ralph_soriano: Texture and lighting competition -drowned (updated)

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hi guys.. this is my entry for the competition.. my concept was to make an underwater scene just to make things different.. hope you guys like it.. I'm hoping to improve more on this while there is still time..

softwares: 3ds max 9, vray, photoshop

hi res. image link:

https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img17/4039/drownednewhirescopy.jpg

ralph_soriano wrote:

hi guys.. this is my entry for the competition.. my concept was to make an underwater scene just to make things different.. hope you guys like it.. I'm hoping to improve more on this while there is still time..

softwares: 3ds max 9, vray, photoshop

hi res. image link:

https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img12/5544/drowned1copyhires.jpg

this is fresh and very creatively done,however the atmospheric feel of being submerged in e sea can be push further.

nice entry bro!! gudlcuk!

SIR! Magaling kayo! Hahahah
I was actually gonna post something like this...I thought of this idea but took it to the next level by making it look something from 'Bioshock'. Unfortunately I don't know if I'll ever finish it/post it here since I'm really busy at work. Anyway, it's very refreshing to see something new on this competition and I applaud you for that

here are some suggestions:
-Like the others said, the camera is way tilted too much, making it hard to view. Lessen if possible.

-Caustics.

-I suggest maybe adding flakes/dust on the water to make it believable as something old (ruin?). reference pic:



- Fog. Your image is too clear. At first glance I didn't notice that this image was 'underwater'. Far objects should be less visible.
reference pic:



hope this helps... Goodluck!

Wow galing talaga, tama sila caustic nlng ang kulng

one of the best!

ang bangis nyo sir hehe asteeg!! One of my bet hehe

Sir,
Another vote for lighting. Galing ng idea mo. Keep on posting.

sirs, just updated my entry.. thanks for the comments and suggestions guys..
i adjusted the tilt of the camera, added some fog and dust. i also fixed the map that makes the caustic effect.. hope you guys like it.. and as always more suggestions and comments are welcome..

good job sir!additional lang sir...ung lumot sa rope tama un...ung medyo expose kunting lumot lang...try to put sa area na tinamaan ng shadow mo,and dagdag pa ng displacement sa flooring...imho

mga sir sorry po sa late reply di po kasi makatagal ng net sa office e.. ung update lng po tapos out agad! hehehe

@ Muggz, Austria,mushroom,ice, reggie,mammoo,alicecocoz, m9z, silvercrown, glensky, butz_arki,chillrender,auguro, ortzak,aldrin - sir thanks po at nagustuhan nyo!

@ kurdaps- sir thanks po, dami nga po talaga magagaling na entry..

@jenaro, vamp,- thanks sa mga suggetions sir.. umayos ung output sir!

@uwak- sir thanks po sa comment.. nacorrect na po ung cam..


@xboy360- sir thanks po sa tips and references,, laking tulong po un sa output! thanks sir!

jenaro wrote:good job sir!additional lang sir...ung lumot sa rope tama un...ung medyo expose kunting lumot lang...try to put sa area na tinamaan ng shadow mo,and dagdag pa ng displacement sa flooring...imho

sir thanks po sa comment and suggestions.. try ko po update next week sir.. medyo dumadami na ulit yung mga gnagawa sa office e.. thanks sir!

nice work sir.... just the title, if you can edit it. just read the rules and regs... title format pa lang sir less point kaagad yan. , although not necessary but its a must..

sir render master thanks po sa advice! hehe di ko nabasa agad! hehe thanks sir!

wow under the sea astig sir!!! gusto ko na magdagat ulit at uminom hehehe idol toh!!!

sir halimaw ka!!!bow

excellent concept, remder and texturing... under water talaga... naku kung halata pa yung caustic effect nyan.... haneeeeeeeeeeeppp.

enjoy8OGART wrote:wow under the sea astig sir!!! gusto ko na magdagat ulit at uminom hehehe idol toh!!!

sir thanks po sa comment! oo nga sir pati ako nakakamiss mag dagat.. ung last na pinuntahan namin panay bato e.. hehehe! sir yung concept nyo po panalo yun astig!

ME_nesperos_27 wrote:sir halimaw ka!!!bow

sir ace salamat bro.. idol parin mga works mo sir.. ilabas mo na rin entry mo sir! hehehe

nomeradona wrote:excellent concept, remder and texturing... under water talaga... naku kung halata pa yung caustic effect nyan.... haneeeeeeeeeeeppp.

sir thanks po sa comment.. glad you liked it!
sayang nga sir di ko na maupdate sa office e..