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Post by s0ft Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:21 pm

sana po aus lng ito. first time with vray exterior. di ko po alam kungb akit yellowish siya, kindly help pls. paki c and c na rin po para maimprove. salamat po.

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eto po ang update ko sa lahat ng comments nio., pa c and c na lang po ulit for more skill development. thanks mga master 2thumbsup

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Post by alben06 Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:38 pm

hello sir Smile ok naman yung render. at nice din ang output ambience.

-sir ask lang po, grass po talaga ang parking area ng car?
-nagsobra po yata ang height nang door kung i-compare sa heights ng windows. mejo malaki tingnan
-wala po gutter or hindi visible ang gutter sa back part na roof
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Post by s0ft Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:43 pm

alben06 wrote:hello sir Smile ok naman yung render. at nice din ang output ambience.

-sir ask lang po, grass po talaga ang parking area ng car?
-nagsobra po yata ang height nang door kung i-compare sa heights ng windows. mejo malaki tingnan
-wala po gutter or hindi visible ang gutter sa likod back part na roof

-opo nga anu. napalaki ung door. i update ko na lang po.
-may gutter po siya kaso mukha naman napaliit.

i think i should focus in proportioning sa elements ng bahay.
thanks po. wave
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Post by aces Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:53 pm

sir ayosin lang po ang angle nang camera, naka birds eye kasi, din for me i don't the facade.. nalito lng ako sa facade mo my trellis while may nakapatong na roof.. hintayin nalang natin ang ibang comment.. tambay lang dito sir para madami kang matutonan..
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Post by Bosepvance Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:53 pm

sir anung gamit mong software?
imho lang po sir.
1. yung building mo nakalutang. baba mo kunti
2. pag gumagawa ka ng irregulaar design, make it sure na generally balance pa rin siyang tignan kahit irregular pa siya.
3. may lumalabas na light eaves mo sa right part. baka may open part dian at nakalight yung loob ng house mo.
4. railing mo masyadong payat. lakihan mo pa.
5. lower your camera angle. kung wala ka naman ipapakita sa roof mo its not necessary na mag semi birds eye view ka. para lang sa complex projects yan.

pag nagpraktis ka bro, gawin mo na siyang scaled at medyo makatutuhanan para mas mavisualize mo yung ginagawa mo. more practice pa and reading. tambay ka lang dito sa cgp daming tutulong sa iyo dito.... good luck!
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Post by s0ft Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:58 am

aces wrote:sir ayosin lang po ang angle nang camera, naka birds eye kasi, din for me i don't the facade.. nalito lng ako sa facade mo my trellis while may nakapatong na roof.. hintayin nalang natin ang ibang comment.. tambay lang dito sir para madami kang matutonan..

Bosepvance wrote:sir anung gamit mong software?
imho lang po sir.
1. yung building mo nakalutang. baba mo kunti
2. pag gumagawa ka ng irregulaar design, make it sure na generally balance pa rin siyang tignan kahit irregular pa siya.
3. may lumalabas na light eaves mo sa right part. baka may open part dian at nakalight yung loob ng house mo.
4. railing mo masyadong payat. lakihan mo pa.
5. lower your camera angle. kung wala ka naman ipapakita sa roof mo its not necessary na mag semi birds eye view ka. para lang sa complex projects yan.

pag nagpraktis ka bro, gawin mo na siyang scaled at medyo makatutuhanan para mas mavisualize mo yung ginagawa mo. more practice pa and reading. tambay ka lang dito sa cgp daming tutulong sa iyo dito.... good luck!

noted po mga master. eto na po at na update ko na. salamat po ulit. buttrock
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Post by bokkins Tue Aug 10, 2010 8:22 am

Take note... Sa sobrang detalyado ng tuyong dahon mo sa road at mga trees mo na background, super obvious naman ang pagka-plain ng bahay mo. In conclusion, hindi effective ang presentation style na ganito.

Either, tanggalin mo ang tuyong dahon, or idetalye mo pa ang bahay.


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Post by s0ft Tue Aug 10, 2010 10:15 am

bokkins wrote:Take note... Sa sobrang detalyado ng tuyong dahon mo sa road at mga trees mo na background, super obvious naman ang pagka-plain ng bahay mo. In conclusion, hindi effective ang presentation style na ganito.

Either, tanggalin mo ang tuyong dahon, or idetalye mo pa ang bahay.



salamat po sa pagdaan sir bokkins, ok po. noted po iyan.ngayung nasabi niyo po iyan, parang nawalan nga po ng emphasis ang structure. salamat po.
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