My house proposal...Updated Before & After....

Hello Cg pips Good day! Quite while ago since my last post... due to the busy work load... And again I would like to share my latest work In 3d max... Using HDRI background & Reflection Override, VraySky for Environment Override... COMPUTER SPECS: Core2Duo - 2GB RAM... C&C are most welcome for improvements... thank you very much...
WF = Autocad + Max Vray + Photoshop:

CG peeps pa update ng dati ko gawa... critics & comments...
UPDATED...
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update2:

update3:

update DOF:

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update5:
updated combined:
updated: additional view: one-point perspective:

updated6:

BEFORE:
*pa post ulit cgpips.... using DOF & Bokeh effect... (new add'l post)

*View 1 - post render + xref & HDRI

*View 2 - post render + xref & HDRI

*view 3 - normal view_post render + xref & HDRI

*view 4 - DOF effect using photoshop...


*view 5... dagdag view lang...

Ayus ayus to sir!ganda ng design and render.standard cam po ba gamit nyo?comment k lng po sa dof lalo na kapag may glass na matatamaan kc pati ung object behind the glass eh lumilinaw din instead na blur.try mo sir ung dof ng physical camera.suggestion ko lang naman po yan basta me glass na involve sa dof na makikita ang likod.overall sir malupit talaga.tfs!!!

very nice render. comment huwag mong puputolin yung bahay. nice render keep posting

nice sir..but when producing architectural visualization dapat focus sa building itself wag mo xa ccut and wag lang din po sa car maka focus..IMHO lng po nice render keep posting

tama sila sir...nice!

nice render pero putol ang bldg view mo sir, sa spot views mo pwedeng ifocus ang kotse pero sa main view mo naputol parin ang bldg mo, parang nasapawan ng kotse ang building mo sa lahat ng views mo, ang building dapat ang focus sa main perspective.

nice sir galing like it.ganda ng mga trees rin baka pwede makihingi sir? hehe

nice work sir
core2 due lang pero ang ganda ng output papaano mo ginawa to sir? any tips kasi sa akin 4gb ram pero ang pangit ng output mag crash pa

@jaymer: thank you sir, vraysun gamit ko, actually binu blurr ko lang jan sa photoshop...DOF... di ko pa nasubukan ung DOF sa cam... medyo pag aralan ko pa yun... baka pwede mka share if papaano gagamitin un...noted po yan sir..anyway thank you...

@reimhedz... thank you sir

@oby20,Neil Joshua Rosario, davens07
thanks! ... actually 2 lang talaga sana ung view ko (ung view1&2)... kaso lang nung nirender ko ung isang pang cam na malapit may kotse nagandahan ako dun sa view kaya itinuloy ko na... tapos binu-blurr ko sa photoshop pra parang DOF... about sa view talagang pinutol ko ung sa may stairwell kc medyo di balance parang mataas tingna... proposal ko kc ng house ko... di ko n masyado pinaganda pra minus gastos... hehehhehe... ska nlang pag malaki n budget...

@modelrenz_2011:
thanks , actually download ko lang siya sa internet evermotion archmodels: (link deleted) due to the forum rules... pasensya na po..

johnolive100 wrote:nice work sir
core2 due lang pero ang ganda ng output papaano mo ginawa to sir? any tips kasi sa akin 4gb ram pero ang pangit ng output mag crash pa

pra d mag crash ung computer mo,,, dapat may post render ka & nka vrmesh ung plants & cars mo... etc na mabigat n polygon...

hint:
1. (assuming na nka set na ung view mo) render mo muna ung scene sa stage 1 na post render till makuha mo na ung mgandang setting pero nka uncheck ung displacement, anti-aliasing filter, ambient occlusion...({GI}irradiance & light cache)then hit render, pero low settings muna then pag ok na, save mo ung ({GI}irradiance & light cache)...
2. pwede u na i-check ung ung displacement, anti-aliasing filter, ambient occlusion... desired output size, then reload mo ung irradiance & light cache... then render for final... ...
try mo din mag expirement ng ibang system sa render... kung ano mas maganda... good luck...
@ mga expert cgpips, pasensya na pag medyo kulang yong explaination ko pkidagadagan na lang...thanks i appreciate...

ang ganda sir nito very nice render and design tamang tama. .

ang ganda ng kotse sir...ayus...

Rheinfell wrote:@modelrenz_2011:
thanks , actually download ko lang siya sa internet evermotion archmodels thru isohunt: try mo to link na to: http://isohunt.com/torrent_details/154726381/Archmodels?tab=summary marami dyan sir... or http://isohunt.com/

please read the forum rules. mods & admin kayo na po bahala.

-good job sir!!!

davens07 wrote:nice sir..but when producing architectural visualization dapat focus sa building itself wag mo xa ccut and wag lang din po sa car maka focus..IMHO lng po nice render keep posting

Another link na naman.........
http://www.cgpinoy.org/t1237-cgp-does-not-allow-text-speak-dialects-all-caps-jejemons

konteng tweak pa sa PS sir for sure panalo na yan.

@phranq... sorry po sir... pasensya na po... noted po... anyway, thank you po sir sa info & advisory...

deosrock wrote:-good job sir!!!

thank you sir!!!...

archshade02 wrote:konteng tweak pa sa PS sir for sure panalo na yan.

thank you sir, noted po yan.. ...

@verin angelo & pot-g, thank you sir

nice car!!

3STAN wrote:nice car!!

thanks sir... like ko din ung car... actually di sna ksama ito sa vies ko na i upload... nung tingnan ko ung car nagandahan din ako, kaya itinuloy ko...

jaymer wrote:Ayus ayus to sir!ganda ng design and render.standard cam po ba gamit nyo?comment k lng po sa dof lalo na kapag may glass na matatamaan kc pati ung object behind the glass eh lumilinaw din instead na blur.try mo sir ung dof ng physical camera.suggestion ko lang naman po yan basta me glass na involve sa dof na makikita ang likod.overall sir malupit talaga.tfs!!!

ito sir first try ko ng DOF + Bokeh.... pa-comment ulit sir... for improvement.... thanks
3dMax...VrayPhysicalCamera....