Juan Two-Storey Modern Residence

Good day again ka Cgp, i just want to share again my latest project done in Max9 and PS. This is a renovation and extension kasi existing na yung ground floor, yung previous plan gawa ng foreman, based from their lot title, may 1.5 meters setback pa sila sa right side, so here's my owners approved design and rendering output, C and C's are welcome for more improvement, thanks for being a member sa site na ito, marami ako natutunan at matututunan pa!






Here's the existing house.

ganda lakay..aprub na aprub sa aken!!!!

ok bro, nagpintas. palagay naman ng setting para mapractice ung lighting mo, galing mo talaga

theomatheus wrote:ganda lakay..aprub na aprub sa aken!!!!

roycristobal wrote:ok bro, nagpintas. palagay naman ng setting para mapractice ung lighting mo, galing mo talaga

Thanks mga lakay, about the settings, try kong isunod.

Nice design and render!

ayos bro ganda...

comgrapart wrote:Nice design and render!

bugoy-69 wrote:ayos bro ganda...

Thanks for dropping by mga sir!

I think the column extended above the entry canopy makes no sense. Too much use of elements that is again makes the totality of design non sense. The house in your foreground, is it your design? For me its much better!! Are you aware of the budget of the client? If they have, then do you think you gave them justice with your design? Please don't be offended my friend, rather take this as a constructive critic.

Mr. Critto' wrote:I think the column extended above the entry canopy makes no sense. Too much use of elements that is again makes the totality of design non sense. The house in your foreground, is it your design? For me its much better!! Are you aware of the budget of the client? If they have, then do you think you gave them justice with your design? Please don't be offended my friend, rather take this as a constructive critic.

My friend, how do you say so and why, give me a reason why the extended column above the carport makes no sense and too much use of elements makes the totality of the design non sense? I challenge you to share your explanation for the benefit of other CGP member, i'll wait for it, maybe you can convince me for me to consider. Yes, the "background" houses and not foreground,are my designs and also posted here, you can browse them and leave your constructive critic. My friend, be aware first of the owners budget before making a design presentation, yes they have a budget, are you kidding my friend? they will not hire a professional to render them design services if they dont have? do you know my client my friend? what do you think about my design, read first my intro. Im not offended my friend, i like and want this kind of critic, im excited to answer and read your second reply too. Thanks for dropping by and for registering today Mr. Critto, welcome!

nice! i like the 2nd image

mez wrote:nice! i like the 2nd image

Thanks for dropping by sir.

ayus lakay! malayo sa existing house ah! ang laki ng ikinaganda ng design! goodluck!

korngrain69 wrote:ayus lakay! malayo sa existing house ah! ang laki ng ikinaganda ng design! goodluck!

Thanks lakay, gusto kasi nila modern para naiiba sa mga kapitbahay. Oo malayong malayo sa existing, marami rin akong binago sa existing wall. Thanks for dropping by lakay.

What "foreground" houses where?..
My 2 cents; Its very hard to comment on the design aspects of a project not unless its really butt ugly in any language. As artists ( and architects as well) we should fundamentally know this. Case: the pyramid at Louvre by I.M. Pei. Some find it beautiful. Some find it totally upsets the balance of its environment. There is no defining line as to when to stop putting elements. Or how much. Or how little. So a crit on design; more so a scathing crit on design is moot & academic.

To the TS, nag iba ng kaunti ang output natin sir ah... HDRI?... Kaunting shadow pa to give depth... But I like these better than your previous...
Keep em rolling...

-nice master...bagong bago!!!... poste nalang yata ang natira sa existing ah, he!he!
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cloud20 wrote:What "foreground" houses where?..
My 2 cents; Its very hard to comment on the design aspects of a project not unless its really butt ugly in any language. As artists ( and architects as well) we should fundamentally know this. Case: the pyramid at Louvre by I.M. Pei. Some find it beautiful. Some find it totally upsets the balance of its environment. There is no defining line as to when to stop putting elements. Or how much. Or how little. So a crit on design; more so a scathing crit on design is moot & academic.

To the TS, nag iba ng kaunti ang output natin sir ah... HDRI?... Kaunting shadow pa to give depth... But I like these better than your previous...
Keep em rolling...

Thanks sir cloud, you're the man! Yes HDRI and AO sir, thanks sa mga tutorials ni sir Bokkins! Noted about the shadow. Salamat po sa pagbisita.

deosrock wrote:-nice master...bagong bago!!!... poste nalang yata ang natira sa existing ah, he!he!
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Thanks for dropping by sir lakay!

gusto ko banat mo dito sir..ganda ng design at ng color scheme..plus rendering.,.

kieko wrote:gusto ko banat mo dito sir..ganda ng design at ng color scheme..plus rendering.,.

