Commercial Building

Try ko lang sa Commercial Building

ito naman ako mga idol humihingin ng mga payo niyo para matuto

C & C are welcome

WF = 3d max + vray (LWF)

Upper frame cropped, others

BG mo sir palitan mo..

aesonck wrote:Upper frame cropped, others

sinadya ko po talaga yan hindi ko na pinakita lahat ng kabating buidling

Noted sir

Thanks

lei23 wrote:BG mo sir palitan mo..

Noted po

Thanks sa pagdaan

sir wag na wag puputulin ang image. keep it up...

princedaguz13 wrote:sir wag na wag puputulin ang image. keep it up...

ok sir noted

thanks

*check your scale & proportion.
*move your camera closer & move to the left. kasi wala naman makikita sa right side ng bldg.
*crop your image on the right & left side, not on the top portion.
*chamfer or arc your sidewalk in the corner.
*iba iba ang glass reflection mo sa grnd. flr.
*use similar wood maps (doors)

nice design & lighting.

phranq wrote:*check your scale & proportion.
*move your camera closer & move to the left. kasi wala naman makikita sa right side ng bldg.
*crop your image on the right & left side, not on the top portion.
*chamfer or arc your sidewalk in the corner.
*iba iba ang glass reflection mo sa grnd. flr.
*use similar wood maps (doors)

nice design & lighting.

Noted sir

phranq wrote:*check your scale & proportion.
*move your camera closer & move to the left. kasi wala naman makikita sa right side ng bldg.
*crop your image on the right & left side, not on the top portion.
*chamfer or arc your sidewalk in the corner.
*iba iba ang glass reflection mo sa grnd. flr.
*use similar wood maps (doors)

nice design & lighting.

agree ,

ninong wrote:

phranq wrote:*check your scale & proportion.
*move your camera closer & move to the left. kasi wala naman makikita sa right side ng bldg.
*crop your image on the right & left side, not on the top portion.
*chamfer or arc your sidewalk in the corner.
*iba iba ang glass reflection mo sa grnd. flr.
*use similar wood maps (doors)

nice design & lighting.

agree ,

thanks master

change a better cam angle.
nice one pa rin naman

vhychenq wrote:change a better cam angle.
nice one pa rin naman

thanks sir

noted

saan sa dalawang building? dapat fucos sa building crop mo yon di kasama para di nakakalito kung saan sa dalawa.. its nice render bro keep it up! mataas ata G.I. kaya almost silver na ang kotse try mo HDRI!

arkibons wrote:saan sa dalawang building? dapat fucos sa building crop mo yon di kasama para di nakakalito kung saan sa dalawa.. its nice render bro keep it up! mataas ata G.I. kaya almost silver na ang kotse try mo HDRI!

right building sir

thanks

noted

design and overall comment nasabi na. madaming distracting na elements. lwf? check ninyo po proper conversion ng color and material link: http://www.cgpinoy.org/t18982-converting-a-non-lwf-diffuse-color-to-its-equivalent-in-lwf-gamma-22(careoff mokong). match sky mood with subject. compose your scene and create drama (hdri).

provide focus lalo nat mas maganda pa yung left na bldg keysa sa main.