simple house@ jakarta, Indonesia

hii all...
i am new here, and this is my first post..
really hope can get any critics and comment for my rendering

here is..




By siek7171 at 2011-02-14



By siek7171 at 2011-02-14

regrads
siek

welcome sir
IMHO
your tree pass through your wall
the gate looks like a fence
alittle more displacement on the grass
workflow?
nice design and render
i like the 1st image

nice work

its better to remove the person in first image
another are nice

I love the lighting of both images.. if u dont wanna remove the person.. make i shorter.. as its outta scale right now

akoy wrote:welcome sir
IMHO
your tree pass through your wall
the gate looks like a fence
alittle more displacement on the grass
workflow?
nice design and render
i like the 1st image

hahha yeahh, i dont notice it while render.. so lazy to retouch it.. pardon me ... we need to design cheap gate, so we desain it like that.. about displacement i agree .. what do u mean about work flow?

thxs for ur comment

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:nice work

thanksss

archshade02 wrote:its better to remove the person in first image
another are nice

will think about it.. thanks

Dollmaker wrote:I love the lighting of both images.. if u dont wanna remove the person.. make i shorter.. as its outta scale right now

heheh i will do it in other project
thanks yaaaa

First of all welcome to CGP. worlflow means the software you use, enjoy your stay here!

Welcome to CGP Siek, i love the 2nd image..just study the right proportion for each image..keep posting "TERIMAKASI KAWAN"

whey09 wrote:First of all welcome to CGP. worlflow means the software you use, enjoy your stay here!

thxs for welcome greeting dude.. oh i use 3d max and vray also touch on photoshop

3DZONE wrote:Welcome to CGP Siek, i love the 2nd image..just study the right proportion for each image..keep posting "TERIMAKASI KAWAN"

thxs gor welcoming 3dzone... okey i will note it.. woow terimakasih juga kawan