ELEVATED BOX TYPE (first post)_updated.

Good day po mga ka-CGPeep's...
At last..nakapagpost na rin. Modelled in ACAD(just refreshing my 3Dmodelling 2yrs.+ na stagnant), rendered in MAX+vray(just started when i register and inspired here) and PS for sharpening & framing only(newbie din po).
Thank's po sa lahat ng mga Master's and member's na tumulong at nag-encourage sa akin...alam niyo na kung sinu-sino po kayo..di ko lang muna babanggitin ngayon kasi nakakahiya pa ang output ko..kasi hindi ko masyadong binigyan ng atensiyon ang design..(excited kasi magrender,ehe)...at very limited ang capacity ng lappy ko at sunog na rin pati balbas ko for this output pa lang.
Maraming salamat sa CGP community..sa mga tutorials at guidance at lalong-lalo na sa Dios. Mabuhay ang CGP! Godbless!


1st FINAL OUTPUT (RAW IMAGE): max+vray+hdri+ps. Posted for comparison only..hindi ko lang ipinost dati kasi nahihiya ako din hesitant din me magtanong(mababaw kasi tanong ko,eh..better search lang muna here)..640x480 nga lang size nito kasi di pa optimized..ang ginawa ko eh continue tambay dito..So ito naman 2nd try ko which i posted na nga.


2nd FINAL OUTPUT: max+vray+hdri+ps., pasensya na po more than 200KB pala na-upload ko dati, nag-focus po kasi ako sa quality @ 60 sa PS..not realizing KB's..sorry po for violating the rules.


3rd FINAL OUTPUT: max+vray+hdri+ps., again sorry po for the big files.i'm trying to follow the rules..actually i suggested those 'pop-up reminder".my bad

Note: I compressed my image to minimized my post.(dami na kasi text,ehe).
Thank's po sa mga dumaan..ia-update ko po ito as per your comments.
I think puede na ako magpa-HELP.


UPDATE: Updated as per comments+AO+motion blur...konting improvement lang..mahirap po talaga magpraktis pag mabagal ang rig.Maraming salamat sa lahat ng tumulong at mga tutulong pa...mabuhay po kayo!Godbless CGP!

Cnc's are very much welcome po...TIA! Godbless CGP!

nice design ito Arki Brodger and ok ito for a first post!!!!

Looks good... Align your verticals sir... The polycarb should be on top of the trellis not the other way around, usually that is... See those marks between your trellis & polycarb? Place a gap in there kahit maliit lang... Coconuts yung sa harap sir, look for palm trees, pag wala kang nahanap PM me (pero maghanap ka muna)...
Yun lang ata, won't go into design kase subjective yan...
Good work po sir Brodger...

nice start po sir. follow sir cloud's advice about sa trellis. add ko lang po.
-parang naipit po yung bence natin dun sa coconut/palm tree.
-i think nasobrahan po sa sharpness.

ganda po ng stone cladding.

cloud20 wrote:Looks good... Align your verticals sir... The polycarb should be on top of the trellis not the other way around, usually that is... See those marks between your trellis & polycarb? Place a gap in there kahit maliit lang... Coconuts yung sa harap sir, look for palm trees, pag wala kang nahanap PM me (pero maghanap ka muna)...
Yun lang ata, won't go into design kase subjective yan...
Good work po sir Brodger...

Maraming salamat Master Cloud sa pagsilip! medyo sinadya ko po verticals para my drama kaunti..very flat po kasi.sa trellis..try to make ng kakaiba,ehe..trellis in bet. 2 polycarbonates yung sa baba naka-fastened & bolt sa trellis,hehe.sa marks..ganun pala yun,kaya pala..dapat my gap. Sa palm tree master..di ako makahanap,eh.hehe..noted po lahat ito! galing! Godbless and more power po master Cloud!

Parang baliktad nga yung polycarbonate sa trellis, . Add pa ng exterior lighting, try garden and wall lamp. Goodluck sir!

jheteg wrote:nice start po sir. follow sir cloud's advice about sa trellis. add ko lang po.
-parang naipit po yung bence natin dun sa coconut/palm tree.
-i think nasobrahan po sa sharpness.

ganda po ng stone cladding.

