lowcost housing

mga masters and mga kuya post ulit ako... lowcost housing dev't.. ito ang pinaka ayokong plate na pinagawa sa skul!!! hehe group project design idea by my classmate.. taga 3d lang po ako
medyo rush lang... ginawa ko nung isang gabi... share ko lang.... eto....

wow plate mo pala ito nice one here bos francis,,, hehehe napraktis ko ung tinuro mong soft selection hehehe astig nga salamat par,,, keep on posting sir darcxxxxx hehehe!!!

bos ciss pahabol lng,,, kailan ka pasyal ofis may tu2ran ako sayo para mkaganti naman ako sa yo hehehe!!! puro ikaw nagtuturo sa akin,,, par nakalipat nakami ng ofis kaya malapit lng bahay nyo sa ofis namen,,, txt ka ciss kng kailan ka pa2syal....agkat me i pamby ampo i jay param may kasama ka!!! post lng ng post bos darcxxx!!!!

mm this one i think is below par with your recent renders bro. i think you can do better than this. Look at your camera. the composition is really different from your previous ones. the lighting is rather bland. the door in relation to the windows. the choice of trees. mmm. im sure this is not your caliber bro. siguro minadali mo to no?

Noel_Diaz wrote:wow plate mo pala ito nice one here bos francis,,, hehehe napraktis ko ung tinuro mong soft selection hehehe astig nga salamat par,,, keep on posting sir darcxxxxx hehehe!!!

tnks sir noel... good to hear na nakatulong yung tinuro ko...hehe

nomeradona wrote:mm this one i think is below par with your recent renders bro. i think you can do better than this. Look at your camera. the composition is really different from your previous ones. the lighting is rather bland. the door in relation to the windows. the choice of trees. mmm. im sure this is not your caliber bro. siguro minadali mo to no?

di ko nga po masyadong feel tong project na to....
bland lighting is due to the brightness adjustment in ps prior to the occlussion pass... medyo ibang method po ginawa ko than usual (experiment ng konti) akala ko po mas realistic sya than previous renders.. im trying to imitate some rendering in evermotion, dull sya pero realistic.. i guess di ko pa kaya..hehe.... the door i think is tama lang... yung window po ang maliit akala po kasi namin mas tipid...hehe .... thanks master sa uulitin nalang po ako babawi... sensya na sa mga palusot...hehe

salamat

pag ka plate ganyan output mo ha hehehe...
sir ung location ng shadow ng sun natakpan na ung house...
walang ridge...
tilings din po...
pero ok na to...wag mxado maganda presentation mababading sayo ang prof nyan hehehe!!!!

sama ako kina noel!! txt nyo ko or pm..haha..kasawa tambay d2 bro..haha..nice one! keep it up..

parang di po kayo ang gumawa nito a,,,
kakaiba sa mga naunang nakita ko,,,at kinuha :)para sakin po
-yung haspe ng door ?
-mababa yung firewall,,,me tamang provision po para jan,,,check nalang po ang BP 220(housing ang subdivision laws and regulation)
-Theoriya ko lang po mejo madadala pa kung wala na yun trees sa likod,,,theoriya lang po
-hindi po ba talaga pantay yung header ng door at window??
-Kalimutan nyo na po ang pag hihiganti,,bad po yun,,pag pray nyo nalang po sila,,,
darating din naman po ang araw na mapupuksa din po sila,,,

for me the color correction looks great naman... aus na aus... the thing that i would like to crit is the background. me white part dun sa edge ng mga trees.. how did that happen and how did u save your file. me alpha po bah.. anyways on the design.. no comment nlng cause di nman ikaw. aus na ito for me. siguro konting sharpen nlng more sa ps. and check also ung map ng door. thats it for me bro.

Nice project actually. kung mamaster mo to, mas lalo kang gagaling. you may not like this but I suggest that you should. kasi ito ang pinakaimportant para sakin. designing a lowcost housing could be boring at times dahil wala ka gaanong freedom at sobrang liit lang ng area. pro pag napagisipan ng husto ang isang lowcost housing. you could actually help the country solve this kind of housing problems.

Kaya ang masusuggest ko is. Love it.

One more comment is your png file hindi malinis ang alpha. masyadong malakas ang ilaw mo siguro. I suggest the you integrate the background sa mismong render.

Lighting ang texture is very good.

Last suggestion pala, pantay mo ang windows ang door. much better yun, it will also brighten the interior. good luck!

i like the way u saturated your entourage but the scene looks bland & raw but its ok for a rush project. keep it up.

xxdarcxx wrote:mga masters and mga kuya post ulit ako... lowcost housing dev't.. ito ang pinaka ayokong plate na pinagawa sa skul!!! hehe group project design idea by my classmate.. taga 3d lang po ako
medyo rush lang... ginawa ko nung isang gabi... share ko lang.... eto....

for me nice lighting, naka ao to no cis?, sa design sana yung typical roof design nalang , hulaan ko kay arch.t sibal?

arki_vhin wrote:pag ka plate ganyan output mo ha hehehe...
sir ung location ng shadow ng sun natakpan na ung house...
walang ridge...
tilings din po...
pero ok na to...wag mxado maganda presentation mababading sayo ang prof nyan hehehe!!!!

all crits noted sir.... yung shadow sinadya ko talaga para hindi maburn..hehe thanks master vhin

baxz wrote:sama ako kina noel!! txt nyo ko or pm..haha..kasawa tambay d2 bro..haha..nice one! keep it up..

oo cige txt nlang kita... andun ako kanina kaso andun boss nila...hehe ka2takot....

