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Post by egypt Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:31 am

may oras para mag practice. laru laru lang po. low settings palang. update nalng po ako uli pag may oras uli na vacant salamat po sa mga comments and suggestions in advance


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Post by LadiesMan217 Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:35 am

buttrock ayos sir..wait natin yung mga master


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Post by deosrock Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:38 am

-nice post sir!
--tanggalin mo kaya yung kotse sa harap... IMHO lang naman.
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Post by celes Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:42 am

i have mixed feelings about this render.

on one hand it looks very real, and yet there are some issues that need more tweaking - the reflection on the railings look unnatural, and the orange tree looks out of place.

like what the others have said, you can do away with the car.
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Post by jarul Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:44 am

yes,,bahay po yan

- colorbleeding
- check ur rflction map..medyo mataas..ibaba mo lng
- leaks
- alisin ang car sa harap

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Post by zildian_nico Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:52 am

nice render sir...comment nasabi nah... thumbsup
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Post by cloud20 Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:09 am

Aside from what the masters have said: edges seem to stand out too much... Kaunting kaunting tweak na lang...
Pero sold na sa client ito...
Nice work sir...
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Post by arkibons Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:51 am

i'll agree with the master it must be your grass that cause color bledding... your building is not light green for sure... the orange tree is distracting agaw pansin kaysa sa bahay glass is too reflective...imho lang...

palitan mo nalang ang orange at correct mo color bledding its a big leap already....
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Post by white_line Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:43 am

bahay ko yan! hehehehehehe
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Post by balongeisler Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:47 am

green na green..

colorbleeding tol..
agaw pansin ung car at orange tree..

nice one indeed.keep it up. 2thumbsup
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Post by cgil Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:09 am

sa tingin ko ba to na bahay? ha ha ha!!! remove the car... change your orange trees... nawawala yung focus ng bahay ba to?... keep rockin bro... almost real!
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