AUSTRIA: Lighting and Texture Competition (Godfather House-UPDATED)

Ito ang aking Obra Maestra na pinamagatang Godfather House. Isang Obra maestra na kung saan ay naglalahad hango sa isang pelikulang pinilahan s puting tabing "The GODFATHER". Isang obra na nabuo mula s imahinasyon na kung saan ay naglalarawan s isang madilim n sulok n pamamalagi ng isang bida n leader ng sindikatong ito. Ginamitan ng konseptong ito ng mga elemento tulad ng sigarilyo,alak,baril at kapirasong papel n may nkasulat n wanted upang ipahatid s tumitingin ang kabuuang istorya nito. Ang madramatikong ilaw at Pulang rosas sa sahig ay simbolo na kung saan ay nagpapakita ng pagka misteryosong buhay ng Godfather. Sana po ang maibigan ninyo ang aking obra maestra.

"THE GODFATHER HOUSE"



ORIGINAL FILE

wow,,gud luck po ser..
sana lng may pinlyt sa taas,,meron kacng ies na ngcacast sa wall tpos wala nmang lyt sa ceil...

ayan dumadami na mga kalahok...

nadala ang aking damdamin sa inyong paglalahad ng larawan...ito po'y isang obra sir... ang ganda ng english wing chair!

jarul wrote:wow,,gud luck po ser..
sana lng may pinlyt sa taas,,meron kacng ies na ngcacast sa wall tpos wala nmang lyt sa ceil...

ayan dumadami na mga kalahok...

di k n nilagay sir...naisip k ang pinlight ay modernong teknolohiya na kya pasira ng sya s scene...classic time kc ang setting eh at try k n rin n lagyan pangit tlga...Dramatic painting kc gusto k ipalabas eh...thanks po

galeng dude....I like the drama....

torvicz wrote:galeng dude....I like the drama....

Thanks sir!!! maapreciate nyo lng ang obra ko pra n rin akong nanalo n hehehe

this is something different bro..astig...iba ang dating ng drama mo...galing

bro..hnhntay ko ang post mo.hehe..mtindi ka eh..ikaw ang master & expert....

torvicz wrote:galeng dude....I like the drama....

Hi sir! Congrats for joining I have a few suggestions though...The scene is too dark (the ceiling etc.- which is unrealistic as the chandelier should be illuminating it), the highlight on the floor is too bright, and the lens-flare effect on the chandelier is a big turn-off IMO. If you could improve these things I mentioned, this piece would look a lot better.

stunning bro. goodluck

good concept pro the scene is too dark hindi (i think its broad daylight based on the light coming from the outside) tuloy litaw maxado ang details ng texturing mo.... no light source is casting your IES light... goodluck.

xboy360 wrote:Hi sir! Congrats for joining I have a few suggestions though...The scene is too dark (the ceiling etc.- which is unrealistic as the chandelier should be illuminating it), the highlight on the floor is too bright, and the lens-flare effect on the chandelier is a big turn-off IMO. If you could improve these things I mentioned, this piece would look a lot better.

Thanks a lot bro!!! Ive got ur point and ur right bro...I try to illumminate the chandelier pero nwawala n kc ang drama ng scene eh lalo n ang
shadow s floor. Actually sinasadya k tlga n madilim ang scene kc pra mag mukhang syang misteryoso ang scene kc d b God Father nga ang concept ko.
I want to make a scene which is tamang tama s konsepto ko at babagay n rin..Ung tipong nakikipag usap syo ang litrato..aniwe slamat n rin bro pag may time try k po....

SunDance wrote:good concept pro the scene is too dark hindi (i think its broad daylight based on the light coming from the outside) tuloy litaw maxado ang details ng texturing mo.... no light source is casting your IES light... goodluck.

Thanks!!!!MADILIM sya bro kc sinasadya k yn pra lumabas ang pagka mystery ng GOD Father n they are popularly known as many secret because they are Sindacate....Kpag liliwanagan k nmn yn nawawala ung pagka artistic ng scene...Gusto k rin kc lumabas ung shadow ng tao s floor...nwawala kc pag niliwngan k s taas eh..aniwe thanks bro.

saken kahit medyo may kunting idagdag but still this is the best way to present it,the best ito kasi the picture speak for its self sir!nice job!isang obra...

Cge kung may time pagandahin k p hehehe...mtgal p nmn deadline eh....Thank you s lhat ng nag appreciate s obra ko...

AUSTRIA wrote:

jarul wrote:wow,,gud luck po ser..
sana lng may pinlyt sa taas,,meron kacng ies na ngcacast sa wall tpos wala nmang lyt sa ceil...

ayan dumadami na mga kalahok...

di k n nilagay sir...naisip k ang pinlight ay modernong teknolohiya na kya pasira ng sya s scene...classic time kc ang setting eh at try k n rin n lagyan pangit tlga...Dramatic painting kc gusto k ipalabas eh...thanks po

sa tignin ko po khit classic time kalingan pa rin po ng lyt source...

Sige sige sir jarul pra syo i modify k p....pero kailangan manalo ako sir hah..joke lng...slamat sir s suggestion

galing ng scene pwede for action,drama n horror

Mga cgpips post k n rin original file ko as I recieve comments n dpat may kaunting liwanag po s ceiling...
Do you think this is better? well kung ganun ito n cguro ung entry ko heheh..like wat ive said ma appreciate nyo lng para n rin akong nanalo....God bless

this is much better sir.... sakin panalong panalo na to... (un lang volume light maxado sharp edges nya)

I like the idea, better make it with night scene instead.

Good Luck!

SunDance wrote:this is much better sir.... sakin panalong panalo na to... (un lang volume light maxado sharp edges nya)

Di nga sir....thanks aniwe sharp p b edges ng volume light ko? cge lng edit k ulit

kurdaps! wrote:I like the idea, better make it with night scene instead.

Good Luck!

Thanks sir sherwin!!! Night scene uu nga noh...pwede b dlwa entry? cge pag may time gwin k po...

[quote="jenaro"]saken kahit medyo may kunting idagdag but still this is the best way to present it,the best ito kasi the picture speak for its self sir!nice job!isang obra... [/quote

Sir jenaro asan n ung post m? Sali k n mukhang pinaghahandaan m lng ah...

nico wrote:galing ng scene pwede for action,drama n horror

hehehe uu nga noh...thanks for dropping by...post n sir lupet dn kya ng banatss m...