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My 1st render using vray and 3dmax.

Eto na po update ko for my first post. Natagalan kasi maraming work eh. Comments are very welcome. Thanks.



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Mam, galing ng 1st try nyo sa vray and max. konti nalang mam makukuha mo na. hayaan ko na ang mga master mag comment ng ibang major comments. keep on practicing mam,

nerak_zuproc wrote:My 1st render using vray and 3dmax. Need comment for improvement.

nice bg po.. erhm.. try reduce a lil sunlight po... para na kasing naging illuminated na yung gutter sa front part...
ung roof po add more displacement... ung grass ngrepeat ata siya. check the tiling po

nice render Welcome po sa forum... Feel free to ask po.... Matulungin lahat ng taga CGP

Cheers,
jovanie_

mam welcome po sa cgp, not bad for your first post, good modeling and composition, comment ko lang po, kulang nang shadow at bump sa bubong. paki check nalang din po ulit yung orientation nang sun natin. thanks for posting and enjoy your stay.

nice render at design,parang may pag ka filipiniana pa,

this is nice...imho shadow check sa entourage...PS will do here,kunting adjust pa sa displacement for roof...ung maps ng road check mo na din,as for now un muna...wait ko update nito sir!nice lighting!

good design ma'am and nice bg, apply fall-off to ur glass for better reflection...taga ilokos po pala kayo, practice makes perfect kip postin'..

archi_ram wrote:good design ma'am and nice bg, apply fall-off to ur glass for better reflection...taga ilokos po pala kayo, practice makes perfect kip postin'..

Yup, im from Laoag City. Sige try kung irender ulit for improvement.

Wala talaga akung ginamit na displacement dito. Nahihirapan ako sa displacement eh.

ma'am u can make diplacement image in ps, use the same material (e.g. - grass) and make it b&w then apply it in vraydisplacementmod increase d amount, u can find these tutorials at techie corner, from ilokos din po ako.

archi_ram wrote:ma'am u can make diplacement image in ps, use the same material (e.g. - grass) and make it b&w then apply it in vraydisplacementmod increase d amount, u can find these tutorials at techie corner, from ilokos din po ako.

ang prob ko po sa displacement diko makuha yung tamang tiling niya. I dont know kung sa tiling ako mag cocontrol ng size niya. Ang haba ng mga object na nilalagyan ko ng displacement. Siguro more practice pa po about sa isyu na ito. he he

ganda pra sa first post maam . . .

comments are said with the masters . . . keep posting

nerak_zuproc wrote:

archi_ram wrote:ma'am u can make diplacement image in ps, use the same material (e.g. - grass) and make it b&w then apply it in vraydisplacementmod increase d amount, u can find these tutorials at techie corner, from ilokos din po ako.

ang prob ko po sa displacement diko makuha yung tamang tiling niya. I dont know kung sa tiling ako mag cocontrol ng size niya. Ang haba ng mga object na nilalagyan ko ng displacement. Siguro more practice pa po about sa isyu na ito. he he

ok lng po yan maam.. trial and error lng po.... mkukuha nyo rin yan gud luck po

nice one for first try...! masyado ata malaki ung percentage ng BG mo mam compare sa subject mo mam...! not a perfect vista for me....! imho lang po!

welcome to cgp sis. this is already very good for a start. keep it up sis thanks for sharing

mam nerak_zuproc, Welcome po sa CGP...malapit na e...kaunting pihit na lang...lagi ka lang magbasa ng tutorial section...

Maping lang po madadag ko sa comment, pero not bad for your first post! maganda po kasi pagkakamodel and light setting! keep it up

Nakssss..... your first try is already Good...your problem is only the material bitmap that need more bump and also the over -illuminated of the scene ..keep on posting mam and welcome to CGP...

Great start, you'll learn alot here...keep em coming miss. Welcome to CGP

--nice one maam!
--mas maganda pa ito kesa dun sa una kong gawa! he!he!
---kip it up! post more!!!!

kaunti nalang nandun ka na... tambay ka lang dito

welcome sa cgp mam,,, nice start here,,, just keep it up!!! nsabi napo comment,,, keep posting!!!

May potensyal to mam!!di nako magtataka konting mga araw ng pagpapraktis eh malupet ka na

thanks sa lahat ng comments and warm welcoming. heres my update on my first post.

ayos na yong update mo,,, keep posting