Two Storey Residence (1st exterior render for 2009)UPDATED

After nights of working, this finally finished. I know this far from perfect, but i really have no more time to work on this. Comments are welcome, for further improvement.

Max+vray+PS

TIA.

EDIT: Updated images as per comments, and added another view just for fun. Hope you all enjoy this one. Keep those comments coming.

i love the light setting bro & so with the sky bro! great talaga!

ok ang light settings bro... medyo malapit lng xa sa property line.. e setback lng ng konti... 2 meters sa front at 1.5 meters for sides and rear..

nice render sir...astig

i think you got problems on your roof.. hmmm... map po ba ito o model? nice lighting... aprub na to ser bossing

@sir mokong, di po ba 3 meters upfront 2 meters sa side ang provisions for easements?...

sir arkied... ganda na ng lighting natin ahhh... like sir erick mentioned, yung roof natin medyo may problema... tapos medyo napa taas ata displacement natin sa grass?... modelling is really clean... next post ulit sir...

ERICK wrote:i think you got problems on your roof.. hmmm... map po ba ito o model? nice lighting... aprub na to ser bossing

Yes...dahil sa pagmamadali, di ko na masyadong tinutukan yung roofing..kelangan makita ng aming customer eh. Model yung roof sir...pagnagka free, update ko yan.

Thanks...

cloud20 wrote:@sir mokong, di po ba 3 meters upfront 2 meters sa side ang provisions for easements?...

sir arkied... ganda na ng lighting natin ahhh... like sir erick mentioned, yung roof natin medyo may problema... tapos medyo napa taas ata displacement natin sa grass?... modelling is really clean... next post ulit sir...

uy salamat. Coming from an exterior master, that means a lot. Update ko yung roof pagnasubmit na to...gawa pa ako drawings...hehehe...As for the grass..will check, i think the values are a bit high...

Thanks a lot sir cloud.

arkiedmund wrote:

ERICK wrote:i think you got problems on your roof.. hmmm... map po ba ito o model? nice lighting... aprub na to ser bossing

Yes...dahil sa pagmamadali, di ko na masyadong tinutukan yung roofing..kelangan makita ng aming customer eh. Model yung roof sir...pagnagka free, update ko yan.

Thanks...

o i see... pero lighting you rock ser bossing... eh di ang bigat na netong model mo ser? autocad architecture po ba gamit nyo?

mokong wrote:ok ang light settings bro... medyo malapit lng xa sa property line.. e setback lng ng konti... 2 meters sa front at 1.5 meters for sides and rear..

Wala rin kaming magawa..the owner wants it to be bigger..thanks anyway...btw, it's 3 meters front and 2 meters setback on the rest of the bldg perimeter IMHO.

ERICK wrote:

arkiedmund wrote:

ERICK wrote:i think you got problems on your roof.. hmmm... map po ba ito o model? nice lighting... aprub na to ser bossing

Yes...dahil sa pagmamadali, di ko na masyadong tinutukan yung roofing..kelangan makita ng aming customer eh. Model yung roof sir...pagnagka free, update ko yan.

Thanks...

o i see... pero lighting you rock ser bossing... eh di ang bigat na netong model mo ser? autocad architecture po ba gamit nyo?

Modeled everything in MAX. Yung roofing mesh ko, bale plane lang yan. I just maniplated it to form a 3d looking roof without resorting to bitmaps. Mas magaan, pero, a bit clever to setup. Try kong share yung tutorial dyan. Thanks for asking.

Sir,
Nice corner lot house. Ganda nito works mo. More views pa po. Keep on posting.

aldrinv2 wrote:Sir,
Nice corner lot house. Ganda nito works mo. More views pa po. Keep on posting.

Thank you sir....gawa pa tayo next time ulit..

Ganda ng lighting sir! linis din ng render...
Baka pwede babaan ng konti yung level ng canopy at arch sa garage... para di skinny tingnan yun columns IMHO lang po...
Overall, galing!

silvercrown wrote:Ganda ng lighting sir! linis din ng render...
Baka pwede babaan ng konti yung level ng canopy at arch sa garage... para di skinny tingnan yun columns IMHO lang po...
Overall, galing!

nga no? di ko napansin yun ah... eagle eyes sir silvercrown

para sakin ok n to..nice lighting managerr.. i love the color palette.. great job!

cloud20 wrote:

silvercrown wrote:Ganda ng lighting sir! linis din ng render...
Baka pwede babaan ng konti yung level ng canopy at arch sa garage... para di skinny tingnan yun columns IMHO lang po...
Overall, galing!

nga no? di ko napansin yun ah... eagle eyes sir silvercrown

Ayus...napansin ko din yun...nangyari yan kasi nagstep-up pa bago mag finish floor level. I think modifications will be implemented on construction, update ko lang yung drawings nito.

Salamat...

Butz_Arki wrote:para sakin ok n to..nice lighting managerr.. i love the color palette.. great job!

Thanks sir....

hmm.. notice ko rn ung roof... camera corection sir.. or ksma sa presentation nio ung distort camera...
too much verticals lng po pra skn ung buong house... medyo lacking cya sir ng play ng shapes..

pero sir.. galing ng composition ntn dito ah... ganda rn ng lighting..
god bless sir..

sir ed...comments been said sir.
nice render and design sir...

kip em coming sir ed.

lighting and rendering ayus
maliwanag... ang ganda...
yung iba pong roof tiles nakalimutan... ganyan talaga pag rush..hehe
post pa po

ung roof lang sir.... the rest ok na ok.....
i like the lighting.......

very nice design and render sir, un lng cguro proportion kc nagiging payat ung columns pti setbacks, nawala rn ung sidewalks. hndi naman ganito sa actual kc delikado.hehe. ganda ng color combination.stig.

Bihira magpost pero habang tumatagal gumagaling Sir Ed!

Wala na me ma-say sa Rendering. Some elements lang sa design na medyo off, nasabi na nila.

you did a great job sir ed..ganda ng design and rendering..although kailangan pa nga adjust yung ibang parts like the garage dahil nagmukhang payat yung mga columns. then suggest ko lang yung konting reflection ng environment sa glass material para hindi mukang haunted house..hihihi.just kidding.