THESIS proposal (I)
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THESIS proposal (I)
hello po mga sir Smile ito po mga proposals ko.. pa help naman po by criticizing my proposals. further and deep opinions from you guys. Smile
1.A therapeutic garden, spa, and resort.
2.A multi-level, multi-purposed Evacuation Center
3.An ecological mid-rise, mixed-use building with garden
1.A therapeutic garden, spa, and resort.
2.A multi-level, multi-purposed Evacuation Center
3.An ecological mid-rise, mixed-use building with garden
Last edited by jareca_JAJA on Tue Jun 12, 2012 10:31 pm; edited 2 times in total
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
in my opinion po...
1. Is there a need for another resort? well depende sa site siguro, pero I find these kind of building types can only provide income in terms of tourism and employment maybe. pero ano ang main problem na isinosolve mo dito?
2. Maganda po ang facility na ito lalo na ngayon na hindi na maikakaila na sunod-sunod na ang calamities, pero my flaw parin ito, ano ang use ng evacuation center mo kung walang calamity, besides being a multi-purpose hall, basically dapat may use sya like training center or something.
3. kung tama po ang pagakkaintindi ko dito sa ecological mid-rise nyo po, ang goal nyo po ay mai-incorporate ang nature within mid-rises?
ayun po, hope these helps,
opinion ko lang naman po ang lahat ng ito, maaaring may mali din po dito.
goodluck
1. Is there a need for another resort? well depende sa site siguro, pero I find these kind of building types can only provide income in terms of tourism and employment maybe. pero ano ang main problem na isinosolve mo dito?
2. Maganda po ang facility na ito lalo na ngayon na hindi na maikakaila na sunod-sunod na ang calamities, pero my flaw parin ito, ano ang use ng evacuation center mo kung walang calamity, besides being a multi-purpose hall, basically dapat may use sya like training center or something.
3. kung tama po ang pagakkaintindi ko dito sa ecological mid-rise nyo po, ang goal nyo po ay mai-incorporate ang nature within mid-rises?
ayun po, hope these helps,
opinion ko lang naman po ang lahat ng ito, maaaring may mali din po dito.
goodluck
pipicosis- CGP Apprentice
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
ito naman po ang mga reasons ko why i come up in this proposals :
1. A therapeutic garden, spa, and resort.
-i know po na madami nang resort dito sa philippines so i want to build a resort that offer something new to public which is therapeutic. therapeutic po sya in a way relaxing, ung tipong malayo sa bayan,. something ganun.
-after ko po syang maipacheck. she ask me na "related daw ba ito sa mga my traumatic experience or something" so napaisip ako na it must be also offer and provide medical facilities, so hindi lang pala ito RESORT?
2.A multi-level, multi-purposed Evacuation Center
-almost ok namn po sya after kong ipresent sa adviser ko, i need some suggestions pa regarding po this project.
3.An ecological mid-rise, mixed-use building with garden
-pinresent ko po ito sa adviser ko, kealang FEASIBILITY matters daw. di pa daw po sya patok dito sa Nueva Ecija. lalangawin pa daw, pero i think hindi palang sya ganun naiintroduce. i still looking some data and ipepresent ko ulet sa kanya. critic and comments nga po jan
1. A therapeutic garden, spa, and resort.
-i know po na madami nang resort dito sa philippines so i want to build a resort that offer something new to public which is therapeutic. therapeutic po sya in a way relaxing, ung tipong malayo sa bayan,. something ganun.
-after ko po syang maipacheck. she ask me na "related daw ba ito sa mga my traumatic experience or something" so napaisip ako na it must be also offer and provide medical facilities, so hindi lang pala ito RESORT?
2.A multi-level, multi-purposed Evacuation Center
-almost ok namn po sya after kong ipresent sa adviser ko, i need some suggestions pa regarding po this project.
