Design 9 architectural thesis (pa advise po)

Hi po mga sir.  Pwede po ba makahingi ng advice about my 2 proposals in design 9. 

My site is in Marikina City

1. Discovery Center for Science and Renewable Energy (I guess this is too long for a title) 
2. Business Park 

Yung sa Discovery Center ko po is to increase public awareness and promote the use of Renewable energy and energy efficiency in our country.  Yung inspiration ko po is yung Welios Science center located in Austria.   =D 

The second one is Business Park. Gusto ko po kasi magkaroon ng malapit na access for work sa site ko since yung marikina po is called as Bedroom Community. 

Sana po mabigyan niyo po ako ng advise para po mahimay yung 2 proposals ko. Thank you in advanced mga sir. =D