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Post by averoez Wed Jul 28, 2010 3:14 pm

here is a wip living room, not yet sastified with floor, furnishing, ...
just a 1st try :
living room (africa mood) Africa

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Post by Zoro_Architecture Wed Jul 28, 2010 3:35 pm

nice render and visual sir... for me lang po ung BG medyo mataas ang intensity ng sun for the BG...the rest very nice... thumbsup
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Post by averoez Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:38 pm

thx for ur comment, here is a 1st update :
living room (africa mood) Africa2

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Post by toy28 Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:00 pm

hi sir. bg lang din po yung comment ko. regarding sa 1st image. parang naging wallpaper yung background eh, imho lang.

but the rendering is good. keep it up sir.
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Post by averoez Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:04 pm

thx for ur comment, plz could you translate the non english part :-/

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Post by qcksilver Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:04 am

nice mood sir averoez, just remind you about the forum rules about using txtspeak or not completing the words properly, please the forum rules first,
here's the link, https://cgpinoy.forumtl.com/forum-posting-rules-f1/cgp-does-not-allow-text-speak-dialects-all-caps-jejemons-t1237.htm , anyway the render is nice maybe need more African accessories, right now the painting is the only African style i see (correct me i'm wrong), better camera angle would be nice too.
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Post by zdesign Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:14 am

sorry to other members they don't know your nationality...
...any way nice start, the intensity of sun and the BG is not good its better to find good BG showing sun coming from left.
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Post by korngrain69 Thu Jul 29, 2010 1:02 am

maybe add some light on your ceiling.
those low table looks like marble finish.
can you please add more views?
thats all, overall its very nice! keep it up!
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Post by averoez Thu Jul 29, 2010 1:09 am

Thanks to everyone for your comments, I'll try to improve it accordingly

(btw, sorry txtspeak)

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Post by allnem Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:08 am

good work sir thumbsup
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Post by averoez Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:55 am

I finally change the mood of the scene, here is the update :
living room (africa mood) Clt6512b

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Post by penzlake21 Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:05 am

nice update dude, looks good only thing is that the angle of your BG doesn't match your interior horizon. Keep it up! thumbsup
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Post by averoez Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:10 am

penzlake21 wrote:nice update dude, looks good only thing is that the angle of your BG doesn't match your interior horizon. Keep it up! thumbsup
I agree with the BG, don't know how to fix that or find good BG for interior scene Neutral

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Post by anmarj1258 Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:54 pm

Nice render po! comment lang sa concept, the only thing african in your interior is the painting itself, it would be more outstanding if you will insert some african patterns on your throw pillows. For the updated image im not lovin your kiwi picture its odd. Keep posting! thumbsup
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Post by lowellflores Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:22 pm

Sir what work flow you used, 3dmax,sketch up,or other software?
and about the African mood, the recent update I seem no african mood and design present in your scene and the background doesn't match the horizontal view.
put some reflection and glossiness to your wood floor
I think your very good in this Sir.
waiting for the update 2thumbsup
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Post by averoez Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:00 am

Hi Everyone, thanks for your comments, it helps me to improve and here my latest version (which is not anymore an african mood Surprised ):
living room (africa mood) Clt6512final2


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Post by qcksilver Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:46 am

weehh almost bro, just make your bg a little brighter, are you using vray light for your bg? i think vray light it's better to use it
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