COMMERCIAL/RESIDENTIAL BUILDING

A pleasant day to everyone.... i just want to share this revised work of mine....please feel free to drop any inputs for improvements....

galing po ito sir. nice lighting.

The white mazda looks gargantuan (read huge/big). Like sir Roy always say, "the 3d peeps look like zombies amblin around". Especially the one about to bump into the red Honda. I'm not against 3d peeps really, but there are some with "dynamic" poses. Not zombie like. Stone mat doesn't convince me. Not too sure about the foreground shadows too; are they faked?...
This is revised from?... The original image would have helped in giving proper crits right now we might as well be looking at a "new" render, not a "revised" one...

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great image for me !

nice render po sir..keep posting..keep it up

nice render, neat design!!! galing sir!

Good clean render. The typical vray-template render.
But I have the same comment upon reading master cloud's words on the foreground shadows, i'd say i agree that they seem to be off. Unless you have 6-storey tall trees.
Thanks for sharing.

cloud20 wrote:The white mazda looks gargantuan (read huge/big). Like sir Roy always say, "the 3d peeps look like zombies amblin around". Especially the one about to bump into the red Honda. I'm not against 3d peeps really, but there are some with "dynamic" poses. Not zombie like. Stone mat doesn't convince me. Not too sure about the foreground shadows too; are they faked?...
This is revised from?... The original image would have helped in giving proper crits right now we might as well be looking at a "new" render, not a "revised" one...

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thanks for all your inputs bossing cloud...

No worries mate, I see you've updated yet again. Request ko sana keep the original images para di naman malito mga viewers kung ano pinaguusapan natin sir. May basehan ika nga. Much better stone mat; shadows a-ok; wala na siguro ako ma-crit...

Hmmm... leaves a lang siguro but thats nitpicking na...

Nice one sir.

way much better pero parang nagmukhang sedan na yung suv. napaliit masyado. great improvements

wow ang ganda ganda sir!

cloud20 wrote:No worries mate, I see you've updated yet again. Request ko sana keep the original images para di naman malito mga viewers kung ano pinaguusapan natin sir. May basehan ika nga. Much better stone mat; shadows a-ok; wala na siguro ako ma-crit...

Hmmm... leaves a lang siguro but thats nitpicking na...

Nice one sir.

thank you master cloud20.

jheteg wrote:way much better pero parang nagmukhang sedan na yung suv. napaliit masyado. great improvements

oo nga e hehehehehe pinapalitan ko nga ngayon bossing hehehehehe

eragasco wrote:wow ang ganda ganda sir!

thank you eragasco

tanggalin mo na lang tao sir,nasisisra tingin ko sa building e hihihi.

nice render naman e.

zdesign wrote:tanggalin mo na lang tao sir,nasisisra tingin ko sa building e hihihi.

nice render naman e.

ok i'll remove them next time.... ang lungkot kasi ng scene if walang people e.. any suggestions you might give me?

cloud20 wrote:The white mazda looks gargantuan (read huge/big). Like sir Roy always say, "the 3d peeps look like zombies amblin around". Especially the one about to bump into the red Honda. I'm not against 3d peeps really, but there are some with "dynamic" poses. Not zombie like. Stone mat doesn't convince me. Not too sure about the foreground shadows too; are they faked?...
This is revised from?... The original image would have helped in giving proper crits right now we might as well be looking at a "new" render, not a "revised" one...

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......cguro ang galing galing mo...

Budz wrote:

cloud20 wrote:The white mazda looks gargantuan (read huge/big). Like sir Roy always say, "the 3d peeps look like zombies amblin around". Especially the one about to bump into the red Honda. I'm not against 3d peeps really, but there are some with "dynamic" poses. Not zombie like. Stone mat doesn't convince me. Not too sure about the foreground shadows too; are they faked?...
This is revised from?... The original image would have helped in giving proper crits right now we might as well be looking at a "new" render, not a "revised" one...

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......cguro ang galing galing mo...

budz.... o lang naman ito... this feedback of master cloud inspired me to do better...