Thanks for dropping by sir!

i like the design.
-saturated lang ibang plants
-one question lang sir, panu niyo po naitago yung corbels?

yaug_03 wrote:i like the design.
-saturated lang ibang plants
-one question lang sir, panu niyo po naitago yung corbels?

Thanks sir, about the corbels, dahil sa kagustuhan nila(owner) na maging modern ang design, mawawala na yun, babakbakin kasama ng bay window, nasabi naman ng foreman sa akin na walang reinforcement yun so madali lang matanggal. Thanks for dropping by sir yaug.

I think there's too much elements in a small composition. too much horizontal lines and crowns, hence, making the whole thing bulky for a small volume.

Just the combination of white+stone+glass will already make a very good impact by themselves. I know the intention is making the most out of it. Pero ang naging output (but this is only my opinion) ay naging a little overdone.

ang masusuggest ko lang is tone it down a little. Use finer lines since maliit lang ang bahay. Kung baga strip it down to a minimum. It's also good to check similar style on the net. Here are some of my favorite sites. I get my inspirations here:

1. http://www.contemporist.com/category/architecture/
2. http://www.archdaily.com/category/houses/
3. http://coolboom.net/category/architecture/
4. http://www.dezeen.com/category/architecture-news/

Sa rendering naman, this is by far your best. Good luck sa project mo na to.

bokkins wrote:I think there's too much elements in a small composition. too much horizontal lines and crowns, hence, making the whole thing bulky for a small volume.

Just the combination of white+stone+glass will already make a very good impact by themselves. I know the intention is making the most out of it. Pero ang naging output (but this is only my opinion) ay naging a little overdone.

ang masusuggest ko lang is tone it down a little. Use finer lines since maliit lang ang bahay. Kung baga strip it down to a minimum. It's also good to check similar style on the net. Here are some of my favorite sites. I get my inspirations here:

1. http://www.contemporist.com/category/architecture/
2. http://www.archdaily.com/category/houses/
3. http://coolboom.net/category/architecture/
4. http://www.dezeen.com/category/architecture-news/

Sa rendering naman, this is by far your best. Good luck sa project mo na to.

Thanks for this wonderful comment sir, noted yan, salamat sa mga links.

credit you on your rendering but design wise, this is a play of thick, thin, vertical, horizontal lines, and the mix of materials doesn't give justice on the structure.
no offense but it doesn't only look bulky but messy.
as bokkins commented, minimal lines will make your design more pleasing and minimal use of materials will be more appropriate.
this look like a typical architecture design of a typical architect in the Philippines, what i intend to say is get out of the box and look for international concepts.
remember that members here are not just locally working in Philippines but globally inclined in different conceptual designs and you have international viewers around.
in designing, be Global my friend, trust me it doesn't hurt.
just my singkwenta sentimos.

3dpinoy wrote:credit you on your rendering but design wise, this is a play of thick, thin, vertical, horizontal lines, and the mix of materials doesn't give justice on the structure.
no offense but it doesn't only look bulky but messy.
as bokkins commented, minimal lines will make your design more pleasing and minimal use of materials will be more appropriate.
this look like a typical architecture design of a typical architect in the Philippines, what i intend to say is get out of the box and look for international concepts.
remember that members here are not just locally working in Philippines but globally inclined in different conceptual designs and you have international viewers around.
in designing, be Global my friend, trust me it doesn't hurt.
just my singkwenta sentimos.

Yeah, about the design, you have a point sir, i respect that. I'll get out and can get out of the box and apply an international concept anytime i want, but at the right place and at the right time! You have and achieved an international concept, but you did not satisfy your client, its useless, maski ilang global at international concept ang gagawin mo! Kanya-kanyang diskarte lang yan sir. I know other members working globally and i have no problem about it, they can crit my work at no limit they want like you. In designing, be Global?, para sa akin hindi naman lahat ng oras, sana may karugtong pa sir para mas lalong convincing, kasi for me hindi ata bagay ipatayo ang design na may global at international concept sa local barrio namin. General kasi yung comment mo sir, sana man lang, may "for me", "para sa akin" or "imho", no offense din pero mahirap kasi ang nagmamarunong lalo na kung hindi nabibigyan ng liwanag ang lahat ng sinasabi, i mean site an example, a link or a case na tama ka nga or simply a suggestions like sir bokkins, simpleng simple, kumbaga sa kaso dapat may ebidensiya tama po ba? Anyway thanks for your comment sir 3dpinoy, i respect your opinion but respect mine also.

OT: Sir are you the administrator of 3dpinoy?, just wondering sa mga nakalagay sa baba ng mga comments mo, so anong masasabi mo sa mga members, mods at admin na 5 stars dito?, thanks sir i'll wait for your reply, excited na ako.