Bedroom Morning Scene. Praktis lang po..

Hello Po mga CG PIPS, Eto na po yung UPDATE KO sa 3rd img ng 1st post ko.. Di ko marender ulit ung 1st at second kasi nawala ko yung file..
Salamat po sa mga tumulong at nagbigay ng comment.. specially kay sir jarul, sir vhin, sir pakunat, at kay sir ergo.

Heto na po yun.. Sana nagimprove XD..

Morning Scene po to with natural light galing sa window kaya madilim nag right side.. CC's are always welcome.. Kelangan ko po yun para magimprove pa

sir comment lang po ako ha, i like render, gusto ko un contrast bet dark and light , but in the composition... i think bitin yun curtain, i would suggest extend the curtain down to the floor. red lampshade is out of the color scheme.. try to minimize the shade of you wood. and there is a lot art work on the wall masyado naging heavy tignan yun wall .imho lang po sir.

gilbs wrote:sir comment lang po ako ha, i like render, gusto ko un contrast bet dark and light , but in the composition... i think bitin yun curtain, i would suggest extend the curtain down to the floor. red lampshade is out of the color scheme.. try to minimize the shade of you wood. and there is a lot art work on the wall masyado naging heavy tignan yun wall .imho lang po sir.

Pansin ko rin sir about the lamp shade... Thanks po sir..

a big improvement than before...
Imho lang ha lagyan mo kya mapping ung pillow mxadong white eh...
ung curtain flat mxado prang may neon light hehe...d rest ok na

oi update agad,bilis ah,,
yepz..malaki na pinagkaiba sa dati boss.

- baseboard msyado malaki.
- add rflction sa floor.
- alisin mo curtain,hanap ka ng iba..
- bump ba ung sawall? kung bump,masyadong malaki rin..
- for me saturated ung scene..

pro ok na ok na to sa dati boss..galing
post muna lahat dyan..

Sir getting better. konti na lang po ito sir. Comment po ako ulit, You have to work on the curtains parang nasobrahan yata sa transparency na para syang may light material. Second hanap po kayo ng mg models sa net marami pong libre dyan para po may variation yung mga props mo ng saganon hindi puro wall frames ang nakikita. But honest to say mas maganda na po ito kesa sa last post mo. . . keep it up at gaganda rin ang mga gawa mo

this is a great compostion for me. sir jaruls comment should work for you. i second it. hmmm.. those pinlights aint looking good. change mo lang into metalic material... and sharpening of the image would be better.. post process sa PS.

I agree with the above comments sir. Add ko lang, ewan ko kung may mali dun sa light, parang masyadong sharp. Ewan ko lang sa Max kung panu adjust yung softness para sana hindi masyado sharp yung edge sa kama. Keep it up sir!

Nice image here bro.Good lighting.Well lit scene and organize..Keep it bro!

nasabi na nila lahat sir kaya sundin mo lang yung mga masters1

gilbs wrote:sir comment lang po ako ha, i like render, gusto ko un contrast bet dark and light , but in the composition... i think bitin yun curtain, i would suggest extend the curtain down to the floor. red lampshade is out of the color scheme.. try to minimize the shade of you wood. and there is a lot art work on the wall masyado naging heavy tignan yun wall .imho lang po sir.

salamat po sir, Update ko nanaman next time.. hehe

arki_vhin wrote:a big improvement than before...
Imho lang ha lagyan mo kya mapping ung pillow mxadong white eh...
ung curtain flat mxado prang may neon light hehe...d rest ok na

Salamat bossing, about dun sa curtain di ko rin alam bat umiilaw yan.. hehe more practice pa po dapat ako..

jarul wrote:oi update agad,bilis ah,,
yepz..malaki na pinagkaiba sa dati boss.

- baseboard msyado malaki.
- add rflction sa floor.
- alisin mo curtain,hanap ka ng iba..
- bump ba ung sawall? kung bump,masyadong malaki rin..
- for me saturated ung scene..

pro ok na ok na to sa dati boss..galing
post muna lahat dyan..

