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Post by callow_arki28 Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:53 am

my 2nd post practice lng exterior (max + vray + photoshop) Carwashprojectscheme2a-1
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Post by jenaro Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:56 am

nice job sir...materials na lang sa road ok na lahat... 2thumbsup
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Post by callow_arki28 Thu Mar 05, 2009 6:01 am

jenaro wrote:nice job sir...materials na lang sa road ok na lahat... 2thumbsup


thank you sir! hayaan nyo po improve ko po yan ulit.
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Post by patz_28 Thu Mar 05, 2009 6:34 am

to add sir sa glass material add refraction gawin mong white or grey...road mat hanap k ng mas maganda...magnda na lighting para sa akin..keep posting sir
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Post by callow_arki28 Thu Mar 05, 2009 6:42 am

patz_28 wrote:to add sir sa glass material add refraction gawin mong white or grey...road mat hanap k ng mas maganda...magnda na lighting para sa akin..keep posting sir
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actually sir medyo nahirarapan ako sa road pero try ko parin maghanap ng magandang materials, thank you po sir for the comment! Smile
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Post by arki_vhin Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:11 am

un na pla 2nd post mo bro...IMHO ha...
1. road map as the others said...improve mo
2. background ingat sa paglalagay chek mo horizon lines mo....
3. shadows pili k ng ibang angle ng sun mo...un kse nagdadala minsan sa scene e...
4. lapit mo konti ang camera mo sa model....khit d mxado kita ang road...

ok nkuha mo n ang glass konting tweak nlang...post more...
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Post by darwinzzkie Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:31 am

sipag mo naman kasi busy sa work.
fucos po sa road yung camera lapit mo kunti.
tapos my kulang pa yan eh ganito inuman na
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Post by Stryker Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:40 pm

konting improve pa s mapping... thumbsup
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Post by alwin Thu Mar 05, 2009 8:12 pm

take a look on mapping, lightings at least kunti na lang ang gagawin mo sa photoshop!
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Post by Butz_Arki Thu Mar 05, 2009 8:26 pm

try to find good mats for road...welcome sa cgp!!
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Post by i3dness Fri Mar 06, 2009 1:41 am

Since na comment na yung iba, eto pong comment ko sir:

1. yung window glass sa car accesories showroom dapat see thru para mabenta kung ano dapat ibenta sa loob. (showroom kc diba)

dapat me logo ng mga kotse sa labas tulad mitsubishi or toyota para malaman na me accessories talaga ng mismong kotse binebenta dun.

2. yung background dapat ala yung bldg. parang nakadikit kc sa carwash bldg.


3. setback lang po from road to bldg yun carwash. dapat tiles ang partition wall sa carwash para less maintenance and cleaning.
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Post by silvercrown Fri Mar 06, 2009 3:25 pm

Check your scale... cars are too big... other comments are said... sundan mo nlng bro. Smile
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Post by Jay2x Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:36 pm

sir walang kabuhay buhay yung scene ..add nlang ng trees at kung practice lang ito give ur best shot.
at kung best shot mona ito improve a lot.. gud kluck 2thumbsup
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Post by owenski Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:51 pm

sir, ok improvment nito kumpara dun sa nauna nyo...

ponters lang...
1. kgaya ng sabi ng iba, mas maganda if nakikita ung loob nung sa car accesories, IMHO... make it more refractive sir....
2. sir jay2x says na walang kabuhay buhay ang scene, well, INHO uli, wala nga, Very Happy , if meron bitin na bitin... try adding walk ways/sidewalks, improve ung road, dagdag ng konting abubot (side dish ba...hehe)
3. ingat sir sa burn. medyo may napansin akong burn sa lower right, para sakin it would be mush better kung madefine ung edges kahit konti..
4.try playing with the size of the image (IMHO mas maganda kung medyo pahaba ung image since pahaba ng halos 1 storey lng sya) and you're cam angles....

pero, nice improvement sir... post more!!!! hippie
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