thesis project cityhall (3dmax + mental ray)

thesis ko last sem, using max and mental ray

welcome bro. dumadami na ang TIP boys sa CG. hehe
wala muna barkada barkada ha,
maganda ung model, pero wala ung reflection ng glass natin
un lang sa glass lang the rest ok na.
post mo pa ung iba

just some mapping issues to give it a more realistic feel

try adding more cars, people and objects to the scene..
after all its a city hall which is usually bustling with activity..

image is also a little blurred and the poly on the sidewalk is obvious.

this is going to be great im sure! ill wait for the update on this one!

goodluck!

check proportion and camera angle. nice mental ray lighting!

Exterior design of facade ok sa akin pati yung kulay. bakit blurry sya sir? low res ata??? dont forget tomake the glass reflection lively... yun ang attraction most of the exterior bldg presentation.

actually d ko alam kng bkit sya blurry, ok naman sya kapag natapos ung rendering pero pag save ko sya dati as jpeg ganun nagb-blur talaga, d bale nextime try ko po improve sa photoshop, thanks po sa comment sir..

trac006 wrote:just some mapping issues to give it a more realistic feel

try adding more cars, people and objects to the scene..
after all its a city hall which is usually bustling with activity..

image is also a little blurred and the poly on the sidewalk is obvious.

this is going to be great im sure! ill wait for the update on this one!

goodluck!

Salamat sa comment sir, nextime po na marevised ko to try ko po ung suggestion nyo. thank u po ulit!

bawasan mo yung leaves na nag-frame sa image... malaki yung mapping ng sidewalk, kaya maliit tingnan kotse mo, dagdagan pa ang landscape elements, change camera angle, yung ibang comment nasabi na...
Welcome bro!

sir try nyo save s bitmap hope that helps

welcome po sir. . ..minor commnts lng try mo lapit ang camera pra kita yung details ng buiilding the rest nsabi n po nila. . ..keep posting

welcome to cgp, objects proportioning,
sobrang laki ng tiling side walk.
add bump also. try to repost again,

welcome bro...nakita rin kita d2..heheh ...d ba marami yan?...post mo n lahat hehe...open nman tayo d2 eh..hehe anyway camera focus is important bro kung anu ung gusto mo ipakita un dapat k magfocus dats it muna...hehe post more

mga TIP boys pla/ mga malulupit na bata mga ito.... OT.

OT: makiki-usyoso lang. hehehe.. whats TIP?

nwei, on the outpot... sir, ang layo mo po sa subject. dunno if what do u want to showcase, is it the development or the building. as for me, imho, i want my building to be the highlight. the extra tree sa harapan, pwedeng ala na din. be careful also on the jagged part of ur model which is dapat curve talga.. lalo na f it is on the cameras focus. also maybe adjust mo ung road map. other comments have already been told. welcome here bro.

vamp_lestat wrote:OT: makiki-usyoso lang. hehehe.. whats TIP?

nwei, on the outpot... sir, ang layo mo po sa subject. dunno if what do u want to showcase, is it the development or the building. as for me, imho, i want my building to be the highlight. the extra tree sa harapan, pwedeng ala na din. be careful also on the jagged part of ur model which is dapat curve talga.. lalo na f it is on the cameras focus. also maybe adjust mo ung road map. other comments have already been told. welcome here bro.

gradw8 n yan skulmate ko hehehe....anyway pakilala ko TIP sayo sir...TIP means TECHNOLOGICAL INSTITUTE OF THE PHILS...heheh...

welcome s cgp..keep practicing lang bro!!

thank you po sa warm welcome

arki_vhin wrote:

vamp_lestat wrote:OT: makiki-usyoso lang. hehehe.. whats TIP?

nwei, on the outpot... sir, ang layo mo po sa subject. dunno if what do u want to showcase, is it the development or the building. as for me, imho, i want my building to be the highlight. the extra tree sa harapan, pwedeng ala na din. be careful also on the jagged part of ur model which is dapat curve talga.. lalo na f it is on the cameras focus. also maybe adjust mo ung road map. other comments have already been told. welcome here bro.

gradw8 n yan skulmate ko hehehe....anyway pakilala ko TIP sayo sir...TIP means TECHNOLOGICAL INSTITUTE OF THE PHILS...heheh...

hehehe.. yun pala un.. "da me" talaga... tnx bro.

Welcome to CGP bro. comment ko is try to focus on the subject, change mo ung camera angle para magawa mo yun. Yung leaves on the left is too much, agaw eksena, tapos ung angle mo ng camera, try mo pang ibaba para human eye level ang tingin, right now parang nasa taas ng puno ang kumukuha ng camera. Good luck bro.

glass & camera tweaking lang ang sa akin bro the rest is nasabni na nila!

mental ray ba gamit mo bro,galing din ksi me dyan eh.

pero ito ang napuna ko imho lang ha,yung orange na puno mo masyadong malaki halos sumayad na sa brick tiling confused tuloy kung shrub or tree nga then pagdating sa kabilang puno lumiit naman di yata proportion....lumiit tuloy ang tingin sa kotse.pkilagyan ng material yung main road sir.

other comments has been said na.

welcome here bro
cheers