Heaven's Gate

Musta mga master n members ,,my post fo this year .. C n C po kayu ah. tayo na sa aking kaharihan



salamat

wow! linis po ng render nyo sir! galing!

Jay2x wrote:Musta mga master n members ,,my post fo this year .. C n C po kayu ah. tayo na sa aking kaharihan



salamat

par tagalug nalang hah,

great work pre, especially the design!, and rendering too, share me ing setting par, sabi ko na eh, babanat ka nanaman ng malupit hehe, ung saken uvw lang nung wood material sa foreground pre, mas maganda kung pahaba yung grain, pero again great work ,

ah!, naalala ko iba pa pala yung holy grail hehe

lighthing is very good. improve lang your materials. lessen mo lang displacement and bump. sometimes its better pag subttle lang since hindi naman super rustic ang mga finishes mo. also. darker or lighter wood cguro. and smaller grains. good luck bro.

Hi Jay,

It's a good start, interesting design. I have a question, what are you trying to show here? An entrance to a gated community? I can kind of see an address there...but it's not really showing enough. The second image is more interesting, focusing on the fountain with the entrance in the background.

When you're setting up your composition, try to do a bunch of quick camera shots all over the site, as if you're really there with a real camera. It doesn't have to be textured or lit, but that way from the start, you can really look and see the most interesting areas of the space. I think that this design can be seen from a better angle. Keep it up, keep posting...you'll only get better from here!

ok naman ang lighting. heaven's gate... wala si sn pedro. hehehehe. anyhow yun lang sigurong displacement ng grass hindi pa masyadong conviving. perhaps lower the displacement value and alos the more on tiling para masinsin.

nice render...nasabi na comments..keep it up

gando po sir..linis...nice post po.. san n nga po kc yung heaven's gate d2 sa pamp?

haaaaaaayyyyyyooooppp.....
ang ban-gis nmn...
great design pusakat...

ohh... kakatapos lng natin mag monster hunter ehhh mag bago k ng post! lupit... lets play pokkkk....

hmmm.... ang ganda nito ah......

hello po, very nice scene you got here sir,

imho, try to adjust the cam angle a slight to the right to have a horizon view of the design para lumitaw na din ang name ng subdividion,
additional po, try adding white color on your mouldings to even enhance the edges of your design and magka contrast din sir sa ibang maps na ginamit,,,


....OT how 'bout the girls if you say guys are good looking here sa pampanga ,,,

nice render bro keep it up

eLEMMEnTO wrote:wow! linis po ng render nyo sir! galing!

Salamat po sir Elemmento at ngustuhan niyo ...saang elemnto po kayu nabi2lang sir ehehe

namby_pamby wrote:par tagalug nalang hah,

great work pre, especially the design!, and rendering too, share me ing setting par, sabi ko na eh, babanat ka nanaman ng malupit hehe, ung saken uvw lang nung wood material sa foreground pre, mas maganda kung pahaba yung grain, pero again great work ,
ah!, naalala ko iba pa pala yung holy grail hehe

Ok tagalog nga lang. salamat sa iyong masigabong pgbisita munting nambypamby. tama ehe mdyo dko napansin ung ginintuhang kahoy. tenkyo sayo

nga pale pare try to write ur comment nlang s lower part ng isang thread wag dun sa reply taas. narerepost kasi ung image e tapos putul pa ..suggest lng pre pra dka masita ng iba..if intension mu un go on...

bokkins wrote:lighthing is very good. improve lang your materials. lessen mo lang displacement and bump. sometimes its better pag subttle lang since hindi naman super rustic ang mga finishes mo. also. darker or lighter wood cguro. and smaller grains. good luck bro.

Salamat po master bokks yaan niyo at aayusin ko nlang salmat s mgandang tips

horizon line lng po bossing,,,pls chek..and pls remove ung tao,,and since eto ay isang entry gate (sa tinggin ko), mas ok cgro kung hanap ka ng ibang view ng masfocus sa gate,,,maybe a liitle closer pa and malapit sa center...pls chamfer ur edges bossing lalo na sa syd wlk..i suggest you put beautiful street lamps and wall lamps na rin sa guard hauz..mass ok din po cgro boss kung ung road near the guard hauz is ibang texture,,maybe texture na color red or brown,d pende sa gusto nyo po,,just like other subdivions and villages..para may dating..kip posting bosing...

AJ Cortez wrote:Hi Jay,

It's a good start, interesting design. I have a question, what are you trying to show here? An entrance to a gated community? I can kind of see an address there...but it's not really showing enough. The second image is more interesting, focusing on the fountain with the entrance in the background.

When you're setting up your composition, try to do a bunch of quick camera shots all over the site, as if you're really there with a real camera. It doesn't have to be textured or lit, but that way from the start, you can really look and see the most interesting areas of the space. I think that this design can be seen from a better angle. Keep it up, keep posting...you'll only get better from here!

thx for the constructive yet absorbing supernatural comments. its a town homes sir.. thx for the eye turning on my design ill try to follow all you've said i really hav a hard time when it comes to background buildings thats why its sky instead of the structures..
"best cnc on my threads ive read"

nomeradona wrote:ok naman ang lighting. heaven's gate... wala si sn pedro. hehehehe. anyhow yun lang sigurong displacement ng grass hindi pa masyadong conviving. perhaps lower the displacement value and alos the more on tiling para masinsin.

Salamat SirGuru nomer.. at nagustuhan niyo ang panginoong vray sun.. ahehe nakisabong po si san pedro ng 10 full cack derby ahehe

Butz_Arki wrote:nice render...nasabi na comments..keep it up

salamat sir at ngustuhan niyo render.. kasi nman ang mga render niyo is talagang monster .nice avatar is that rob thomas? or rob zombie eh

baxz wrote:gando po sir..linis...nice post po.. san n nga po kc yung heaven's gate d2 sa pamp?

hmm?... oki slamat sir

ice wrote:haaaaaaayyyyyyooooppp.....
ang ban-gis nmn...
great design pusakat...

ohh... kakatapos lng natin mag monster hunter ehhh mag bago k ng post! lupit... lets play pokkkk....

oo nga ehe thesis muna ehe bago mga nakahabang na projects

OT: yeah very soon we will chamfer those little creature eheh lik lao shan

xxdarcxx wrote:hmmm.... ang ganda nito ah......

salamat munting kapatid .post mona ung sayu ehe...

basta mga tiga pampanga eh iba kung magtrabaho. good job sir. post more

limp102 wrote:hello po, very nice scene you got here sir,

imho, try to adjust the cam angle a slight to the right to have a horizon view of the design para lumitaw na din ang name ng subdividion,
additional po, try adding white color on your mouldings to even enhance the edges of your design and magka contrast din sir sa ibang maps na ginamit,,,


....OT how 'bout the girls if you say guys are good looking here sa pampanga ,,,

Salamat ate grace . oo nga po update ko nlang pg my time ..un din po sa contrasty ill traget that. Solid incubus ehe anu meaning nun o ?ehe

Ot si namby pamby po un eheh .. oo nga dami naman kirms(magagandang dilag sa lugar natin ehe)

jay3design wrote:nice render bro keep it up

Salamat sir. naku magka jay tayu ehehe taymis3 lang ung sayu.. kailan kaya ako taymis 4 eheh