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Post by eisa Tue Mar 10, 2009 11:25 pm

praktis lang po mga masters and cgpips...
constructive comments and critiques nman po ulit.

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Post by darwinzzkie Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:14 am

add BG lang siguro sir.
i like your wood material. 2thumbsup
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Post by jlrgn73 Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:21 am

Sir ganda ng pasok ng sun nyo...vray sun po ba ito?...agree with darwinzzkie..BG lang...at konting tweak po sa curtain...the rest vongga nah...
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Post by vamp_lestat Wed Mar 11, 2009 6:51 am

for me lighting is good. composition and sharpness is also very great. curious lang ako dun sa wall na stones? is that a wall paper or stones talga? too relective kasi, nakakalito lang. Smile
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Post by jarul Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:05 am

ganda ng lighting po ser / maam?
pangit kung wallpaper yang stones,,i thnk stone tlga yan,kinulang lng ng dsplcement and nalgayn ng reflction..
parts near the wndow,overbright,
wala po bang lyts sa ceil kahit sa mga kanto2 lng?
nasa anong level po na eto?2nd flr,3rd pataas?
lagay k ng elemente sa bg like trees or anything ncesary para madetrmin kung anong level..
ung tv,dapt emit sya ng lyt,,looks painting kac eh,,
mapping sa curtain..
pasok nyo pa ung sunlight,para add drama na rin..
curtain rod mat din paki chek..
ngttka lng ako dun sa blak vertical line malapit sa stone sa 2st img..humiwalay kac.
imho lng po,,




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Post by aldrinv2 Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:59 am

Sir/Ma'am,,
Nice mood ng lighting. imho curtain maikli siya. Pinlight din pa-add sa ceiling mo along the plasma wall. The rest is ok. Keep on posting.
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Post by Alicecocoz Wed Mar 11, 2009 2:11 pm

Much has been said already. Maganda yung pasok ng light sa scene (Kelan ko kaya ma achieve ganito) Add lang po ng bumps sa wall na may stones, reduce the rflectivity. Smile
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Post by eisa Mon Mar 16, 2009 5:35 am

delayed reply...
stones po sir, na nasa loob ng glass
salamat po sa komento...

vamp_lestat wrote:for me lighting is good. composition and sharpness is also very great. curious lang ako dun sa wall na stones? is that a wall paper or stones talga? too relective kasi, nakakalito lang. Smile

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Post by eisa Mon Mar 16, 2009 5:37 am

maraming salamat po master/cgpips sa komento nyo.

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Post by alwin Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:00 am

IMHO lang is to tweak youre cam yun lang! superb ang dating!!
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Post by master_grayback Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:18 am

Sir chris nice rendering...and design

comment ko lang sir try to put some background image, wala ata materials ung frame ng window? try mo rin sir maglagay ng direct light sa bintana prang sinag ng araw.....
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Post by Muggz Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:29 am

fire place po ba yung nasa baba ng plasma?mas aastig pa po siguro kung me effects pa,,,wala na po akong masabi,,,i like the idea of putting stones inside the glass wall,,,the rest,, the best 2thumbsup
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Post by gilbs Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:59 am

sir sangayun ako sa mga comments nila, maganda yun scene para sa akin, kung mabago mo ito base sa mga comments mas magiging ok ang scene. IMHO try to put area rug i think malaki maidadagdag sa composition. nice one sir thumbsup
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Post by eisa Mon Mar 16, 2009 11:09 pm

salamat sa pag daan maestro...
kmusta trabaho?

master_grayback wrote:Sir chris nice rendering...and design

comment ko lang sir try to put some background image, wala ata materials ung frame ng window? try mo rin sir maglagay ng direct light sa bintana prang sinag ng araw.....

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Post by eisa Mon Mar 16, 2009 11:15 pm

dami komento sir, salamat salamat...
try ko po ulit e render considering all your comments...

salamat sa pag puna

jarul wrote:ganda ng lighting po ser / maam?
pangit kung wallpaper yang stones,,i thnk stone tlga yan,kinulang lng ng dsplcement and nalgayn ng reflction..
parts near the wndow,overbright,
wala po bang lyts sa ceil kahit sa mga kanto2 lng?
nasa anong level po na eto?2nd flr,3rd pataas?
lagay k ng elemente sa bg like trees or anything ncesary para madetrmin kung anong level..
ung tv,dapt emit sya ng lyt,,looks painting kac eh,,
mapping sa curtain..
pasok nyo pa ung sunlight,para add drama na rin..
curtain rod mat din paki chek..
ngttka lng ako dun sa blak vertical line malapit sa stone sa 2st img..humiwalay kac.
imho lng po,,




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