Muggz wrote:parang di po kayo ang gumawa nito a,,,
kakaiba sa mga naunang nakita ko,,,at kinuha :)para sakin po
-yung haspe ng door ?
-mababa yung firewall,,,me tamang provision po para jan,,,check nalang po ang BP 220(housing ang subdivision laws and regulation)
-Theoriya ko lang po mejo madadala pa kung wala na yun trees sa likod,,,theoriya lang po
-hindi po ba talaga pantay yung header ng door at window??
-Kalimutan nyo na po ang pag hihiganti,,bad po yun,,pag pray nyo nalang po sila,,,
darating din naman po ang araw na mapupuksa din po sila,,,

thanks sir muggz... especially dun sa building code.. mahina ako dun eh... hehe... hehe thanks... crits noted

vamp_lestat wrote:for me the color correction looks great naman... aus na aus... the thing that i would like to crit is the background. me white part dun sa edge ng mga trees.. how did that happen and how did u save your file. me alpha po bah.. anyways on the design.. no comment nlng cause di nman ikaw. aus na ito for me. siguro konting sharpen nlng more sa ps. and check also ung map ng door. thats it for me bro.

thanks sir vamp... i added the bg after i blended the orig image and the ao pass kaya siguro nagkaganun... di ko rin kasi masyado maintindihan ang mga alphas... thanks sir... praktis ko nalang...hehe

bokkins wrote:Nice project actually. kung mamaster mo to, mas lalo kang gagaling. you may not like this but I suggest that you should. kasi ito ang pinakaimportant para sakin. designing a lowcost housing could be boring at times dahil wala ka gaanong freedom at sobrang liit lang ng area. pro pag napagisipan ng husto ang isang lowcost housing. you could actually help the country solve this kind of housing problems.
Kaya ang masusuggest ko is. Love it.
One more comment is your png file hindi malinis ang alpha. masyadong malakas ang ilaw mo siguro. I suggest the you integrate the background sa mismong render.
Lighting ang texture is very good.
Last suggestion pala, pantay mo ang windows ang door. much better yun, it will also brighten the interior. good luck!

on second thought.... tama po kayo.. mas challenging nga po ang mga ganitong projects... hehe masusubukan talaga ang mga nalalaman mo as a designer... thanks master

SunDance wrote:i like the way u saturated your entourage but the scene looks bland & raw but its ok for a rush project. keep it up.

thanks sir... next time iibahin ko na... hehe.. experiment lang po kasi ung method na ginamit ko.... thnks

namby_pamby wrote:for me nice lighting, naka ao to no cis?, sa design sana yung typical roof design nalang , hulaan ko kay arch.t sibal?

thanks bro... oo nag ao ako... yung roof design may ventilation sya for passive cooling.... idea ni

noise issues at texture mapping sa door..KIta po kasi ang tiling. tsaka yung white portions din sa edge ng mga puno sa BG mo.. yung reflection din po sa windows.

IMHO lang po yun ha? di po ako master. hehe

keep it up boss..

heheheh!!! suggest ko lang! u should use party wall sa pa rtition nila, kung low cost housing man ito!!! hehehe! suggest lang naman!
nway!!! for a student with this output, i think ur a way ahead compared to your other classmates!

yung puno sa likod ganun ba tlga yun??
pintuan masyado ata mataas..
add ko na rin roof.. anu yun vent?? ehehe curious lng...
hummm layo ng gawa m sa iba.. lalo na sa design mo..
gudlak sa proyekto mo... hehehe kahit di mo trip alm ko kaya mong pagandahin pa to...

mcgoogles wrote:noise issues at texture mapping sa door..KIta po kasi ang tiling. tsaka yung white portions din sa edge ng mga puno sa BG mo.. yung reflection din po sa windows.

IMHO lang po yun ha? di po ako master. hehe

keep it up boss..

thnks mr mcgoogles.... crits noted po

KONGRESMAN wrote:heheheh!!! suggest ko lang! u should use party wall sa pa rtition nila, kung low cost housing man ito!!! hehehe! suggest lang naman!
nway!!! for a student with this output, i think ur a way ahead compared to your other classmates!

salamat po kongressman... ordinary firewall lang po gamit ko... thnks sa info sir

ice wrote:yung puno sa likod ganun ba tlga yun??
pintuan masyado ata mataas..
add ko na rin roof.. anu yun vent?? ehehe curious lng...
hummm layo ng gawa m sa iba.. lalo na sa design mo..
gudlak sa proyekto mo... hehehe kahit di mo trip alm ko kaya mong pagandahin pa to...

salamat master deniz.. yung vent sa roof passive cooling daw sabi ni cutilmanz... hehe... post na!!!!

haha cutilmanz amf hahah!! oita atin nku max kanini par tuitor aah haha

Good work bro..modeled ba yung roof??If not i think mas ok kung na modeled..Yun lng bro,..Keep posting..

good job! kunting tweak na lang on your mats.

all comments have been said na po...

i have nothing againts the location of the sun, mas gusto ko yan kesa direct sun sa subject mo.....shadows help create dramas to your perspective.

keep it up!

gud day sir!! tma c boss bokkins..try mo TARGA file 32 bit float/compress/pre-multiplied alpha juz like i did sa post ko "A Villa"..ganun process din ang ginawa ko..un lg po sir and keep it up!!

good job.... praktis ng praktis...... same comment din sa kanila.......