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Post by jomzkie23 Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:20 am

Hi CGPeeps!
Residential & Commercial Building d2 sa Dubai
Rendering lang po participation ko dito.
3dmax+vray+ps sa post production.
Your C&C are most welcome para matuto..
Salamat in advance!
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Post by CNgarcia Sun Jun 14, 2009 8:09 am

medyo malayo ata ung camera view sir . . .

ung car ung naeemphasize tuloy . . . the rest is thumbsup

keep up the good work sir
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Post by epjarchitect Sun Jun 14, 2009 11:19 am

CNgarcia wrote:medyo malayo ata ung camera view sir . . .

ung car ung naeemphasize tuloy . . . the rest is thumbsup

keep up the good work sir

i agree to CNgarcia, additional comment bit map of road, camera setting and also the composition of design, the rest is thumbsup keep on posting bro..
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Post by dennisgabriel Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:15 pm

nice one sir jomzkie...gilid na naman ba toh? hehehe...pasa mo naman yung iba dito?hehehe...ang galing sir jom...siguro nga mas ok kung me shots ka pa na malapitan para mas maganda siguro...post more sir yung mga nakatago pa dyan...hehehe
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Post by jenaro Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:31 pm

2thumbsup cam check lang....aprob ito! 2thumbsup nga pala imho div line sa road much better kung mayron sir...good job sir!
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Post by jomzkie23 Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:34 pm

Sir CNgarcia at epjarchitect salamat sa C&C.
agree ako sa inyo personally madami din ako comment d2 sa design
nito, rendering lang kasi participation ko medyo rush unang submit ko nagustuhan na kgd kya diko na irerevise pinost ko na rin para makita ko mga comment at matuto..
- sa camera settings malayo nga meron na kasi existing view na sketch-up pinagaya lang sa akin kaya di na ko ngcompose ng ibang views.
- ung road pag malaki resolution kita ung bitmap nya
- ung car nmn correct ka dun inempasize ko tlg kasi para di mag focus sa bldg.wala kasi masyado maganda features ung 4towers lang gusto ko..
Salamat sa pag bisita Very Happy
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Post by jomzkie23 Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:40 pm

dennisgabriel wrote:nice one sir jomzkie...gilid na naman ba toh? hehehe...pasa mo naman yung iba dito?hehehe...ang galing sir jom...siguro nga mas ok kung me shots ka pa na malapitan para mas maganda siguro...post more sir yung mga nakatago pa dyan...hehehe

Tnx sir dennisgabriel sa pag bisita..pinagawa ito nung kabilang grupo khapon mabilisan lang humahabol pa puro ps ng nga banat ko alam mo na wala ng gana gumawa,hehehe ayos na mga gawa mo pre praktis praktis lang at turuan mo kami ni pareng aljon Very Happy
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Post by jomzkie23 Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:41 pm

jenaro wrote:2thumbsup cam check lang....aprob ito! 2thumbsup nga pala imho div line sa road much better kung mayron sir...good job sir!
sir jenaro noted po mga suggestion mo. salamat for droppin by Very Happy
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Post by master_grayback Mon Jun 15, 2009 12:02 am

maganda na siya sir..pero prang kulang thumbsup

-cguro add pa ng mas magandang foreground trees and background trees
-unting tweak cguro sa glass shader mo
-ska mas magandang sky

overall panalo na..
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Post by cubi_o: Mon Jun 15, 2009 12:05 am

ayus sir jomzkie...
more foliage lng sa aken.
at tweak a bit on the glass...


the rest is fine.

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Post by jomzkie23 Mon Jun 15, 2009 3:11 am

Tnx master grayback at master cubi_o sa suggestion noted lahat yan pag nagkaraon ng tym edit ko base on ur c&c..tnx for droppin by Very Happy
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Post by Muggz Mon Jun 15, 2009 5:43 am

linis po ng render sir,,frontal lang ang view nito sir no??kung ganun,,siguro parang naiisip ko na rin kung bakit malayo din ang cam,,siguro maaring ganun mejo mahaba din ang bldg,,hirap talaga pang isang side lang ang maraming feature na kailangan ipakita,,i think kung wala ng i aadust yung camera,,try nyo i taas ng onti yung tone ng bldg.para mag mukang mas malapit yun bldg,,then lipat nalang yun posisyon ng car,,or pede nyo rin dagdagan pa ng plants ang island,,kayo po option lang po yun,,, 2thumbsup
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