3.An ecological mid-rise, mixed-use building with garden
-pinresent ko po ito sa adviser ko, kealang FEASIBILITY matters daw. di pa daw po sya patok dito sa Nueva Ecija. lalangawin pa daw, pero i think hindi palang sya ganun naiintroduce. i still looking some data and ipepresent ko ulet sa kanya. critic and comments nga po jan
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
pipicosis wrote:in my opinion po...
1. Is there a need for another resort? well depende sa site siguro, pero I find these kind of building types can only provide income in terms of tourism and employment maybe. pero ano ang main problem na isinosolve mo dito?
2. Maganda po ang facility na ito lalo na ngayon na hindi na maikakaila na sunod-sunod na ang calamities, pero my flaw parin ito, ano ang use ng evacuation center mo kung walang calamity, besides being a multi-purpose hall, basically dapat may use sya like training center or something.
3. kung tama po ang pagakkaintindi ko dito sa ecological mid-rise nyo po, ang goal nyo po ay mai-incorporate ang nature within mid-rises?
ayun po, hope these helps,
opinion ko lang naman po ang lahat ng ito, maaaring may mali din po dito.
goodluck
salamat po sir pipicosis sa opinions
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
i think the best yung evacuation center however, you must think of an alternative use for the building kung wala naman emergency. Yung sa resort kase, any resort will be therapeutic kase the reason one will go to a resort is to relax so no point in making a "therapeutic" resort, mamumuka lang false advertisement.
palceto- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
thanks po sir palceto sa pagdaan
actually multi purposed po ung evacuation, ung tipong pag walang gagamit, open po sya sa mga sport activities and other community events. my problem po is yung pagpapaalis sa mga evacuee, baka daw po kasi hindi na sila umalis, or gawin na syang parang squatter, and how 'bout po to make it MULTI-LEVEL? will it be possible? and ano po sa tingin nyo ung magiging further problem pa for this proposal?
and how bout po sa my 2 other proposals?
actually multi purposed po ung evacuation, ung tipong pag walang gagamit, open po sya sa mga sport activities and other community events. my problem po is yung pagpapaalis sa mga evacuee, baka daw po kasi hindi na sila umalis, or gawin na syang parang squatter, and how 'bout po to make it MULTI-LEVEL? will it be possible? and ano po sa tingin nyo ung magiging further problem pa for this proposal?
and how bout po sa my 2 other proposals?
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
Try mo idevelop ang evacuation center. Ano sya kung walang evacuation na mangyayari. Siguro integrate mo din ang disaster awareness division ng government. Pwede mo sya gawing conference venue pag walang calamity. Develop mo pa ito. Ito yung pinaka-relevant sa situation natin ngayon at ito ang pinakakailangan natin. Pwede ba syang basketball court pag walang calamity? Something like that ang kailangan mo masagot para maging patok itong concept mo. Good luck!
Re: THESIS proposal (I)
bokkins wrote:Try mo idevelop ang evacuation center. Ano sya kung walang evacuation na mangyayari. Siguro integrate mo din ang disaster awareness division ng government. Pwede mo sya gawing conference venue pag walang calamity. Develop mo pa ito. Ito yung pinaka-relevant sa situation natin ngayon at ito ang pinakakailangan natin. Pwede ba syang basketball court pag walang calamity? Something like that ang kailangan mo masagot para maging patok itong concept mo. Good luck!
salamat po sir bokkins. salamat po sa comments. actuallt. i'd like to add some green technology na maglelessen sa paggamit ng water at electricity like water harvesting na na magsusuply sa toilet flushing at para sa vegetation and planting matter.
PROBLEM:
ako din po ba ang magsosolusyon bout sa pagpapaalis sa mga evacuee? o db po dapat sa gov't na un? un po kasi ang paulit ulit na tanong ng adviser ko. sino nga po ba?
