Juan Two-Storey Modern Residence

3dpinoy wrote:credit you on your rendering but design wise, this is a play of thick, thin, vertical, horizontal lines, and the mix of materials doesn't give justice on the structure.
no offense but it doesn't only look bulky but messy.
as bokkins commented, minimal lines will make your design more pleasing and minimal use of materials will be more appropriate.
this look like a typical architecture design of a typical architect in the Philippines, what i intend to say is get out of the box and look for international concepts.
remember that members here are not just locally working in Philippines but globally inclined in different conceptual designs and you have international viewers around.
in designing, be Global my friend, trust me it doesn't hurt.
just my singkwenta sentimos.

ArchFEWs2 wrote:astig po to sir, ang galing...

ortzak wrote:very nice render esp the 2nd image
too much horizontal lines for me..

3dpinoy wrote:no worries my friend , i too respect your design, just some inputs on my point of view.i am here to help you and maybe enlighten you about whats happening here in my cave.what i learned and what i see.
clients don't see much as we see in terms of design,
so whatever we show them, black and white or colored they just put the plug-ins but we still decide what we do.
remember we still do the design, we tell them and not them to tell us unless you practice this manner.
designs doesn't fit any race or any place, mapa barrio man or siyudad.
it's either your client is a filipino or a foreigner.
apologies if i am pushing you too much, nasanay lang siguro mata ko
sa simplicity ng designs dito.
i dont have the position to push you but expect this kind of discussions
if we are dealing with designs.
remember that we are not just pressing F9 on max rather we are learning what we are modelling and rendering.
its just the beginning somehow, and its journey for you.
just pick up this kind of discussions and keep what you learn and
seal the ones that doesn't.
here are some links,local architects here in Singapore with different race of clients that i consider good ones.
this might help you.

http://www.wowarchitects.com/
http://www.woha-architects.com/
http://www.scdaarchitects.com/web/index.html
http://www.k2ld.com/

O.T. nop, i am not an admin of any forums. just what you said, my signature is my opinion, i am no sarcastic and i don't praise and kneel on people. i admire works and be inspired by guys here in CGP( the good one's ha) but calling them master sardines is bit offensive to me.my yaya used that kasi when she cooks for us.
Mods and Admin doesn't give attention to this stuffs, masyadong mababaw ang ganitong issues.This guys are Globally professional.
i will be watching.

jc01 wrote:ganda ng design sir,,modern talaga...lalu na yung pangatlo...
hehehe...

pure_critics wrote:Hot Trend for 2011

Simplicity and subtlety will be most people’s preference,
rather than over-designed concepts.

akoy wrote:medyo flat sakin mga bricks sir
tapos ibahin sidewalk material
reflective din glass
yaman mo na bos hehehe galing

arch_mirasol wrote:very nice

Mr. Critto' wrote:I think the column extended above the entry canopy makes no sense. Too much use of elements that is again makes the totality of design non sense. The house in your foreground, is it your design? For me its much better!! Are you aware of the budget of the client? If they have, then do you think you gave them justice with your design? Please don't be offended my friend, rather take this as a constructive critic.

Mr. Critto' wrote:I don't see any Filipinism regarding the design. I lived in Manila for 14 yrs. So I should know. Don't be too pitty, for all we know crits like this gives benefit for the newbies. Or unless otherwise you consider yourself as one of the masters.

Mr. Critto' wrote:Oh sorry, I misworded that. My deep apology. I mean background. And thanks for correcting a word, which is supossed to be understandable in a simple sense. But I admit that for us technical people should be sensitive even in a single word.

qnald wrote:ayos ang pagka modern nito sir, i love it.. proportion lang ng horizontal at ibang architectural elements ang aking kumento. render and lighting, ang galing mo master!

effreymm wrote:Bagong project uli master. nice design & render...