A Three Storey House

by maychelle Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:04 am

Hi pips! My latest work, it's a Three Storey House modelled in max2009 design + vray2.0 without PP.
Coments and suggestions are very welcome for my improvement. Very Happy

First Option:
A Three Storey House Cainta

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Second Option: (Guys sorry hindi ko pa na apply yung comments nyo here on my second option coz pina rush eh i don't have time na)

A Three Storey House Cainta2ndflooredited

A Three Storey House Cainta2ndflooredited

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by Ar_Can_EVSU Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:39 am

nice composition sis...
minor comments lang...
- camera angle.... maybe you can adjust it to normal eye level
- medyo nakakadestruct lang ang yellow plants sa harap. saka nag same pattern.
- maybe you could try some texturing materials on the walls..

but overall... nicely done... simple design yet elegant...

by vhychenq Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:40 am

design look familar ma'am...nice render btw.

by maychelle Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:11 am

Ar_Can_EVSU wrote:nice composition sis...
minor comments lang...
- camera angle.... maybe you can adjust it to normal eye level
- medyo nakakadestruct lang ang yellow plants sa harap. saka nag same pattern.
- maybe you could try some texturing materials on the walls..

but overall... nicely done... simple design yet elegant...

thank you very much sir. everything is noted. Very Happy

by maychelle Fri Jul 01, 2011 5:18 am

vhychenq wrote:design look familar ma'am...nice render btw.

thank you sir. the design is not mine. pina render lang po ito sa akin ng friend ko. Very Happy

by lei23 Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:26 am

nice render ma'am! Smile

by cloud20 Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:21 am

Looks good, play sa contrasts mam para tumalon talon ang scene.. Hows the hometown?.. Tin says hi pala..

by Neil Joshua Rosario Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:32 am

ayos maam nice render
-change the bushesin front parang di bumagay sa bahay for me.
yung lang maam lahat ok na ok na para sakin ganda ng resolution. pwede masilip set mo maam

by archiphil2000 Fri Jul 01, 2011 11:11 am

nice work madam... A Three Storey House 808695

by maychelle Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:30 pm

lei23 wrote:nice render ma'am!

thanks you sir. Very Happy

by maychelle Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:35 pm

cloud20 wrote:Looks good, play sa contrasts mam para tumalon talon ang scene.. Hows the hometown?.. Tin says hi pala..

thanks sir cloud for dropping by. ok po next time i'll play on it. it's no nice to be back in my hometown. i really feel at home. Very Happy

please extend my regards to her. hehehe...di sya nag rereply sa text ko baka iba na naman number nya.

by maychelle Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:40 pm

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:ayos maam nice render
-change the bushesin front parang di bumagay sa bahay for me.
yung lang maam lahat ok na ok na para sakin ganda ng resolution. pwede masilip set mo maam

sir neil thanks po sa comments. Very Happy