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
Yup ikaw lahat ang magstrategize para mabenta mo ang concept. Kung ilalagay mo lang yan na wala lang kasi maganda pakinggan, walang mangyayari. Thesis should be solving problems. Kung hindi mo kaya, you need to research and gather data that will help you. Ask your local government kung ano ang naging issue nila for the past typhoons etc. Then pag nasolve mo yun with your thesis. For sure - magtatop ka sa class mo. Good luck!
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bokkins wrote:Yup ikaw lahat ang magstrategize para mabenta mo ang concept. Kung ilalagay mo lang yan na wala lang kasi maganda pakinggan, walang mangyayari. Thesis should be solving problems. Kung hindi mo kaya, you need to research and gather data that will help you. Ask your local government kung ano ang naging issue nila for the past typhoons etc. Then pag nasolve mo yun with your thesis. For sure - magtatop ka sa class mo. Good luck!
sobrang maraming salamt po sir. hehe!
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
actually, hindi na problem ng designer kung papano aalis yung mga mageevacuate sa evac center. Problem na un ng govt/management. Pero madalas kasi sa thesis itatanong sayo mga irrelevant questions, mga di na problem ng architect pero itatanong pa din sayo. If this would still be a matter, then pwede mo gawin na collapsible ung mga temporary shelter or may certain limit yung duration ng use ng building. for example naka compute yung capacity ng water supply mo for 1week-1month.
Kung multilevel naman, tataas ung cost making it less feasible kasi govt project yan, however check the local government kung meron silang future project na ganyan and kung may budget na for that kind of structure. Pwede mo din incorporate mga green technology like solar harvesting and water harvesting to lessen the operation cost pero mas mahal initial cost nya.
Kung multilevel naman, tataas ung cost making it less feasible kasi govt project yan, however check the local government kung meron silang future project na ganyan and kung may budget na for that kind of structure. Pwede mo din incorporate mga green technology like solar harvesting and water harvesting to lessen the operation cost pero mas mahal initial cost nya.
palceto- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
palceto wrote:actually, hindi na problem ng designer kung papano aalis yung mga mageevacuate sa evac center. Problem na un ng govt/management. Pero madalas kasi sa thesis itatanong sayo mga irrelevant questions, mga di na problem ng architect pero itatanong pa din sayo. If this would still be a matter, then pwede mo gawin na collapsible ung mga temporary shelter or may certain limit yung duration ng use ng building. for example naka compute yung capacity ng water supply mo for 1week-1month.
Kung multilevel naman, tataas ung cost making it less feasible kasi govt project yan, however check the local government kung meron silang future project na ganyan and kung may budget na for that kind of structure. Pwede mo din incorporate mga green technology like solar harvesting and water harvesting to lessen the operation cost pero mas mahal initial cost nya.
oo nga po eh. pati un tinatanong. even the transportation ng mga evacuee back and fort. haha! well i will try to communicate po sa local gov't ng site ko.
salamt po sa mga comments nyo.
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
suggestions pa nga po! salamat
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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in terms sa resort naman tama yung mga other comments..lahat kasi ng resort nagoofer ng therapeutic services ehh....ang dapat isipin mo kung anong resort siya..beach resort?(sa nuva ecija ba yung site mo?mafami na ba niyan diyan?)sa lagay ng tourism natin pinupursue ng dot yung mga kakaibang tourism spot bakit hindi mo subukan yung ecoturism and agro-tourism
jamesalbert- CGP Apprentice
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
good day po. ask ko lang, if ever na itutuloy ko po ung sa Evacuation Center, paano po yung ROI? eh for government use naman po un db? do i need or required na magpresent ng datas kung paano maibalik yung budget o funds?
salamat po ng marami
salamat po ng marami
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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hindi naman po kumukita ung evacuation center, and pag hindi sya ginagamit open lang sya sa mga community activities.
my question is, pano ko ipepresent ang ROI nya, do i need to provide ng Tindahan? mag put up ng vegetation to market at maitinda rara lang may maipakita sa ROI? o ganun po b? pano po ba yun?
my question is, pano ko ipepresent ang ROI nya, do i need to provide ng Tindahan? mag put up ng vegetation to market at maitinda rara lang may maipakita sa ROI? o ganun po b? pano po ba yun?
