commercial building

mga bossing padaan lang po,.pasensya na nagmamadali kasi yung nagpagawa kaya isang view lang natapos ko.,paki comment nalang po,thanks in advance



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ang galing sir

-bg parang di bagay sa structure
-dapat eye level na lang yung camera mas maganda.. imho lang
-reflective ata sobra yung glass
-add billboards kasi commercial nman eh! imho lang ulit
good luck

-paki patay mo na lang mga ilaw mo sa ledge umaga naman eh!
-the rest nasabi na ni sir jhero, keep it up!
God bless!

Out of scale yung mga sasakyan(o yung building) nagmukhang masikip tagusan bang parking one way lang...?
But nice lighting bro.

-lagyan mo ng ramp ang entrance step for disable person.
-over bright your white mo..adjust mo kunte.
-hanap ka ng bg that fit to your structure.
-yong street light wag mong ilagay sa gitna.
good luck bro

kung wala ung billboard, more like a government building for me, based dun sa facade niya,but it's just for me anyway...try to provide some space for billboards gaya ng sabe ni sir jhero, lalo na sa harap to pick a glimpse and attract customers kung anu ba meron sa loob ng establishment...

galing sir..gusto ko yung combination mo ng color..light with darker color...nice galing din ng rendering mo sir.

Its always nice to divulge your workflow if your asking for comments. Right now you're asking your crits to be Nostradamuses in trying to divine how you came up with this. And thats asking too much. Anyways...

The design is an unfortunate mixture of classic & modern; an unholy matrimony so to speak. It's a very tough trick to carry out, if you pull it off you'll have a beautiful structure. If you don't you'll have an ugly one. Yours leans towards the latter. Your road looks painted on; that'd be costly. You have a small gap between your parking strips; some flora would've covered that up nicely since that wouldn't be motorcycle parking would it? commercial spaces usually have huge glass windows to show off whats going inside, you covered yours up with walls, and to make matters worse your walls are blank. The variety of cars favor the RPC group at the back part of your scene. Whereas the Mitsubishi group dominate the foreground. There's also something creepy about cars driving themselves. Fit for a B-movie I would say. Since you're so enamored at cruising the web,use some of that elan to build up your library. Time well spent I would say. If you wanna show off your IES skills do a proper nightscene. Right now its absurd. Someone here mentioned colors? My 3 year old niece can create fantastic color combinations; anyone can do that. You can have the best color combi ever, but it alone won't elevate your render from the mire whence it came from. And wheres the peeps? Is it National Stay At Your Homes Don't Enter The Commercial Building Day?

And lastly, its ProposeD...

nice sir... bitin lang sa images...hehe

thanks sa comment sir cloud tatandaan ko lahat ng sinabi mo .,pwedi pu bang magrequest?magpost naman po kayo ng work nyo para mainspired naman kami sayo kasi comment & comment lang ginagawa nyo walang post eh. thanks in advence:doublethu:

thanks sa comment mga master,kahit my negative comment ok lang,un lang ang way para matuto tyo.Thanks ulit

nice post sir acen...same comment as above....and by the way sir cloud if you don't mind i snatched one of your obra as per sir acen's request...just the link sir...
http://www.cgpinoy.org/architectural-f3/fort-santiago-residence-t10392.htm

keep posting sir, diyan tayo matututo...godbless!

cloud20 wrote:Its always nice to divulge your workflow if your asking for comments. Right now you're asking your crits to be Nostradamuses in trying to divine how you came up with this. And thats asking too much. Anyways...

The design is an unfortunate mixture of classic & modern; an unholy matrimony so to speak. It's a very tough trick to carry out, if you pull it off you'll have a beautiful structure. If you don't you'll have an ugly one. Yours leans towards the latter. Your road looks painted on; that'd be costly. You have a small gap between your parking strips; some flora would've covered that up nicely since that wouldn't be motorcycle parking would it? commercial spaces usually have huge glass windows to show off whats going inside, you covered yours up with walls, and to make matters worse your walls are blank. The variety of cars favor the RPC group at the back part of your scene. Whereas the Mitsubishi group dominate the foreground. There's also something creepy about cars driving themselves. Fit for a B-movie I would say. Since you're so enamored at cruising the web,use some of that elan to build up your library. Time well spent I would say. If you wanna show off your IES skills do a proper nightscene. Right now its absurd. Someone here mentioned colors? My 3 year old niece can create fantastic color combinations; anyone can do that. You can have the best color combi ever, but it alone won't elevate your render from the mire whence it came from. And wheres the peeps? Is it National Stay At Your Homes Don't Enter The Commercial Building Day?

And lastly, its ProposeD...

ditto... nothing more nothing less...

acen wrote:thanks sa comment mga master,kahit my negative comment ok lang,un lang ang way para matuto tyo.Thanks ulit

i dont see any negative comments here. just follow the advices that you think would make you better.

Sa akin okay na to sir...comment lang sa car walang driver nasa gitna ng driveway,hehe..although wala pa akong post kasi 2D lang work ko..try lang mag-3D,nyehehe..hopefully sooner..basa-basa lang muna.Keep sharing sir!konti na lang to!mabuhay ang CGP!