prelim plate

good morning cgpians... share ko lang po itang prelim plate ko.. Community in Public Design..rush lang po ito kaya hindi na masyado naayos...4 days lang preparation.. this are some of my structures that i have made... c&c's nalang po mga masters para sa improvement.. done in su+vray+ps.. thanks!

commercial/apartment


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duplex


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two storey


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bro...
modeling and rendering ok na..
kulang lang sa composition bro.,
and some camera angles..

ung bike sa 2nd image out of proportion..

Goodluck and congrats sa prelim plates..

nice work sir....

kieko wrote:bro...
modeling and rendering ok na..
kulang lang sa composition bro.,
and some camera angles..

ung bike sa 2nd image out of proportion..

Goodluck and congrats sa prelim plates..

ok kuya frankie..ayusin ko nalang mga camera angles..ang hirap kase sa su...
thanks sa mga comments..

allnem wrote:nice work sir....

thanks ma'am..!

- camera angles a bit off

1st image
- cam mataas, eye level cam lang
- better road map
- crop mo ung sides ng image
- lighting is ok

2nd image
- grain ng wood sa gate.dapat horizontal
- grass is too dark
- better map for the carport & road
- e-elevate mo pa yung sidewalk from the road
- cam..check vertical shift,,,pero hindi naman necessary..pero i think sa mga ganitong type,mas ok kung naka straight ang verticals.
- alisin ang bike

3rd image
- same comment about sa cam verticals
- base sa bg..dapat nasa likod na ang lightsource,
- same comment sa sidewalk and sa road map
- alisin ang trash bin at ang mailbox
- crop mo image sa bandang right side

noted po sir jarul.. ill try to fix it next time... thanks for the c&c's.. this will help me a lot...thanks again..

1st image ok sa akin... then the rest.. like the comment of sir jarul un lng sir !

valiant_13 wrote:good morning cgpians... share ko lang po itang prelim plate ko.. Community in Public Design..rush lang po ito kaya hindi na masyado naayos...4 days lang preparation.. this are some of my structures that i have made... c&c's nalang po mga masters para sa improvement.. done in su+vray+ps.. thanks!

This is considered as a rush work otherwise it would be much better if you did it completely....hope sir the one you submitted is not rushed work otherwise if you present this to your client or on your prelim plate this might not be approved by the client nor passed your subject by your professor if your reason is "rushed work in 4 days"....anyway CGP is not rushing us to post our works... hope you got my point....comments were said and waiting for your updated one ( yung submitted prelim plate )......

benj.arki wrote:1st image ok sa akin... then the rest.. like the comment of sir jarul un lng sir !

thanks sir...

archi_ram wrote:

valiant_13 wrote:good morning cgpians... share ko lang po itang prelim plate ko.. Community in Public Design..rush lang po ito kaya hindi na masyado naayos...4 days lang preparation.. this are some of my structures that i have made... c&c's nalang po mga masters para sa improvement.. done in su+vray+ps.. thanks!

This is considered as a rush work otherwise it would be much better if you did it completely....hope sir the one you submitted is not rushed work otherwise if you present this to your client or on your prelim plate this might not be approved by the client nor passed your subject by your professor if your reason is "rushed work in 4 days"....anyway CGP is not rushing us to post our works... hope you got my point....comments were said and waiting for your updated one ( yung submitted prelim plate )......

shinishare ko lang po mga nagawa ko...the plate was given one week before the submission.. i have to do the the floor plans, elevations and site plan that's why it took only four days to finish all this perspectives..as of now.. plate was approved by my instructor today... just want to share this and have some c&c's for me to know how to enhance this works... sorry if i wasn't able to satisfy you with my works..thanks for dropping by..

tama si bro jarul,,, sundin mo lang mga sinabi nya,,,

arkitrix wrote:tama si bro jarul,,, sundin mo lang mga sinabi nya,,,

opo sir.. thanks sa pagdaan...

-nice work... update mo nalang sir according sa mga comment..

deosrock wrote:-nice work... update mo nalang sir according sa mga comment..

thanks sir... update ko nalang po..thanks sa pagdaan..