Salamat master, update ko lang po next time...
About dun sa wall, diffuse lang po yan ng stucco na texture, diko ata naadjust...

By the way sir about sa saturation, sa PS ko ba iaadjust un?

comment ko lang po bossing, check the tiling ng column accent mo, kita yung
pagka-tile nya, then curtain ba yung nasa window? try to change yung material
yung may bump para magkaron ng depth, yun lang po. imho.

ARCHITHEKTHURA wrote:Nice image here bro.Good lighting.Well lit scene and organize..Keep it bro!

Salamat master, more practice pa dapat ako..

Thanks sa inyong mga CC's ^^

novice wrote:comment ko lang po bossing, check the tiling ng column accent mo, kita yung
pagka-tile nya, then curtain ba yung nasa window? try to change yung material
yung may bump para magkaron ng depth, yun lang po. imho.

thanks po master, yung wooden material ba sa gitna ang tinutukoy mo sir? Kung yun ho, sa hiwa-hiwalay talaga yan sila sa design ko... yun lang po sir.

mcgoogles wrote:

novice wrote:comment ko lang po bossing, check the tiling ng column accent mo, kita yung
pagka-tile nya, then curtain ba yung nasa window? try to change yung material
yung may bump para magkaron ng depth, yun lang po. imho.

thanks po master, yung wooden material ba sa gitna ang tinutukoy mo sir? Kung yun ho, sa hiwa-hiwalay talaga yan sila sa design ko... yun lang po sir.

hindi po yun, yung sa both sides mo, yung material sir. halata na na hati.

novice wrote:

mcgoogles wrote:

novice wrote:comment ko lang po bossing, check the tiling ng column accent mo, kita yung
pagka-tile nya, then curtain ba yung nasa window? try to change yung material
yung may bump para magkaron ng depth, yun lang po. imho.

thanks po master, yung wooden material ba sa gitna ang tinutukoy mo sir? Kung yun ho, sa hiwa-hiwalay talaga yan sila sa design ko... yun lang po sir.

hindi po yun, yung sa both sides mo, yung material sir. halata na na hati.

aah yun ba. di ko nakita. ngayon ko lang din napansin. talas ng paningin nyo bossing...
Anyways, salamat po. Noted po yan.

dumarami na taga dvo.

baseboard too big for me.

try to detach the cieling board, tama na cguro yang false cieling for me lng ha.
curtains can be improved but its a minor ..

lightings good dude.

Crainelee wrote:dumarami na taga dvo.

baseboard too big for me.

try to detach the cieling board, tama na cguro yang false cieling for me lng ha.
curtains can be improved but its a minor ..

lightings good dude.

Thanks po bossing, nid ko pa po talaga i workout ang designs and texturing ko.. Bitin din ako sa 3d Models...

Thanks ulit

looking very good! ganda ng lighting mo dito. keep it up!

bokkins wrote:looking very good! ganda ng lighting mo dito. keep it up!

Salamat po master, thanks sa pag appreciate ng work ko. It means a lot..

ok toh sir tingin ko lng try mo pa lagyan unting floorwax lng sa wood cguro hehehee para mas astig hehehe yun sa columns at taas nun bedhead hehehe la lng kung trip mo lng sir pero astig linis ng render saka ampogi nun leather material moh

enjoy8OGART wrote:ok toh sir tingin ko lng try mo pa lagyan unting floorwax lng sa wood cguro hehehee para mas astig hehehe yun sa columns at taas nun bedhead hehehe la lng kung trip mo lng sir pero astig linis ng render saka ampogi nun leather material moh

salamat po sir. I papafloor wax ko po yan.. Absent kasi ang maid niyan kaya di nalagyan ng floorwax.. hehe

Ang sarap ata ng hawak ng avatar mo.. hehe penge naman.