exteriors (school projects commercial bldgs)

im on a hurry doing this..
for the sake of finals hehe.. pinagawa po ng mga school mates ko .project nila
render in a very low settings and low resolution. almost a day
cnc po pra sa improve pa..

for parman's sake
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for Ivan's


for Jermine's


good luck s inyo mga bro magustuhan sna niya..

bossing kung iyong mamarapatin ang aking sariling komento,

>overscaled yung tao, look at 1st pic halos kasing taas nya na yung pintuan, and adjust mo yung color nya, dark mo pa ng onti
> trees some overburn and some are pale
> adjust bg, use high res images, pag wla ka meron ako bigyan kita
>use displacement sa mga bato mo, and liit mo pa konti
>adjust mo lang din overall color balance ng mga output, to create more depth and interest. yun lang po bossing, imho.

novice wrote:bossing kung iyong mamarapatin ang aking sariling komento,

>overscaled yung tao, look at 1st pic halos kasing taas nya na yung pintuan, and adjust mo yung color nya, dark mo pa ng onti
> trees some overburn and some are pale
> adjust bg, use high res images, pag wla ka meron ako bigyan kita
>use displacement sa mga bato mo, and liit mo pa konti
>adjust mo lang din overall color balance ng mga output, to create more depth and interest. yun lang po bossing, imho.

thx sa mabilisang reply sir noted napo lahat..
nung na save jpeg ko po siguro kaya parang low res pero hig res napo ang BG
la po kasi materials ang iba sensya na ,,
enwei thx s comments sir

haha pwede na yan!!!
ba't ako di mo pinang gawa?

nice bro for emergency use!

Sir akin lang po may displacement po ba yung road nyo dahil parang umangat po sya. . .Pero ok na po ito sir for a rush job.

not bad bro!!keep it up

Jay2x wrote:im on a hurry doing this..
for the sake of finals hehe.. pinagawa po ng mga school mates ko .project nila
render in a very low settings and low resolution. almost a day
cnc po pra sa improve pa..

for parman's sake
[img][/img]

for Ivan's


for Jermine's


good luck s inyo mga bro magustuhan sna niya..

as always i like the design, palagay ko brightness and contrast adjust mo lang pre, masyado madilim mga shadows mo ngyon maybe because of time limits, at saka napalaki yung tao naglalakad, mabuay ka par

and dami nito ah. ang galing mo naman bro. hindi na to pang students. pwedeng pwede ka ng sumabak sa real world. liitan mo lang pala ung tao mo. masyadong malaki, mauuntog na sya sa canopy. yun lang naman. keep it up bro!

galing ng designs,,... hehehe palupit ng palupit...

xxdarcxx wrote:haha pwede na yan!!!
ba't ako di mo pinang gawa?

thx magaling kana hehe ako ang turuan mo

alwin wrote:nice bro for emergency use!

salamat sir . ingat

Butz_Arki wrote:not bad bro!!keep it up

thx heroic butz

namby_pamby wrote:

Jay2x wrote:

as always i like the design, palagay ko brightness and contrast adjust mo lang pre, masyado madilim mga shadows mo ngyon maybe because of time limits, at saka napalaki yung tao naglalakad, mabuay ka par

salamat pamby

bokkins wrote:and dami nito ah. ang galing mo naman bro. hindi na to pang students. pwedeng pwede ka ng sumabak sa real world. liitan mo lang pala ung tao mo. masyadong malaki, mauuntog na sya sa canopy. yun lang naman. keep it up bro!

heh thanks sir master bokks . medyo na revise na sila sir kasi gusto nila super box at mukhang beginner mode lang he.. sana nakuha ko yung gusto nila hehe.. salamat po hanggang sa muli

ice wrote:galing ng designs,,... hehehe palupit ng palupit...

tenks pok . parman is the great pretender hehe

hehe ganda nto master jay-2x! ok din ang design! post more, ah! ung line lng naman bang problem. parang nakalalim. gusto ko ung effect ng camera nyo sir.

Sir,
Imho lang on the mapping sa ground ng 1st image liitan mo lang and add bump.. The rest is fine. Render wise very neat and not bad kahit low res. Keep on posting.