FOUR STOREY DORMITORY & COMMERCIAL BUILDING W/ GASOLINE STATION

gandang araw mga bossing...

eto Latest na project... [SHIFT]-Q Lng sakin dito... pati coLor scheme eh preference ng cLient...

it's a four storey buiLding... ground fLoor is for commerciaL spaces and office ng gas station... 2nd-4th fLr yung dorm... the site was near Cavite Economic Zone...

COMMENTS, SUGGESTIONS, & VIOLENT REACTIONS are very much weLcome!!!

LET'S GET IT ON!!!






waLa Lng dag-dag view Lng... Lighting test na din...






pssst... eto sekret Lng ha... MOTEL tLaga yung 2nd-4th fLr... pero pag di na aprove edi dorm... hehehe... sekret Lng yun ha!!!



saLamat sa pagsiLip...

Bembol,

For presentation purposes ok yung no 1 image, yung pangalawa, para siyang langgam view. Yung pangatlo, para siyang langgam na nakatingin sa isang miniature.

Which means you need to do quite a few fixing sa camera height (160 cm + is fine) and DOF settings.

nice sir... bat ganun parang nakabuka ang building??? s camera b iyon or sinadya? galeng sir

Sir,

Very nice sir, Ganda ng render..Adjust lng po Camera angle..keep it up!

v_wrangler wrote:Bembol,

For presentation purposes ok yung no 1 image, yung pangalawa, para siyang langgam view. Yung pangatlo, para siyang langgam na nakatingin sa isang miniature.

Which means you need to do quite a few fixing sa camera height (160 cm + is fine) and DOF settings.

thanks sa pag daan master V.W. im humbLed by your presence...
ung image 1 Lng tLaga ang binigay ko sa cLient...

yung 2-3 eh trip trip Lng... hehehe...

Stryker wrote:nice sir... bat ganun parang nakabuka ang building??? s camera b iyon or sinadya? galeng sir

trianguLar kase sir ang shape ng Lupa... kaya mejo L shape yang buiLding...

mailman wrote:Sir,

Very nice sir, Ganda ng render..Adjust lng po Camera angle..keep it up!

saLamat sa pagsiLip sir... yeah mejo nahirapan nga ang photograPher nyan... hehehe...

nope sir.. i mean ung s 2nd image for example... ung camera nakatutok upward.. ung building parang palake s taas... un ibig ko sabihn ng nakabuka... hehehe misunderstood ako...

you know ganyan talaga ang mangyayari kapag may camera correction and the cameras are extremely angled. That's why if you'd need to apply camera skews, at least position the camera at eye level

Good presentation.

I would like to comment on the design, I think that huge canopies are akward and unreasonable to have it installed. You have already that horizontal elements as shade for a purpose.

Just my 2 cents...

Nice images, ok nga yung unang view....yung 2nd parang wierd yung angle...

dami mong sideline ha...

Stryker wrote:nope sir.. i mean ung s 2nd image for example... ung camera nakatutok upward.. ung building parang palake s taas... un ibig ko sabihn ng nakabuka... hehehe misunderstood ako...

The things you see are caused by the illusion. Ganyan talaga ang cam correction. Sometimes, they'll look like the object is skewed from the top. Isa pa I think - medyo may mali for a certain value ang camera correction kasi hindi siya perfectly vertical.

Nice work sir, I appreciate your choice of camera angles mahilig din kasi ako ng mga view na ganyan e, meron po akong book ng mga unconventional camera shots, maybe can scan it & share with you guys. yung clouds lang sir parang nakakadisturb sa over all presentation dun sa unang image. peace sir!

ganun b un sir v... anyways thanks for the notes on cam correction...!

MATINDI TO SIR BOKALS HEHEHE,,, I AGREE DOON SA SINABI NI MASTER KURDAPS,,, DAMI MONG VEHICLES,,

nice rendering!

ganda ng pagka render nito sir...ang linis sna meron view na kita lahat..

comment ko lang sir parang konti ang windows ng mga dorm sir,,,sayang naman kasi ang natural ventillation makukuha mo,,,,the rest is ok.

parang tilt shift ng mga miniature models. sometime its effective, but not everyone love it.. i like the the first one.

nice clean render, pinakagusto ko ung 1st image!!! bumagay ung ulap sa scene!!!
tanx for sharing!!!

kaLbo wrote:gandang araw mga bossing...

eto Latest na project... [SHIFT]-Q Lng sakin dito... pati coLor scheme eh preference ng cLient...

it's a four storey buiLding... ground fLoor is for commerciaL spaces and office ng gas station... 2nd-4th fLr yung dorm... the site was near Cavite Economic Zone...

COMMENTS, SUGGESTIONS, & VIOLENT REACTIONS are very much weLcome!!!

LET'S GET IT ON!!!






waLa Lng dag-dag view Lng... Lighting test na din...






pssst... eto sekret Lng ha... MOTEL tLaga yung 2nd-4th fLr... pero pag di na aprove edi dorm... hehehe... sekret Lng yun ha!!!



saLamat sa pagsiLip...

Sir,tama ung comment nung isa..sana dagdagan ng natural ventilation ung dormitory..question lang,bat pinagsama ung gasoline station at dormitory??? parang hindi ata tama..kahit siguro libre ang pagtira jan,di ako titira jan..peace tyo bro..

gawa kpa ng ibang views..wala ako ngustuhan sa sa mga ginawa mong views..sorry kung mjo pranka ako.im just trying to give u some point of views to improve on things.keep on doing your best.we r here to support you..keep on posting.