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
ito ang isa sa mga pwedeng alternative use ng evac center mo... dapat profitable, in terms na hindi sya maaapektohan in case na may calamaity, iyung tipong mapapakinabangan pa ng evacuees while temporarily residing.
madaming pwedeng alternatives dyan, pumili ka ng sa tingin mo ay posible then we will discuss about it
madaming pwedeng alternatives dyan, pumili ka ng sa tingin mo ay posible then we will discuss about it
pipicosis- CGP Apprentice
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
profitable? ok po. pagiisipan ko po tong sinabi nyo,
pero i'm sure na hindi TINDAHAN db po? baka naman po ito ang maging reason para lalong hindi namn na umalis ang mga evacuee. hehe!
cge po. maghahanap po ako.
pero i'm sure na hindi TINDAHAN db po? baka naman po ito ang maging reason para lalong hindi namn na umalis ang mga evacuee. hehe!
cge po. maghahanap po ako.
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
is it really required sa inyo na gumawa ng building na may ROI kahit hindi commercial use? natanong mo na ba sa prof mo kung pwedeng walang ROI since non-profit institution naman yata ang itatayo mo.
Master Noob- CGP Newbie
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Re: THESIS proposal (I)
ang alam ko talaga ay kaylangan magpresent ng ROI eh
pero ask ko po ang teacher ko 'bout this,
hindi pa po kasi ako pumapasok since last week eh.
another thing po, for proposal pa naman po ito, with the other 2 titles pa na ipepresent ko this coming week with the jury, baka lang po maitanong eh. salamat po sa comment sir
pero ask ko po ang teacher ko 'bout this,
hindi pa po kasi ako pumapasok since last week eh.
another thing po, for proposal pa naman po ito, with the other 2 titles pa na ipepresent ko this coming week with the jury, baka lang po maitanong eh. salamat po sa comment sir
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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for me the best ang evacuation center proposal, very timely sya, you just need a very thorough study about this project. good luck.
Master Noob- CGP Newbie
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salamat po sir. actually po nareject na ng adviser ko ung dalawa except sa evacuation center :DD
so i need to provide 2 TITLES pa po ulet for back up. salamat po.
so i need to provide 2 TITLES pa po ulet for back up. salamat po.
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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good day po mga masters. baka po meron kayong links 'bout sa evacuation center? salamat po.
mga pwede pang basihan, mga conceptong at technology. salamat po.
mga pwede pang basihan, mga conceptong at technology. salamat po.
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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2. evacuation center
gawin mong park, parang luneta, tingin ko mas feasible to kesa multilevel na evacuation center. para may building ka dun mo rin ilagay yung firedepartment, yung park pwede sila dun mag drill. pag walang disaster may pasyalan yung mga residente ng lugar nayon, na tingin ko kulang na kulang dito sa atin para maka pag unwind mga tao.
gawin mong park, parang luneta, tingin ko mas feasible to kesa multilevel na evacuation center. para may building ka dun mo rin ilagay yung firedepartment, yung park pwede sila dun mag drill. pag walang disaster may pasyalan yung mga residente ng lugar nayon, na tingin ko kulang na kulang dito sa atin para maka pag unwind mga tao.
makapili- CGP Newbie
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makapili wrote:2. evacuation center
gawin mong park, parang luneta, tingin ko mas feasible to kesa multilevel na evacuation center. para may building ka dun mo rin ilagay yung firedepartment, yung park pwede sila dun mag drill. pag walang disaster may pasyalan yung mga residente ng lugar nayon, na tingin ko kulang na kulang dito sa atin para maka pag unwind mga tao.
salamat po sa suggestions.
jareca_JAJA- CGP Newbie
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