

As an arkivizulaiser - the job is to show the space as habitable and to reflect the character of the person(s) who will be interacting in the space.

I rest my case.

2. Technically, as for lighting and all that - I couldn't see any distinguishable difference between the day and night scene. During the night - make sure that more of the artificial lighting from the ceilings, lamps etc come to play. For day time and a shot infront of a wide window opening - I'd expect the lights from the environment and the sun to show it's effect.

3. I would like to comment more on the other areas like samplings, materials or noise but I'd do so once the more important aspects that I have suggested in no. 1 gets its proper attention.

Welcome to cgp.


salamat sa comment sir.....take note ko lahat yan.....kailangan pa talaga mag praktis......at madami pang matutunan.....baguhan lang talaga ko sa max at vray......sa artificial lighting kasi.....di na kaya irender ng pc ko....kaya di ko na malagyan ng ies.......kaya simple nlng muna ginawa kong lighting effect sa nyt scene.....at sa drums naman...parang di kumpleto ang pagiging isang YJ kung walang bass at snare kaya pinilit ko talagang ilagay sa scene yan sir.....salamat sa malaman na comments Very Happy


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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:08 am

kyofuu wrote:wow! Go USTe! Go USTe! Go USte! Go! Go! Go!
nice render my fellow Thomasian

comment lang po sa mapping ng wood at carpet (adjust mo na lang po sa UVWmap)

pero ganda ha YJ na YJ ang Dating!
Post more!

kittYJ wrote: (salamat nga pla sa mga tuts. at tips mo master TIN V.) thumbsup

Tin V.? Tin Valiente? ID ka din ba Sis?


hehe GO USTE! salamat ma'am.......adik sa YJ eh...haha...
oo si tin valiente nga......siya kasi ng bibigay ng mga tips sakin.....ID rin ako.....kbtach ko siya.......
tska di po ako "sis" hehe

salamats ulet Very Happy thumbsup
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Post by snow_blind Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:09 am

nice one 2thumbsup comments have been said.... welcome to cgp, enjoy buttrock
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Post by kyofuu Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:09 am

ay sorry hahaha, kabatch ko din kaya si tinie 2thumbsup
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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:09 am

Bosepvance wrote:uy tol laki ng improvments mo, tambay ka lang dito ang listen to the masters!!! keep posting!

kuya bosep! haha salamat sa pag daan...praktis praktis lang pag walang magawa sa bahay..haha! salamat sa pag daan
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Post by Bosepvance Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:14 am

anung kuya? iasang buwan lang pagitan naten a! hehehehe ur welcome bro, ask ka lang sa mga masters dito mababait naman sila e... gud luck!
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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:16 am

kyofuu wrote:ay sorry hahaha, kabatch ko din kaya si tinie 2thumbsup

naku...oks lang yun haha thumbsup ...mag kbtach din pala tayo ma'am....ID4-1 ako
hehe....salamat ulet ma'am
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Post by kyofuu Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:19 am

4-3 ako sabay kami ni Drew nag grad.. thumbsup ui! ganda ng render mo para sa baguhan 2thumbsup ok yan practice lng
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Post by Muggz Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:21 am

i agree what the wrangler said,,,and i see you have great potential to be a master,,,kip on posting thumbsup
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Post by remlex Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:28 am

welcome brow! nice sets of render...ung siko ng babae syang di na sana natamaan ng cam ndi kc smooth..romantic sets! buttrock ust din ako kabatch ko c jose r.hehe jok lng po..post more!


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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:38 am

kyofuu wrote:4-3 ako sabay kami ni Drew nag grad.. thumbsup ui! ganda ng render mo para sa baguhan 2thumbsup ok yan practice lng

ahhh...oks...si drew! haha! rasta yun eh! haha! buttrock
idol ko yun si drew...
lahat ng natutunan ko sa scene na yan galing lahat ke tin v.
salamats ulet ma'am
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Post by gamer_11 Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:43 am

go lng ng go sis!!!tambay ka lang dito...marami kang makukuhang aral!!! buttrock
yu rak!!!! buttrock
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Post by jg1124 Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:50 am

Nice output sa Rendering pero agree ako kay Sir V you sould set first your theme! Tyaka may mapping issue! konting adjust lang sa UV map. Iniwasan morin sana ang paglagay ng books na repeated na iisa lang ang maps! At sa Wall na may Back lighted USt Logo! Reception table nalang ang kulang..... Joke!!! Laughing Peace peace man Post more pa uli!
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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:52 am

Muggz wrote:i agree what the wrangler said,,,and i see you have great potential to be a master,,,kip on posting thumbsup

salamats sir.........salamat sa pagdaan at sa time niyo.......
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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:54 am

remlex wrote:welcome brow! nice sets of render...ung siko ng babae syang di na sana natamaan ng cam ndi kc smooth..romantic sets! buttrock ust din ako kabatch ko c jose r.hehe jok lng po..post more!

salamats sir........talagang kailangan pa mag praktis...newbie pa lang talaga sa max at vray.......salamat ulet thumbsup
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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:55 am

gamer_11 wrote:go lng ng go sis!!!tambay ka lang dito...marami kang makukuhang aral!!! buttrock
yu rak!!!! buttrock

salamat sir......praktis nga lang ng praktis! tska di po ako "sis" sir...hahaha
salamat ulet Very Happy
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Post by christine Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:57 am

wow... nakakagulat ka naman kit. nagpost ka na pala... kaw talaga.. ano ba naituro ko dito.. hehe.. determined ka kasi kaya ka nakagawa ng masterpiece Wink hehe.. nice work.. ilang months ka palang tapos ganito na kaganda. tambay ka lang dito and keep posting so we can learn more & improve. keep it up kit.. Go Uste! thumbsup
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Post by kittYJ Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:09 am

jg1124 wrote:Nice output sa Rendering pero agree ako kay Sir V you sould set first your theme! Tyaka may mapping issue! konting adjust lang sa UV map. Iniwasan morin sana ang paglagay ng books na repeated na iisa lang ang maps! At sa Wall na may Back lighted USt Logo! Reception table nalang ang kulang..... Joke!!! Laughing Peace peace man Post more pa uli!

salamat master! nextym ayusin ko na lahat...... thumbsup
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