a bit of nature

share ko po work ko sa vray for max, i really need your comments and criticisms for improvement, good day po mga sir

i could say...modeling and composition is good... maybe u just need to work on the materials and texturing...and maybe change the mats on the plants ina.agaw kasi ang attention ng viewer ng plants instead of the subject...IMHO lang sir... just consider this as a constructive crits...keep posting

madzki wrote:i could say...modeling and composition is good... maybe u just need to work on the materials and texturing...and maybe change the mats on the plants ina.agaw kasi ang attention ng viewer ng plants instead of the subject...IMHO lang sir... just consider this as a constructive crits...keep posting

thank you very much sir madzki, problem ko talaga ung tiling ng mga maps, okie i'll work for that, thanks a lot again sir madzki

let your imagination flow free with the materials...
and soon you'll get better results...

dickie_ilagan wrote:let your imagination flow free with the materials...
and soon you'll get better results...

thanks for the advice sir dickie

im guessing this is a personal render, not an actual project per se?... no client to please other than yourself?.. this is based on your presentation sir pam...errr...namby pamby... more of an exercise on skills maybe?...
if such is the case i will comment accordingly; whats that potted plant doing in the murky waters?... glass reflection doesnt follow the normal perspective view... work on the materials a bit more... sir madzki mentioned the ultra bright plants at the foreground, ditch them...
lighting is cool though...

nasabe na nilang lahat sir, advise lang is, when you do something give your 100%, as if you are working for the LORD, just think of the people na mabebless mo at magpapagawa na seo dahil sa proyektong to, cgurado ako, magiging mas maganda pa po yung resultang makukuha nyo...keep posting sir..God Bless....

this reminds me of a tom clancy games - way back rainbow six series - favorito kong game hehehehehe. pag sa jungle ganito ang rendering style nun.

render-wise its good........comments had been said.

cloud20 wrote:im guessing this is a personal render, not an actual project per se?... no client to please other than yourself?.. this is based on your presentation sir pam...errr...namby pamby... more of an exercise on skills maybe?...
if such is the case i will comment accordingly; whats that potted plant doing in the murky waters?... glass reflection doesnt follow the normal perspective view... work on the materials a bit more... sir madzki mentioned the ultra bright plants at the foreground, ditch them...
lighting is cool though...

dear idol,

yes sir this was a practice work, about the plotted plant, i just wanted to put it there without any logical reason, sorry.. my bad, , thanks for making me realize it was out of place, thank you very much for the comments

Mastersketzzz wrote:nasabe na nilang lahat sir, advise lang is, when you do something give your 100%, as if you are working for the LORD, just think of the people na mabebless mo at magpapagawa na seo dahil sa proyektong to, cgurado ako, magiging mas maganda pa po yung resultang makukuha nyo...keep posting sir..God Bless....

naku maraming salamat sa advice hah sir, matatauhan na tuloy ako hehe, pero 100 % percent ko na to sir mastersketzzz ganun lang muna talaga ang kaya ng output ko ngyon hehe, pero anyway practice to the death pa rin ako , maraming salamat sa advice sir mastersketzzz, havagood day

artedesenyo wrote:this reminds me of a tom clancy games - way back rainbow six series - favorito kong game hehehehehe. pag sa jungle ganito ang rendering style nun.

alam ko rin yung game na yun sir , mraming salamat sa pagdaan sir artdesenyo

ytsejeffx wrote:render-wise its good........comments had been said.

maraming salamat rin sa pagdaan sir ytesejeffex

expand your imagination bro..kayang kaya mo yan..modeling is good....update mo to bro..konting improve sa materials...napakaraming materials n ms mganda...wag k mhiyang gmitin..nice work anyway

Butz_Arki wrote:expand your imagination bro..kayang kaya mo yan..modeling is good....update mo to bro..konting improve sa materials...napakaraming materials n ms mganda...wag k mhiyang gmitin..nice work anyway

thank you very much sir butz , actually sir medyo naayos ko na nga eh iuupdate ko pag nakumpleto ko na, medyo naalis ko na yung tiling ng mga maps sir, yes sir i'll do that, hope to hear lots of comments frum' you again, good day sir butz

nice work bro, nasabi na nilang lahat keep it up

in terms of design and lighting astig to sir,,,

but a bit overshadowed again by the use of colorful landscape,,,
be plain and simple lang po sa landscape,
lets not take the focal point out of the edifice, it is what were trying to sell in the first place,,

jay3design wrote:nice work bro, nasabi na nilang lahat keep it up

thank you very much sir jay

limp102 wrote: in terms of design and lighting astig to sir,,,

but a bit overshadowed again by the use of colorful landscape,,,
be plain and simple lang po sa landscape,
lets not take the focal point out of the edifice, it is what were trying to sell in the first place,,

thanks again miss limp , hay di na talaga ako natuto,! please keep reminding me always about the subject's emphasis, thank you ery mcuh again miss limp

Eto kita ko.hehehe.Hmmm i like the concept bro.cguro for me to improve pa the image is to work more on water and desaturate mo pa yung mga plants.Maganda potential ng image bro just develop it.Try to experiment sa mga materials..Modeling is looking good na.Yun lng bro.Keep it up.Sana ma update mo pa tong image na to.Dont worry kahit na matagal ka sa isang image afterall magagamit mo na sya sa iba mo pang exteriors..

Work more on your materials sir....comments have been said by the others... hoping to see updates on this one.

Keep posting!

ARCHITHEKTHURA wrote:Eto kita ko.hehehe.Hmmm i like the concept bro.cguro for me to improve pa the image is to work more on water and desaturate mo pa yung mga plants.Maganda potential ng image bro just develop it.Try to experiment sa mga materials..Modeling is looking good na.Yun lng bro.Keep it up.Sana ma update mo pa tong image na to.Dont worry kahit na matagal ka sa isang image afterall magagamit mo na sya sa iba mo pang exteriors..

maraming salamat sir jeff yes sir iuupdate ko to pg na complete ko na, notes taken sir jeff

arkiedmund wrote:Work more on your materials sir....comments have been said by the others... hoping to see updates on this one.

Keep posting!

maraming salamat po sir ed , yes sir i'll update this

kunting insayo pa.. i suggest follow the advise, alam mo na wn comes to client masilan cla..maganda na ung design mo sir..keep up.

nice render pareng pamby_namby,,, very nature nga pero agaw pansin ung red n orange na trees parang nagmumukhang painting make it green to have balance on ur other abubots,,, based on 10 steps dat wuld be 2.0 meters pero parang mas mataas pa ung height ng stair on ur structure, d ceiling or height of building is parang mababa baka mauntog ulo ng owner dyan,,, keep it up dami mo post ha,,,,,