Stryker wrote:nope sir.. i mean ung s 2nd image for example... ung camera nakatutok upward.. ung building parang palake s taas... un ibig ko sabihn ng nakabuka... hehehe misunderstood ako...

ah yun ba sir... ayun nasagot na ni master VW... hehehe...

v_wrangler wrote:you know ganyan talaga ang mangyayari kapag may camera correction and the cameras are extremely angled. That's why if you'd need to apply camera skews, at least position the camera at eye level

v_wrangler wrote:

Stryker wrote:nope sir.. i mean ung s 2nd image for example... ung camera nakatutok upward.. ung building parang palake s taas... un ibig ko sabihn ng nakabuka... hehehe misunderstood ako...

The things you see are caused by the illusion. Ganyan talaga ang cam correction. Sometimes, they'll look like the object is skewed from the top. Isa pa I think - medyo may mali for a certain value ang camera correction kasi hindi siya perfectly vertical.

thanks sa note about camera correction master!!! U da Man!!!

kurdaps! wrote:Good presentation.

I would like to comment on the design, I think that huge canopies are akward and unreasonable to have it installed. You have already that horizontal elements as shade for a purpose.

Just my 2 cents...

saLamat sa pagsiLip master daps...
tama kayo sir... sa tingin ko din unnecessary nga yung maLaLapad na canopies...
pero waLa akong controL sa design neto... taga pindot Lng ako ng [SHIFT]-Q... haaayz...

arkiedmund wrote:Nice images, ok nga yung unang view....yung 2nd parang wierd yung angle...

dami mong sideline ha...

thanks sa pagdaan sir... keLan uLit kayo daan sa rbinsons imus? hehehe...
yung 1st image Lng taLaga ang for presentation, 2nd and 3rd eh napag Laruan Lng yung mga iLaw at camera...

sana nga may mga sideLine pa... usuaLLy kase mas konti sideLine pag tag-uLan na... hehehe... musta na Lng kina master enigs sir...

baki0116 wrote:Nice work sir, I appreciate your choice of camera angles mahilig din kasi ako ng mga view na ganyan e, meron po akong book ng mga unconventional camera shots, maybe can scan it & share with you guys. yung clouds lang sir parang nakakadisturb sa over all presentation dun sa unang image. peace sir!

thanks sa pag appreciate ng gawa ko sir... masarap din kase mag experimento ng ibat ibang settings, Ligtings at LaLo na cam angLe... tutaL Libre nmn eh... hehehe...

pwede siguro yan sir... magandang reference yan... basta sama mo Lng yung credits sa originaL pubLisher ng book at photographers...

arkitrix wrote: MATINDI TO SIR BOKALS HEHEHE,,, I AGREE DOON SA SINABI NI MASTER KURDAPS,,, DAMI MONG VEHICLES,,

saLamat sir... kuLang pa nga sa praktis eh... kuLang oras para makapag praktis... yung mga gawa mo sir ang patindi ng patindi!!!

JAKE wrote:nice rendering!

thanks sir...

master_grayback wrote:ganda ng pagka render nito sir...ang linis sna meron view na kita lahat..

saLamat sa pagsiLip master... actuaLLy 3 images yan... yung 1st image yung kita yung buong buiLding...

pero ngayon 2 images Lng yung lumaLabas eh... try ko na Lng i upLoad uLit...

whey09 wrote:comment ko lang sir parang konti ang windows ng mga dorm sir,,,sayang naman kasi ang natural ventillation makukuha mo,,,,the rest is ok.

thanks sa pag daan sir... ganyan taLaga ang design niLa jan kase from DORM eh convert na Lng as MOTEL... kya waLa haLos bintana...

nomeradona wrote:parang tilt shift ng mga miniature models. sometime its effective, but not everyone love it.. i like the the first one.

saLamat sa pag daan sir nomer... just pLaying on cam angLes...

pixelburn wrote:nice clean render, pinakagusto ko ung 1st image!!! bumagay ung ulap sa scene!!!
tanx for sharing!!!

saLamat sa pag daan idoL hayden... este sir pixeLburn paLa...
mejo napag tripan kuLang magLagay din ng "HAYDEN CAM" sa 2nd and 3rd image kya ganun kababa...

champorado wrote:


Sir,tama ung comment nung isa..sana dagdagan ng natural ventilation ung dormitory..question lang,bat pinagsama ung gasoline station at dormitory??? parang hindi ata tama..kahit siguro libre ang pagtira jan,di ako titira jan..peace tyo bro..

gawa kpa ng ibang views..wala ako ngustuhan sa sa mga ginawa mong views..sorry kung mjo pranka ako.im just trying to give u some point of views to improve on things.keep on doing your best.we r here to support you..keep on posting.

no probLem sir...im very much open on straight forward comments and crits...


yung sa ventiLation eh ganun nga yung dinesign niLa dyan... kase from DORM (which is the owners 1st pLan) was redesigned to a waLk-up MOTEL... kya waLa haLos bintana yan... hehehe...

pag nagka oras expLore pa ko ibang views... nagustuhan na din nmn ng owner yung nai present namin na view eh...

di pa ako naka comment nito bro ahh! mahilig ka talaga sa mga kotse.at gasolinahan. nice work bro ..

hehehe, motel na motel talga dating sir kalbo.. nice rendering din.. gaganda din ng mga sasakyan niyo sir agaw pansin.. post more

3dpjumong2007 wrote:di pa ako naka comment nito bro ahh! mahilig ka talaga sa mga kotse.at gasolinahan. nice work bro ..

ralph_soriano wrote:hehehe, motel na motel talga dating sir kalbo.. nice rendering din.. gaganda din ng mga sasakyan niyo sir agaw pansin.. post more

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