Bahay ko... Sa Pangalawang Pagsubok

archbmc77 wrote:Sir, diko nakita una mong render ah, anyway, sir IMHO lang po ha, konti nalang sir makukuha mo na, sabi nga nila may portion na madilim pero ok lang yan sir you are in the right track. dagdagan ko lang po sir ha, yung roof sir roof tile ba yun o corrugated? tapos sir more shadows pa sa road kasi masyado maliwanag. in general sir nasa ibang level na to sir. keep it up sir. Susundan ko mga gawa mo sir.

pakunat wrote:vraypcam ba gamit mo dre? kasi ung vigneting prang sobra. observation ko lang dre. the design is great. posmor

deosrock wrote:--nice output sir!!
---comments, nasabi na nila.. kip up!

mammoo_03 wrote:sir mailman, ganda nito ah, ganda bahay mo bong, hehehe!!! anways, konting konti nalang madadali mo na ito sir. try to experiment on direct light with vray shadows then add ka nang vray dome, etc. thanks for sharing bro, astig na banat mo.

jarul wrote:- glass reflction tweak pa, ung rflction ng coconut o palm ba yan sa window..para syang nasa loob ng room
- harsh shadows
- too much contrast
- sunlight is too much
- overburn parts
- ngtataka ako sa mat ng roof eaves? roof tile ba yan?
- road bump is too much..dsplacemnt ba yan?
- mat din ng sydwalk ..
- add wall lamps
- bumaon ng kaunti ung gulong ng car.

update nyo po eto ser...

pixelburn wrote:ganda nito bro, ang ganda ng design, galing... ito ba ung bahay mo sa calamba?

x2fer wrote: iba tlaga ang ngppractice....kuha mo na sir! nasabi na nila ang comments, yun n yun sir...congrats!

mcgoogles wrote:galing po nito ser...
i like the design

konting tweak na lang sa glass material at sa reflection ng car., kuhang kuha na..

namby_pamby wrote:sir fine rendering, sa tingin ko masyado lang macontrast yung image, try mo hinaan ang sun tpos taasan mo yung g.i para marelax ng kaunti yung mga shadows at hindi dark masyado

novice wrote:mail man i have some points re sa post mo.

-matapang ang red hue mo sa roof
-better kung crop mo konti ung sa part ng sky, kasi empty space lang naman sha.
-ung eaves mo bakit same material ng roofing?
-try to change yung bg, low res kasi siya.
-nice ground map and shadow effects sa 1st image.

hope nakahelp ako kahit konti. imho lang po lahat.

hero_heart1125 wrote:nice one sir medjo parang kulang po yata ang scene bakit wala pow ung may ari , hehehe, superb na sakin ang render, post most

arkitrix wrote: very nice sir mailman...keep posting..

Noel_Diaz wrote:nice output sir,,, nasab napo comments,,, keep it up sir!!!

vamp_lestat wrote:ganda po ng bahay nyo sir.. siguro comment ko lang is ung background should more or less sumabay sa lighting ng scene...

alwin wrote:great job well done!

Modoler wrote:Magandang scene eto Sir. I don't have experience with archi modelling pero impressive po eto sa aki at inspiring. Hopefully I can do environment renders rin po someday. Thank you for sharing at keep on posting rin po!

arkiedmund wrote:Ayos na ayos..medyo, madilim lang ang ibang spots, good modeling.