Medyo masikip nga po..hehe..actually 2x sharpen yan..para mas mapansin pagka-sharp at test ko na din paano lalabas sa monitor ng iba..bago lang din sa PS eh..salamat po at nagustuhan niyo Sir Jheteg!

mejo reflective masyado polycarb mo gamit ka lang ng standard material and lessen mo ang opactiy then under sa maps nya you choose bump and find a bump material for the polycarb , pero ayus na ito youve come a long way na ilang post na lang at matindi ka na ! ikaw pa ha ha ha good job

1. Round Pipe in front only supports the the three wood trellace, and their are 4

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ARIST wrote:Parang baliktad nga yung polycarbonate sa trellis, . Add pa ng exterior lighting, try garden and wall lamp. Goodluck sir!

Thank's po sa pagdaan sir Arist! add ko pa yung ibang plants niyo po..try ko din exterior lighting..naghahagilap pa po,hehe..inaalalayan ko lang po lappy ko,hehe..thank's sa mga tut's dito na-optimized ko kahit papaano. mabuhay po kayo!

3dpjumong2007 wrote:mejo reflective masyado polycarb mo gamit ka lang ng standard material and lessen mo ang opactiy then under sa maps nya you choose bump and find a bump material for the polycarb , pero ayus na ito youve come a long way na ilang post na lang at matindi ka na ! ikaw pa ha ha ha good job

Noted po lahat Master! try ko lang dito lahat(maliban sa entourage at yung bench)from scratch para malaman ko kung kaya ko sa 3Dmax+vray at capacity ng rig ko.loobin sana mag-improve pa..maraming salamat po sa tulong niyo Sir Alfred!Godbless po and more power!

Ayos awa tulong ng Dios... Brother nice design, for the fisrtime nakagawa din you...i pagpatuloy nyo lang po...Galing>>okay TOL...Practice lang lagi....

spykrite wrote:nice design ito Arki Brodger and ok ito for a first post!!!!

Salamat sa pagdaan bro!..pacensya na late response,ehe...niresponse na kasi kita personal eh..hehe kaya nakalimutan ko dito..hahaha..tambay lang tayo dito wag lang mahuhuli ni bossing,nyehehe! Godbless!

aesonck wrote:1. Round Pipe in front only supports the the three wood trellace, and their are 4

Thank's for the comment Sir! actually it can stand without the post..it is supported by the polycarbonate above the trellis and cantilvered with beam..Just i want something to apply stainless or chrome material..but i agree sir..it must be..hehe.Godbless sir!

Edwin wrote:Ayos awa tulong ng Dios... Brother nice design, for the fisrtime nakagawa din you...i pagpatuloy nyo lang po...Galing>>okay TOL...Practice lang lagi....

Maraming salamat sa pagdaan bro! dito na nga ako nakitira bro eh..di lang tambay,ehe..nagbabakasakali matuto,hehe..salamat din sa Dios bro sa iyong suporta.ingatan nawa tayo ng panginoon at pagpalain pa.

sir brodger ang galing po..post more pa po...ok po yung lighting sir,, nice..

chymera14 wrote:sir brodger ang galing po..post more pa po...ok po yung lighting sir,, nice..

Salamat po Sir Chymera at nagustuhan niyo po! salamat sa pagdaan..need ko sana comment mo for improvement eh,hehehe..anyhow..thank's sa compliments at sa help niyo po..Mabuhay po kayo!

Ayun o sa wakas nagpost ka din bro wag ng mahiya improving ng lighting, ok yung banat mo sa first image practice lang ng practice para gumaling try mo din yung HDRi bro

nice rendering sir

WashburN wrote:Ayun o sa wakas nagpost ka din bro wag ng mahiya improving ng lighting, ok yung banat mo sa first image practice lang ng practice para gumaling try mo din yung HDRi bro

salamat sa pagdaan bro! oo nga sa wakas,hehe..ano first image?yung dark pa?ba't parang na-delete yata 1st image ko..kanina sa ofis ko pa yun ah,hehe..o mahina lang tlaga net dito sa bahay. naka-hdri na yan bro..check ko pa ulit set-up ko,hehe.Godbless!

johnolive100 wrote:nice rendering sir

Thank's po sa pagsilip Sir! Godbless po!

ganda sir.....simple pero astig....

bhiboybanal wrote:ganda sir.....simple pero astig....

Thank's po sir at nagustuhan niyo po!nangangapa pa po,eh..hehe

OT: nice avatar sir!

very nice rendering sir Brodger!