Residential Exterior (mediterranean) SU+VfSU+CS2

maaung buntag mga masters! first post ko po...just a simple rendition of mine done in SU+VfSU+CS2
comments and crits.. are most welcome.

https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img11/1948/sample1o.jpg

re attach
is it possible to resize.. i could see it in my wide screen but iguss the rest will see it putol.. bro read the rules and make the width 800px

welcome po sa cgp
ayus ito sir ah!!! ibang approach naman ito sir!!! isa ito sa mga styles ng SU.. galing ng watercolor effect , hehehe!!! post more!!!!!

OT: san kayo sa dubai sir!!!

welcome sir!imho adjust sa mapping...at color...keep posting sir!

Sir nomeradona, sensya npo...was not able to read the rules...i will repost it as per instruction...

sir pixelburn..salamat sa iyong komento! ngkakandarapa pa sa pagpractice eh...salamat ulil!

sir jenaro salamt din sa advise, will try to fixed it...

nice design & modeling ser... ung mapping lng cguro! Paturo naman su... hehehe.. keep posting!

Sir,

Awesome work! welcome to Cgp!

pixelburn wrote:welcome po sa cgp
ayus ito sir ah!!! ibang approach naman ito sir!!! isa ito sa mga styles ng SU.. galing ng watercolor effect , hehehe!!! post more!!!!!

OT: san kayo sa dubai sir!!!

@ pixelburn---What "watercolor effect"?...

TS--- right now colors are too striking; try to mute it down to a certain subtlety to make it easier on the eyes... Start improving your 3d library...

nice design skills! little improvemnt na lng sa rendering...dme ka ma22nan d2....practice mkes perfect!...
sir sn k s dubai?

cloud20 wrote:

pixelburn wrote:welcome po sa cgp
ayus ito sir ah!!! ibang approach naman ito sir!!! isa ito sa mga styles ng SU.. galing ng watercolor effect , hehehe!!! post more!!!!!

OT: san kayo sa dubai sir!!!

@ pixelburn---What "watercolor effect"?...

TS--- right now colors are too striking; try to mute it down to a certain subtlety to make it easier on the eyes... Start improving your 3d library...

Thanks for the advise...3d library still under construction, everything will be in place in due time...

JAKE wrote:nice design & modeling ser... ung mapping lng cguro! Paturo naman su... hehehe.. keep posting!

sir jake salamat sa advise...ppraktisin ko pa ang mapping....pm mo lang ako kung ano gusto mong mlaman sa su, basta kya ko lang.hehehe.

Joaquin wrote:Sir,

Awesome work! welcome to Cgp!

Thank you sir Joaquin!

atelier82 wrote:nice design skills! little improvemnt na lng sa rendering...dme ka ma22nan d2....practice mkes perfect!...
sir sn k s dubai?

Salamat sa appreciation repa! mgppractice p ako... nasa bandang muraqabat lang ako sir....ikaw? madalas ba inuman pg wikend sa inu?

Konting tweak sa rendering, masyado siyang matapang. Tone down your colors a bit. Tweak your lights too, so it won;t look like it was rendered in early versions of CAD.

Good modeling skills.....

arkiedmund wrote:Konting tweak sa rendering, masyado siyang matapang. Tone down your colors a bit. Tweak your lights too, so it won;t look like it was rendered in early versions of CAD.

Good modeling skills.....

Noted sir! Salamat po sa advise. i will try to repost it based on collected criticisms. more power cgp!

gwapo man gawa mo bay,hehehe,comment ko lang yung puno ,parang di bagay sa bahay,hehehe,post more

sir sa modeling konting konti nalng add nalang sa wall mat details and cguro default setting po ba ito? try other setting po. then dont use low poly su entourage and low res background lastly camera positioning... im sure pag nagawa mo 2 malaki improvements... napansin ko din ung arch opening mo sa garage. try to copy the arch line then right click po entity info addmo segments para smooth. kung ayaw meaning basag. gawa kanalng ulit arc na bago then adjust segmets.

praktis lng ng praktis

jds wrote:sir sa modeling konting konti nalng add nalang sa wall mat details and cguro default setting po ba ito? try other setting po. then dont use low poly su entourage and low res background lastly camera positioning... im sure pag nagawa mo 2 malaki improvements... napansin ko din ung arch opening mo sa garage. try to copy the arch line then right click po entity info addmo segments para smooth. kung ayaw meaning basag. gawa kanalng ulit arc na bago then adjust segmets.

praktis lng ng praktis

Maraming Salamat sa tips sir...will try to edit and repost it pag nakuha ko na.

ser,

the beauty is in the eye of the beholder, that's a beauty, im the beholder..... for me its one helluva work...... post more, pero mapping and medyo cohesiveness lang bro..... try switchng ur view to the other side, parang mas maraming magandang maipapakita pag dun sa kabila ung cam......but still great modeling skills!!! WELCOME TO CGP

Horhe_sanjose wrote:ser,

the beauty is in the eye of the beholder, that's a beauty, im the beholder..... for me its one helluva work...... post more, pero mapping and medyo cohesiveness lang bro..... try switchng ur view to the other side, parang mas maraming magandang maipapakita pag dun sa kabila ung cam......but still great modeling skills!!! WELCOME TO CGP

Salamat sa iyong comentaryo horhe! i will try my best to improve it...

gusto ko yung shrub na gnamit mo, pwede mo bang mashare yan sir .. jhames_albert@yahoo.com..pm mo lang ako sir kung may katanungan ka sa vray 4 su

x2fer wrote:

cloud20 wrote:

pixelburn wrote:welcome po sa cgp
ayus ito sir ah!!! ibang approach naman ito sir!!! isa ito sa mga styles ng SU.. galing ng watercolor effect , hehehe!!! post more!!!!!

OT: san kayo sa dubai sir!!!

@ pixelburn---What "watercolor effect"?...

TS--- right now colors are too striking; try to mute it down to a certain subtlety to make it easier on the eyes... Start improving your 3d library...

Thanks for the advise...3d library still under construction, everything will be in place in due time...

Just keep hammering on it, the talents is there already... You just have to squeeze it out... Post ka ulit sir para makita progreso...

jhames joe albert infante wrote:gusto ko yung shrub na gnamit mo, pwede mo bang mashare yan sir .. jhames_albert@yahoo.com..pm mo lang ako sir kung may katanungan ka sa vray 4 su

ok sir, csend ko.