Ivy Mansion (Updated)

Good day to all. Latest work ko po. Design is from my former colleague.
3D and rendering is mine. Done in Max. CnC are most welcome po. More
power to CGP.

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waaaaa, galing nung ivy mo sir

,nice

hope you dont mind bro if i will comment based sa paggamit ng prinicples and elements of design.

1. lines are very strong elements to lead your observer to your main focus. it so happen na yung mga linya ng mga curb mo pati na yung visual lines ng building ay papunta sa garahe which has nothing but a very simple wall and two cars partially hidden by potted plants.
2. yung mga ivy takaw pansin din, dahil, ang coverage ay malaki. so meron kang dalawang polar of tention na hindi mo alam kung saan pupunta ang mata mo. where infact they are not the main things in this composition.
3. at least you have an entrace with different form, at nasa centro. but the tention in different areas is too much.
4. in this type of composition, i think you need to crop a bit of the sky. subukan mong takpan ng kaunti yung bandang taas ng sky and you will find a better figure-ground relationship.

@ Sir Thanthan - Maraming salamat po. Ivy Gen po siya
@Sir aesonck - Salamat po
@ Sir nomeradona - Thank you po sir sa CnC.

nice render sir galing
i think no need na may ball sa pool

Nice renders; some scale problems with the doors?.. Parang maliit..

Ang ganda, especially the DOF scene...

I'll have to agree with cloud20 about the scale issue with the doors...I'm sorry

allanx

Sir Cloud20 and Sir Allanx Salamat po sa pagdaan. Tama naman po sa scale ung door po kasi ung mga sucat po ng mga detail ng model is based po sa CAD architectural plan na binigay po sakin ng kasama ko po na architect po. baka sa camera lang po siya. Salamat po. Peace.

Ung scale issue... may be its because of the camera....! imho...! mejo distorted kasi ung view....! baba mo lang ng onti bro... normal eye view.... agree with sir nomer... choose a nice point of view....!

Dof: yung heineken... punong puno...! sumthin wrong...? a bit noisy...!

Trees: random mo lang bro... may repitition...

Pool: add some noise...!

Glass: too much reflection....!

yun lang po... Good luck..!

nice render sir. galing ng dof...