Two Storey House

Good day Cgpinoy mga master

ito naman po ako practice mode para patuto

kayo na po bahala sa render ko

WF = 3d max+Vray






update ( sana nasunod ko yung mga comments ) thanks

sir ganda ng lighting mo, IMHO lang, mapping medyo distorted try to use UVW map

Thanks noted sir!

wala makuhang matinong road mapping

nice design and lighting.. yung material lang ng roof mapscaler mo & displacement

Nayve wrote:Thanks noted sir!

wala makuhang matinong road mapping

Try this.
cgtextures.com

marjun wrote:nice design and lighting.. yung material lang ng roof mapscaler mo & displacement

ay sorry po hindi ko nasabi nakita ko lang po yung design sa Mr. Google

practice mode lang po

Noted sir

good job for a beginner!

okay na sana yung gawa mo, sana C&C's are okay.
IMHO lang sir ha,
1.ang dami pang kulang ng gawa mo, yung model mo okay na, onting revisions pa at enhancements.
2. yung lighting mo,nakakasilaw,ang sakit masyado sa mata,pwede mo ayusin yan next time?may talent ka pa naman sayang.
3. roof mo pwede mo i mapscaler at lagyan ng displacement,sayang kasi yung ganda ng bahay,mas lalabas yun kung buhay yung bubong

4. and your plants and grass please, pwede mo pa ayusin yan,malaki pa igaganda ng render mo.
thanks!

3dmaxster wrote:good job for a beginner!

okay na sana yung gawa mo, sana C&C's are okay.
IMHO lang sir ha,
1.ang dami pang kulang ng gawa mo, yung model mo okay na, onting revisions pa at enhancements.
2. yung lighting mo,nakakasilaw,ang sakit masyado sa mata,pwede mo ayusin yan next time?may talent ka pa naman sayang.
3. roof mo pwede mo i mapscaler at lagyan ng displacement,sayang kasi yung ganda ng bahay,mas lalabas yun kung buhay yung bubong

4. and your plants and grass please, pwede mo pa ayusin yan,malaki pa igaganda ng render mo.
thanks!

yes master ok po susundin ko po lahat yan

thanks

konting kalikot pa sir..lalabas yung tunay na ganda nito.. wag yung load lang ng bitmap at apply agad. parang mababa yung 2nd floor .goodluck po sir sa susunod na render

some of my comments ay nasabi na.

try mo lang paglaroan mga amounts hangat makuha mo yung desire render
mo. nangyari sa render mo sir na overbright ng kunti kaya nagiba ng
kulay yung sa wall mo sir. kunting kunti na sir mapapaganda mo na render
mo sir sundin mo nalang sir.

Godbless. hintay ko next render mo sir

1. gaano kataas yung floor to ceiling height ng 2nd flr mo? my point si theomatheus parang mababa kasi, pero nice design
2. iwasan lang na may reflection yung gutter
3. practice mo yung tamang mapping para sa roof mo plane kasi sya or if you want i suggest sir mokong's Displacement Roof Surfaces script sa max here's the link: http://www.cgpinoy.org/t15285-displacement-roof-surfaces-script
4. work on your grass and browse in the Free Stuff thread, dami ka makukuha doon na mga halaman ito link:
http://www.cgpinoy.org/f11-free-stuff

good job as a beginner but you can do better, just browse in the tutorials so you can learn more.

here's the link for tutorials on Max
http://www.cgpinoy.org/f46-3d-studio-max-tutorials

you can also browse here or ask anything regarding 3d rendering we'll be happy to help you
http://www.cgpinoy.org/f102-help-line

anyway as i read someone's comment, i really can't help it but i'm kinda not comfortable about the way he expresses his IMHO, it's like he's giving orders instead of a suggestion to put that in a polite manner and giving a comment but followed by a bad criticism, instead he should give him a proper motivation and positive criticism to improve his work.. just my 2 cents.

-about sa floor to ceiling .6m elevated to NGL finish floor line to ceiling 3m
- sa grass gumamit po ako dyan ng autograss .05 height maliit lang talaga
- sa roof sablay nga next time ayusin ko render ko mga sir

all comments noted

Thanks

ok so elevated ng 0.60m so that makes it all in all 3m yung floor to ceiling height ng ground floor mo, but what about the 2nd floor? parang 2.20 - 2.40m ang height kasi, ewan ko lang huh? or baka rafter type yung roofing mo kaya baka naka slope pababa?

hi. here are my suggestions.
-gamit kanang 3d plants sa likod instead of background picture.
-masyadong straight yung camera. try to put it in a different angle. nagmukhang elevation kasi yung perspective.
-dagdagan mupa yung plants mo sa harap and rotate and resize mo sila para di magpare-pareho.

the rest, nasabi na. try to follow all the suggestions and update mo para makita natin yung improvement. good luck.

Pra sakin ok yung design sir hindi ko lng type yung roof sa harap, mas ok cguro kung gawin mo na lang canopy yun, sa settings nmn once na nasunod mo lahat ng suggestions ikaw mismo makikita mo kung paano mo pa mpapaganda ang gawa mo,at magkakaroon ka pa tiyak ng srili mong settings, nbanggit mo na galing mo lang sa Mr. google yung design? sa tingin ko mas mageenjoy ka gumawa pag sarili mo yung design, pra hindi ka nafo-fource na kopyahin pati yung materials or settings ng original image, try mo din maglagay ng malaking halaman sa likod mas ok kung lalampas sa bahay,kung hnidi kaya sa 3d maghanap ka na lang ng background na may mga trees na mlapit, para makakuha ng konting attention ang background mo, tapos yung road suggest ko lang hanap ka ng map yung walang guhit na dilaw sa gitna, pang high-way yata yung may guhit na dilaw hindi ba? last yung deco stones mo medyo babaan mo ang disp value or bump, para mawala yung guhit sa kanto, hindi ko rin mavisualize yung texture sa ramp, overbright kasi sir.
Goodluck sir!