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Post by comgrapart Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:40 pm

Mga Sir and Master Update ko lang base po sa mga comments. thanks sa lahat ng nag-comment and more power sa lahat ng member ng cgpinoy

Updated Image:

Bahay ng ate Ko (Updated) Final2StoreyHouse

Work Flow: 3dmax 2011, Vray sp5, Photoshop cs5 : buttrock

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Bahay ng ate Ko (Updated) FINAL

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Bahay ng ate Ko (Updated) FINAL1 buttrock


Last edited by comgrapart on Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:33 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : edited title: (bungalow not appropriate))
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Post by deosrock Sat Sep 04, 2010 6:55 pm

-nice work sir!!! 2thumbsup
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Post by arki_vhin Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:15 pm

nice try may nakita lang akong malaking light leak sa garage..
- sobra sa displacement ang grass
- maliwanag masyado sa monitor ko lang ata hehe

i love your glass....astig
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Post by comgrapart Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:21 pm

deosrock wrote:-nice work sir!!! 2thumbsup

Salamat sir sa pagdaan.

arki_vhin wrote:nice try may nakita lang akong malaking light leak sa garage..
- sobra sa displacement ang grass
- maliwanag masyado sa monitor ko lang ata hehe

i love your glass....astig

thanks sir nagustuhan mo yung glass...uu nga sir eh hindi ko alam kung saan nag color bleed?
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Post by ellie Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:29 pm

galing po sir!

pero i think di ata ito bungalow.. ^_^

bungalow po ang tawag pag ground floor lng lahat ng requirements.. ^_^
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Post by comgrapart Sat Sep 04, 2010 7:43 pm

Ganon po ba? siguro sir 2 storey bungalow type!..thanks sir sa pag-correct. Very Happy
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Post by northhigh Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:30 pm

2 storey residence Very Happy astig sir ng design and render! cheers
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Post by IAN02 Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:31 pm

good render and concept try to find other background sir to improve your presentation and to make it more realistic
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Post by comgrapart Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:37 pm

northhigh wrote:2 storey residence Very Happy astig sir ng design and render! cheers

Salamat sir nagustuhan mo yung design. thanks for dropping by.

IAN02 wrote:good render and concept try to find other background sir to improve your presentation and to make it more realistic

Ok sir noted po yan. thanks sa pagdaan sir ian thumbsup
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Post by akoy Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:42 pm

parang may dof o ca to sir?
medyo maliwanag
umangat yung grass
yung gray na pathway parang painted lang kasi
rest po love it galing 2thumbsup
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Post by comgrapart Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:49 pm

akoy wrote:parang may dof o ca to sir?
medyo maliwanag
umangat yung grass
yung gray na pathway parang painted lang kasi
rest po love it galing 2thumbsup

wala dof sir what do you mean ca sir? ganon po ba sir maliwanang kc laptop ko eh hindi ko naka calibrate kaya hindi ko macontrol. yung gray sir sa pathwat paint lang tlaga sia sir. salamat sir noted po lahat yan.
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Post by Dabuy02 Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:18 pm

comment ko lng sir...
>overbright din po para sa akin..
>ung wall lamps sir, medyo napalaki scale nio lng po
>sir kung painted lng po yung pathway natn..mas ok po siguro lagyan natin ng bump para hindi sya plain tignan....
>add more trees sir sa may right side ng scene..para magreflect ung shadow sa structure.. i think mas lilitaw na magnda yung scene mo..para sa akin lang naman sir thumbsup
>nasabi narin ibang comment sir

rest.....aprub!!! gusto ko rin glass nio sir hehe
nice rendering ...keep posting! god bless....

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Post by comgrapart Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:31 pm

Dabuy02 wrote:comment ko lng sir...
>overbright din po para sa akin..
>ung wall lamps sir, medyo napalaki scale nio lng po
>sir kung painted lng po yung pathway natn..mas ok po siguro lagyan natin ng bump para hindi sya plain tignan....
>add more trees sir sa may right side ng scene..para magreflect ung shadow sa structure.. i think mas lilitaw na magnda yung scene mo..para sa akin lang naman sir thumbsup
>nasabi narin ibang comment sir

rest.....aprub!!! gusto ko rin glass nio sir hehe
nice rendering ...keep posting! god bless....

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Noted po sir. Sige sir update ko ito. Salamat sa pagdaan bossing.
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Post by bokkins Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:13 pm

comgrapart wrote:Ganon po ba? siguro sir 2 storey bungalow type!..thanks sir sa pag-correct. Very Happy

walang 2-storey na bungalow. Bungalow ay usually 1-storey or split level na single detached. This is a 2-storey house.
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Post by bokkins Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:16 pm

arki_vhin wrote:maliwanag masyado sa monitor ko lang ata hehe

Yabang... Porket bago lang monitor mo. Laughing
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Post by comgrapart Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:20 pm

bokkins wrote:
arki_vhin wrote:maliwanag masyado sa monitor ko lang ata hehe

Yabang... Porket bago lang monitor mo. Laughing
Sir bokkins thanks for dropping by Very Happy
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Post by phranq Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:33 pm

galing sir, thumbsup
sundin mo lang comments nila.

additional comments lang:
*change mo na ang title,gaya ng sabi ni sir boks.
*agaw pansin sa akin ang saturated plant sa gate.
*adjust mo na lang sa ps ang contrast, para may depth.

nice job!
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Post by comgrapart Sat Sep 04, 2010 11:24 pm

phranq wrote:galing sir, thumbsup
sundin mo lang comments nila.

additional comments lang:
*change mo na ang title,gaya ng sabi ni sir boks.
*agaw pansin sa akin ang saturated plant sa gate.
*adjust mo na lang sa ps ang contrast, para may depth.

nice job!

Thanks sir! noted po yan update ko nalang. Laughing
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Post by ARIST Sat Sep 04, 2010 11:25 pm

Nice design, comments mentioned already. Keep on posting sir. thumbsup
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Post by comgrapart Sun Sep 05, 2010 1:51 am

ARIST wrote:Nice design, comments mentioned already. Keep on posting sir. thumbsup

Thanks sir arist noted po yan. thanks for dropping by.
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Post by krizaliehs07 Sun Sep 05, 2010 1:56 am

galing sir ganda
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Post by comgrapart Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:06 am

krizaliehs07 wrote:galing sir ganda

Thanks sir kriz.
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Post by andro111985 Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:31 am

nice design and render sir.. lighting are very well done although sa first image i've noticed some overburn part sa may gawi ng window but its just minor. try mo bawasan ng konti yung burn value mo if you use reinhard as color mapping.
- and sa grass mo pala sir ibaba mo ng konti yung object na ginamit mo as grass masyadong halata yung yung mga edges napataas dispalcement mo or pwede mo rin bawasan yung value ng displacement mo.
- yung ramp sa may gate sir mas better siguro kung gawin mo itong stair medyo delikadi kasi yan kapag basa..
the rest are great specially your glass shader..
thanks for sharing sir post more..
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Post by comgrapart Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:55 am

Thanks sir sa mga magaganda mong comments sige sir update ko ito wala naman ako masyado gawa ngayon...salamat sir sa pagdaan. at salamat sir nagustuhan mo yung glass. Laughing
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Post by arki_vhin Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:50 pm

bokkins wrote:
arki_vhin wrote:maliwanag masyado sa monitor ko lang ata hehe

Yabang... Porket bago lang monitor mo. Laughing

hindi po bago un sir hahaha...last year pa po un...

by the way....nice update pare
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